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all the best for ur exams and

CONGRATULATIONS for ur engagement...

u r starting new phase of ur life...may God bless u with all the happiness...

when u get time please update this one...
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Posted: 13 years ago
RECAP:::

Geet here is the address get some taxi or some thing and reach the site soon before sir gets angry...

Aadi sir' I am new to the city how can I found this address'

I don't know that'but try to be in the site with in half an hour'saying that aadi went on attending some business calls

#I Know geet you can't make it fast' and you are going to face this through out in KC with me... until---# she is ready to face the world for him ready to accept the truth that she loves him...


Part 7

Part 8


It was very hard for geet to find the place at last due to her determination she reached the spot in the exact time 30 mins plus 15mins..

maan who completed his work in the site and waiting eagerly for geet while talking to the KC staff his eyes where noticing the entrance to see the geet's appearance..

atlast she present there with her usual style by creating mess in the place any one known her can say that geet in the spot with the sounds and at first she pushed the cycle present near the gate and hits the car and then drop all the documents and files in her hand lately slipped while walking by hitting the stone at last bumped in the man near by maan...finally she ended in maan's arms...


for a while both lost there world and geet remain in his arms more than normal...where at a sound they both got back to normal and straighten them self...maan don't want to create any mess before his staffs and workers by talking to geet... he dragged her out of the place and pushed her in to his car front seat , he seated on the drivers seat and drove it faster..

after reaching some distance out of city traffic he started his conversation...

geet you are late...


Vo sir...

before she spoke he cute her off with his dominating voice..


i told you to be there in the site with in 30 mins you are late...by 15 mins..

Vo..mein...mein...


did you know that i don't like people coming late to my workplace..

Sir...vo mein..am new to this city and can't able to find the address...


that's not my problem miss.geet handa...you should be in time..

am sorry sir...

you know what geet... mistakes can't become right by the single word like this...

#mainly the hurt which you gave to my heart can't be healed by this sorry geet..#


she kept quite her favorite way of answering to the questions..

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sorry for the late and short update i hope you all like it...

i think some thing is better than nothing...


forgive me for all the silly mistake i try to update regular form now on...

hope fully another update now itself..


keep on hitting like and giving comments..


part 9 just below this



Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago


Part 8 JUST ABOVE THIS..
Part 9


why this happening always to me? what i did babaji?

geet what happen now and why murmuring like this..and what you doing here till now..

pinky dont make me more angry ok... all of sudden maan sir asked me to type this letter and asked me to stay till he completes his work..

But why geet all the important project is completed and only one project is there that noida wala project that need to be complete in the end of this week only then why sir is working today...

geet murmured under her breath something...

aadi sir apko patha heyna maan sir don't like keeping pending work so might have thought to complete that work today...

haan but pinky..

geet cut before aadi complete his words..
aadi sir and pinky I will leave when sir ask me to...

But geet you are new to the city and how--

its OK pinky i will manage...

are you sure geet?..

haan...

then fine...pinky lets leave... take care geet...

by bidding bye both left KC...

Maan who is noticing this behind the blinds is now called geet..

hello...
If you completed your chit chat with your friends can we do some work ...
come to my cabin..
ji?...
geet i said come to my cabin right now...

maan made a geet stay in office for long time by finding mistakes in her work and also make her to redo the same work...

he just want some private time with her alone so he made all the excuses to spend some time with her in office so he asked her to stay in office till he completes the work which is not very necessary to complete now
geet knows maan is making some simple excuse to make her stay longer gets irritated when maan rejected her document for the 15th time and ask her to correct the mistakes and retype the same document again...


she gets irritated and this time she can't able to control her anger so she end up in showing it in front of him..

sir can you please tell me what is the exact problem in this document..

he simply took his head out from laptop and seen her and said....i told na geet you have to redo this again..

with out knowing the exact problem how could i correct and redo it sir..
and more over i had done the process for 15 times and you still didn't find it perfect and not satisfied so if you tell the exact problem and mistakes i will correct my self and will give the perfect file...

he just gave a simple secrete smile as a reply which didn't go unnoticed by geet...

she got more angry now and continued...

Its getting late for me sir... if you said the exact mistake i correct the file and leave else i will do it tomorrow sir...

Getting late miss.geet did you remember you came late to office today and also to the site... coming late to office and wishing to go home so soon..stay and correct this file and then you can leave...

sorry sir i can't...i have to go home now...saying that she closed her note pad and pen and about to move out..

he hold her hand and pulled her closer to him...

you can't just go away like this geet...
am not your slave or servant sir am just your employee..and i can go out when ever i can...

maan left her hand seeing her arrogant nature moved around table and sit in his chair with attitude and said..
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But can't go out when you have some important work miss.geet..when your boss is asking you to complete the remaining work...and haan if you really want to go you can leave your job and go...


he knows that how important the job is for her and also know she is not ready to leave job now..

get is confused she can't go out now as she knows about maan's arrogance..she took a deep breath relaxed her self and said...
my family will be waiting for me..i have to go now else they will be panic..

maan pushed the phone in front of her...she remain confused and stand still..

you can call and inform them that you have work in office over time and will be home in morning..

she is panic hearing his words...

maan why you doing this?enough is enough stop all this nonsense i know there is no work for you here and also the work am doing is not necessary or any urgent work...

then why you want me to stay long what is this? i know this is not official thing you are taking revenge on me for your personal reason isn't?

his trade mark smile again.which is not pleasing geet and makes her more irritate...
ok fine if you want to punish me for every thing i did then its fine..
tell it straight what i have to do now..well if I stay here till morning its fine or else i have to sleep with you too that's the reason behind making me stay isn't?


maan felt like some one some one slapped harder in his cheeks hearing to those words from geet...he don't want to hear such harsh words form geet absolutely not form his geet whom he loves to the core...


Gee...eet.. he roared like the lion in the jungle...

geet what makes you to think like that? did you think am ---doing all this just to satisfy my physical desire..


his voice cracked and he don't want to make more conversation now so simply calmed him self..now instead of acting in the situation as an old lover maan he thought its better to act as her boss..

geet get those files which you prepared and come to conference room..
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There he personally designed some thing in the chart he opened it and placed it in front of her..its my dream project a house mine and dadi's dreams house which we planned before 5 years and due to some reason we can't complete it...and i think you still remember about this...right?

she just nodded her head...

next month is dadi's KC's 7 th annual meet which is most important for both of us so i thought to gift her this on that day...i don't want to share this information to any one else don't want to leak this information i want this to be surprise for dadi..that's why i asked you to stay to help me in this project...that's the main reason i asked you to stay nothing else is in my mind...

she didn't say any thing and simply said...
how can i help you sir?
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both started there work and work for long time with out any conversation in between at some times they got into eye lock and again they started there work...maan is lost in simple gestures done by geet while working and geet lost her self when ever he comes close to her...


there work complete and they both designed the perfect house the dream house which maan used to talk about a lot while in college geet who knows the exact details of how he wished it should be and also knows how much important that is to him... she took more time to make it perfect she cared about all simple things too...

when they complete she looked at time its almost the morning...and also there is a heavy rain and thunder outside...after finishing the file she handled the design to maan and about to leave there is a sudden power cut...which makes the room very dark all of sudden..

maan who knows geet is scared about dark waits for her to scream instead she hold his arms more tightly


geet relax light will come now... after he spoke she realaized how close she is with him an immediately lose her grip on him and about to move back where she about to slip and maan catch her in his strong arms..don't move geet else you will fall...wait till light comes...

he immediately dialed the security number and asked her to switch on generator...

when he heard the news that generator is not working he shouted at them
what you are all doing here?with out noticing that its repair try some thing soon call some one and make it work right now...

geet wait i will do some thing...before he moves she took her bag and took out her matches and candle and lit it...
he questioned her through his eyes

i used to afraid of darkness so i always keep them along with me always..

nice..

there is a heavy thunder sound and rain out side...


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Precap::: some revelation of the past by geet


Hi all... how you all doing???
i think i make it some what big update.
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i hope you all like this... give your valuable comments please

forgive me for my silly mistakes...


Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful update...

its bad...geet shouldnt tell maan like dis...

thank u sooo much fr such a lovely update...

really loved it...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 13 years ago
VERY NICE. CONTINUE SOON DEAR.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome story

read it in one shot

what is geet's past ? please update soon and pm me

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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 9 previous page
part 10


Its heavily raining outside and no power in side...

Geet went near window and started enjoy seeing the rain pour maan who sit simply in his chair with his arms resting in his cheeks and seeing the beautiful scene in front of him..geet is enjoying rain and maan is enjoying his beautiful geet in front of him with the very little light emitted by candle...

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maan get up from his chair and went near geet..and have a hold of her hand into his


geet did you know how much i missed you these days...

if i came to know that before you will leave me like this one day i wont have let you go away from my embrace...ever...

did you have any idea geet...how hard for me to live with out you...

i warn you geet here after don't even try to move away from me else----..
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with a great thud of thunder sound maan awake from his dream...
still geet in the same place near window and maan in his seat...

maan went near geet...and stand across her near the other end of the window...while seeing outside the window he asked..

you like rain a lot na geet...

hmm...

and love to play under rain isn't?

did you remember that yet?.you know .how meera and I used to play in rain those days..where as you always hide your self under roof while raining...
with a smile he replied...
you both are really crazy...at that time...

hmmm...missing those days...waise... how is meera?

yeah she's great settled in canda and living happily as a good home maker...in her terms " a good marriage material"...

that's sounds great...

how are you geet?
geet turned and looked in his eyes this is not the question only from his mouth but from his heart which is visible in his eyes..
real concern
real care and
real love which she can't avoid
which she can't neglect


she just nodes as fine nothing else she can't say any thing more than that will be surely is a lie...

how is all in your family geet and how is your over protective brother let you to go for job...

briji ji is in jail he is arrested for chunney's murder case and after that every thing changed in our life ... we can't able to stay more in that village so we all relocate to amirtasar... and darji's is in hospital due heat problem... me came to Delhi to get job to give some financial support to my family...

after a moment she asked ...

How is dadi ma?

yeah fine...

with a smile she asked..how is your wife have any kids?

#how easy for her to bring that smile in her face while asking this.. how can she think that am married where am still here waiting for her waiting for her to come back in my life...#

am still waiting geet.. waiting for you to change your decision..
Why you left me geet?

again her favorite way of answering... silence..and this time she can't keep silent for more time so another way is to divert the topic...

I think i have to leave...

geet its heavily raining after rain stops i will drop you in your home...

woh...
before she completes he cut her

geet go and take rest for a while...i will drop you..

geet who knows very well he is very determinant cant say another word and laid in the couch near by...

maan who is seated in the chair opposite to her couch and rested his neck comfortably to sleep while seeing her face he thought...

#you can change the topic geet but not me...i wont leave you geet...definitely not this time in one way or other you have to answer me geet#...


while thinking he drove off to sleep but not geet...

#sorry maan again i have to lie... i know this is not the first lie am telling to you...forget me maan..don't wait for me am not the perfect match for you go ahead in your life chose the best girl for you ...move ahead in life...
Don't wait for me maan please Don't wait for me...#


while even thinking about maan forgetting her brought tears in to her eyes her eye lids are wet and she don't even care to wipe those tears she thinks she deserve this tears for making entry in maan's life...for making him go mad behind her like this ...for making his life go worse more and more...she knows she is responsible for this but yet she can't help...

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precap::maan's anger...


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Edited by nishha - 13 years ago

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