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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update..
hmm getting really interesting..
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for your love and support dear friends. Here is the next update do tell me what do u feel about this new FF I would love to know ur suggestions
love-Piya
PART 3

Dev: Hello Amrita kaisi hai aap? [Hello Amrita how r u?]

Amrita: Agar ab tak theek nahi thi toh ab tabiyat zarur perfect ho gayi hogi kyunki aaj humare party mein ek bahut hi special guest aaye hai jinse milne k liye kitne dino se hum aakhein bhichaye baithe the [If I was not fine before then I have to admit that I am in the pink of my health right now as a special guest has arrived in my party ]

Maan: Ab kya kare Amrita MSK ka jadu hi aisa hai koi bhi ladki usse bach nahi sakthi [What to do Amrita it is simply the magic of MSK no girl can resist his charm]

Geet: Badi galatfaimi paal rakhi hai apne baare mein Mr.Khurana [You have a lot of misconceptions about yourself Mr. Khurana]

Maan: Ab ye toh apni apni soch hai young lady ab yaha pe kafi ladko ne tumse aisa kuch kaha hoga jisse k tumhe bhi khud k baare mein kafi galatfami ho gayi hogi [It is individual thinking young lady I am sure u might also b having some false impression about yourself after listening to some words from the boys]

Geet: Aap kehna kya chahthe hai? [What r u trying to suggest?]

Maan: Main seedhi baat karne mein vishwas raktha hoon yaha kafi ladko ne tumhe kaha hoga k tum khoobsurat lag rahi ho par afsoos ye baat sach nahi hai [I believe in straightforward talks I am sure many of the guys must have praised ur beauty but I am afraid this is not the truth]

Geet: O really kya main aapko khoobsurat nahi lagti? [O really don't u think I am beautiful?]

Maan: Itna toh mujhe pata hai k tum batsurat nahi ho par haan saath hi saath ye baat bhi kehna chahunga k tum itni bhi khoobsurat nahi k main tumhari taareef kar pau [I won't say that u look ugly but I don't find your beauty to be praiseworthy atleast I am not the ordinary man who would admire your beauty]

Geet: Sahi kaha aapne mujhe bhi aap uss layak nahi lage k aap meri taareef kar pau Geet ki taareef koi bhi aira gaira nahi kar saktha Geet ki taaref karne k liye bhi saamnewale ko uski izazat leni padthi hai [U r right, by the way let me tell u even I don't find you worthy enough to praise my beauty as it is not every useless fellow can praise me as the one who wants to admire me should first take Geet's permission before going ahead]

Maan: Hmm'Geet nice name

Geet: I am sorry Mr. Khurana I can't give u the same compliment as I don't like ur name

Maan: Sorry bolne ki zarurat nahi hai waise bhi ye naam tum jaisi ordinary ladki ko impress karne k liye nahi hai [Oh u need not be sorry this name is not for impressing an ordinary girl like u]

Geet: ordinary hoon ya extraordinary ye aap pehli mulakat mein decide nahi kar sakthe I hope itna dimag toh aapke paas hona hi chahiye afterall itna bada business empire k maalik hai aap [Ordinary or extraordinary u can't judge a person by a single meeting I hope u must know these small things after all u r the owner of such a big empire]

Maan: Oh kahi tum indirectly mujhe date karne ka khwab toh nahi dekh rahi? [Oh does that mean that u r dreaming of dating me?]

Geet: Aap Khurana Constructions k maalik zarur honge par aapki itni aukaad nahi k aap Geet ko date kar sako aur Geet k paas itna faltu waqt nahi k wo aapke saath date pe jaane k baare sochkar apna waqt barbaad kare [ U might be the owner of KC but u stand no chance to date Geet as it is my time is precious enough I can't waste my time on dreaming to go on a date with u]

Maan: Interesting so kya khayal hai kya hum eek dusre se dubara milna chahiye? [Interesting so what do u feel should we meet each other again?]

Geet: Main puri koshish karungi k aisa mauka dubara na aaye [I will try my level best that such a situation never arises]

Maan: Great so let us celebrate our first and last meeting

Geet: I will have coke

Maan: Let me help u

Geet and Maan excused themselves and go to the drinks counter

Maan buys a drink for himself and gets a coke for Geet

Dev and Amrita were totally confused but both of them could not voice their dilemma right now

Geet and Maan were busy talking or rather they were busy in making each other understand that they are least bothered about each other

After some time

Maan: Ok Geet I hope we don't meet again

Geet: Same here Maan as it is I did not enjoy your company it was so boring

Maan: I agree. Good bye Geet I would never love to see your face again

Geet: Same here. Good bye

Maan and Dev inform Amrita and leave the party

As soon as Maan and Dev go Amrita rushes to Geet

Amrita: Ye kya paagalpan hai Geet tumne toh pehli mulakat ko hi aakhri mulakat bana diya [R u crazy Geet u have converted this first meeting into the last one]

Geet: Ye aapse kisne keh diya infact abhi toh mulakato ka silsila shuru honewala hai [U r wrong Mam infact according to me this is the starting of several such meetings]

Amrita: What rubbish tumne MSK ko bhav nahi diya aur tumhe lagta hai k wo tumse dubara milna pasand karega [What rubbish u ignored him completely and u think that he would love to meet u again]

Geet: Yahi toh game ka first rule tha Mam [This was the first rule of my game]

Amrita: Rule kaisa rule? [What rule r u talking about?]

Geet: Iss game ka first rule hai I for Ignore uss MSK mein koi baat toh zarur hai par aaj pehli baar usse ek aisi ladki mili hai jispar uska jaadu nahi chala wo ek baar toh zarur sochega k uska jadu uss ladki par kyun nahi chala aur ye pata karne k liye usse mujhe dubara milna hoga [The first rule of this game is I for Ignore. There is certainly something in MSK but today for the first time in his life he met a girl who ignored him completely he will surely think why his charm failed to impress me and to find out the answer he has to meet me again]

Amrita: Iska matlab [This means]

Geet: Iska matlab ye hai Mam k khel ki shuruwat ho chuki hai the game has begun [It is simple Mam the game has already begun]

Geet: (thinking) I have to admit Maan u r different

Same time

Dev: Ye kya bevakufi hai Maan tune toh sab khatm kar diya [What type of behaviour was this Maan u have ruined everything]

Maan: Aisa kyun keh raha hai tu? [Why r u speaking like this?]

Dev: Tune Geet ki khoobsurati ki taaref karne se inkaar kar diya tujhe sach mein wo ladki khoobsurat nahi lagi? [U did not praise her beauty do u really feel that Geet is not beautiful]

Maan: Khoobsurat bahut hi chota shabd hai Dev infact uski jaisi ladki maine aaj tak nahi dekhi sar se lekar pau tak ekdum perfect hai [Beautiful is a very small word Dev infact I have not seen a beauty like her she is perfect from head to toe]

Dev: Toh tune uski taaref kyun nahi ki? [Then why didn't u praise her?]

Maan: Taaref karnewale toh usse kahi mile honge par pehli baar koi aisa ladka usse mila hai jisne usse bhav nahi diya infact yahi mere game ka first rule hai "Ignore" ab dekhna wo khud mujhse milne k liye betaab hogi kyunki ek baar toh wo zarur sochegi k aakir maine uski taaref karne se inkaar kyun kar diya aur iska jawab jaane k liye usse mujhse dubara milna hoga [ She might have met loads of guys who would have praised her but I am the first one who ignored her beauty infact this is the first rule of my game "Ignore" she will atleast think once why did I refused to acknowledge her beauty and to get her answer she has to meet me once again]

Dev: This means

Maan: The game has started dude it would be fun to play this game

Maan: (thinking) Tum alag ho Geet kuch toh special baat hai tumne [u r different Geet there is something special in you]

PRECAP: Rule number 2 "C for ..."

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Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
firs time i got chance 😃
first comment
Aweaome part👏
so game start ignore eachother
par dil mein ek dosre par fida hogaye hai.
love attitude
loved it
Edited by kahkashansakina - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
commented on next page
Edited by tamanna1391 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sabse pehle... Hey Piya di... Hehehehe... Hugs... 😆
N yeah I did beat Doll n appi in reservin... Hehehehhe...

Okay cumin to d update...
It ws hillarious n sooo full of life...

Geet aur Maan sachhi pagal hain... Heheheh...
I luvd their stupid si lambi si tiff... Bina baat ke bole chale ja rhe the dono... Heheheheh...
Kept showing as of dey r nt interestd in tokin n still kept tokin... Hehheeh... Insane dat is...

Bechare Dev aur Amrita bhi confuse ho gae ki ye aakhir ho kya rha.. R dey ignoring each otha ya actually me interestin doin each others' bezti... Hehehe... Poor dem... Hhehehe... 😆

Okay.. So d 1st rule... I for Ignore...
Hehehehe... Okay... Dono ne bhale 1 dusre ki khoob jam ke burai aur khichai ki ho.. But.. Ignore... Hehhe... Did dey rly ignored each others' presence n spark...??? Heehehehhe... Me to doubtful... Hehehe... 😆

Okay d 2nd rule...
C for C...
Umm... Me stil in my gehri soch...
Cnt think of nethin... [:'(]
But me nt gonna giv up.. I'l keep thinkin until i get d ans ya u update... Hehhe...

Awsum work
Luv ya sooo much Piya di...
Hugs n kisses...
Edited by AbbyluvsMaan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
ossum dear
superb
they praised eachother in there hearts not before dear
and ignore game dear
waiting for the next part dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
rrr

ermmm...🤔 was that criticism by Maaneet... ohemmgee...😆These two teddy bears sounded sooo cute...I mean seriouslly... were they really fighting...no... 😆 It made me go crazy reading their talks...MSK ka jadu Amrita pe chala...but oopss... bechara MSK... Geet gave him a tight blow on his self-respect...poor poor MSK...🤢 uff...bechari Geet...usko bhi dhakka laga...someone said that Geet's not beautiful?? really...? when in reality she's as beautiful as a fairy... or some princess... khair...let's move further... they went to drink together still fighting... they are sooo adorable yaar...amazing concept... they spent a lot of time together only to find that they never enjoyed each other's company... interesting... hmm... after MSK gone... Geet told Ammu... that it was rule I of her game... and same rule by MSK...cool...what will be rule 2...wonderinh...!

ok di...amazing intriguing concept...continue soon...! can't wait to read further...!
Edited by CIDMaaneetNaksh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
wow so the game begun
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsem update praise each other in heart waah



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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome n beautiful...
kya game plan hai...dekhte hai kaun jitta hai aur kaun hadta...yeah dono ek doosre mein haad jate...time will tell everything...
i simply loved it...
cant wait fr d nxt part...
update soon plz...
waiting...
thank u fr d lovely update...

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