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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update piya ...maan k 5000 gfs??? OMG!!! loved deir challenges... plzzz continue soon...w8ing 4 d nxt part
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow! amazing dear ... mujhe ye part bohat acha laga ... aage bhi ese banati raho ... asre ffs mese ye bohat psnd aya mujh ko .. kya bat jeb me ghumte hain larke geet ke ... omg ! nd maan ki 5000 gfs ufff ! Allah .. kya karta in gfs ka ...heheheh btw great part ... aaage bhi ese banati rahi rapchik parts ... thnx for pm me...!

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Posted: 13 years ago
BANNER CREDIT: SHIVANGI
Thanks for your love and support dear friends. I dedicate this part to my friends Atiffa and Jyothi. Guys both of u were right this FF is inspired by the movie How to lose a guy in 10 days I have not watched the movie but I had read an article on this movie which inspired me to write this ff.
love-Piya
PART 2
Meera: Mam aapne Geet k saamne aisa challenge kyun rakha? [Why was the reason behind this challenge of yours?]
Amrita: Meera tum toh jaanti ho Geet humare newspaper ki sabse kaabil aur sabse behtareen journalist hai wo jo kuch bhi likthi hai usmein ek Midas Touch aa jaata hai maine ye challenge sirf aur sirf apne new supplement ki popularity badane k liye kiya hai [Geet is the best journalist of our newspaper she has a Midas touch in her writing I have challenged her to increase the popularity of my new supplement]
Meera: Par iss challenge se popularity kaise badegi [ How is this challenge related with the popoularity factor?]
Amrita: Simple si baat hai Meera dekho Geet pyar mein bilkul bhi believe nahi karti toh zahir si baat hai k wo iss new supplement mein koi articles likhna pasand nahi karegi par agar usse kisi se sachha pyar ho gaya toh wo iss jazbe ki izzat karne lagegi aur phir jo articles humare supplement mein chapenge usse koi takkar nahi de paayega [It's very simple Meera look Geet doesn't believe in love hence she won't write any articles for our new supplement as this topic does not interest her but if she falls in love with someone she will automatically understand the beauty of love and once this happens the articles that would be coming out in our supplement would be totally out of this world]
Meera: Par agar Geet ko sach mein kisi ladke se pyar ho gaya aur uss ladke ne usse I hate u keh diya toh usska dil tuth jaayega ye toh achhi baat nahi hai Mam [But if Geet falls truely in love with a guy and if he tells her I hate u then Geet would be totally shattered this is not right Mam]
Amrita: Ghabrao mat Meera main Geet ki dushman nahi hoon infact wo meri beti ki tarah hai aur sach kahu toh kabhi kabhi jeetne k liye harna zaruri hotha hai [Don't worry Meera, Geet is like a daughter to me and let me tell u sometimes in order to win u need to lose]
Meera: Main samjhi nahi Mam [I didn't get u Mam]
Amrita: Hum sab jaante hai Geet kitni ziddi hai jab Geet apne challenge ko pura kar legi tab usse ehsaas hoga k usne kya khoya hai aur bus ek baar wo ye samaj jaaye k usse kissi se pyar ho gaya hai tab iss challenge ki wajah se usse apna jeewansaathi mil jaayega [ We all r aware that Geet is very stubborn she will go to any extent to win the challenge and after she wins she will realize what she has lost she will come to know the true meaning of love and in this way she might get her lifepartner as well]
Meera: Par agar aisa nahi hua toh [What if this doesn't happen?]
Amrita: Kuch faisle kismat par chod dene chahiye Meera [U should leave certain decisions on destiny Meera]
Meera: Aap sahi keh rahe ho Mam [U r right Mam]
Amrita: Ab tum jau aur kal k function ki taiyaari karo [Continue with the preparations of tomorrow's function u can go now]
Meera: Yes Mam
Next Day
Evening
Geet is very excited about the challenge
She had already started making plans so that she ends up in the winning side
Geet: I hope k Amrita mam mere liye koi dang ka ladka chose kare Geet Handa ko I hate u bolnewale ladka uski takar ka hona chahiye [ I hope Amrita Mam choses an aaproporiate guy for me he should be worth enough to tell I hate u to Geet Handa]
Geet: Ab toh jo bhi hoga party mein jaakar hi hoga chalo taiyaar ho jaati hoon [Let me get ready soon let me see what happens in the party]
Geet selects a strapless sweetheart peach colored short party dress with sequin drop waist bodice and layered ruffle skirt
She compliments her dress with the required makeup and leaves for the party
Maan was also equally excited for the party
This was what he selected to wear in the party
As soon as Geet enters the hall all the men start drooling over her but as usual Geet avoids them and walks straight to Amrita
Amrita: U r looking gorgeous Geet
Geet: Mam ye toh roz ki baat ho gayi kuch naya kahiye [Mam say something new this is a regular compliement for me]
Amrita: Hmm... issiliye toh tumhe challenge kiya hai [This is the reason why I have challenged u]
Geet: Mam yaha aisa koi ladka nahi hai jo Geet k level ka ho main ek shehzadi hoon aur ye sab mere saamne jokers hai [ Mam there is not a single guy in this party who can match the level of Geet. I am a princess and all the men present over here are jokers in front of me]
Amrita: Thoda sabr rakho Geet tumhare liye maine kisi special insaan ko chose kiya hai [Have patience Geet I have selected someone special for u]
Geet: Aur wo kaun hai? [May I know who he is?]
Amrita: Jab wo party mein aa jaayega tab main tumhe usse milwadungi [Let him come to the party I will introduce both of u]
Geet: Ok till then I will enjoy the party
Amrita: Sure Darling
Meanwhile,
Maan and Dev arrive at the venue
All the girls stand like a statue as soon as they see Maan
Maan: Dekha Dev main ladkiyon k saamne bhi aa jau toh unka kya haal hotha hai tujhe lagtha hai k iss party mein tujhe aisi koi ladki milegi jo mere jaadu se bach paayegi? [Just look at the girls Dev this is what happens when MSK just goes and atands in front of them do u really feel that u can find a girl in this party who would be able to resist my charm?]
Dev: Maine aisi ladki dhoond li hai Maan [I have found a girl Maan]
Maan: Kaun hai woh? [ Who is she?]
Dev: Andar chal milwadunga [Come inside I will introduce both of u]
Maan: Chal [Let's go]
Maan and Dev enter the hall.
Amrita is happy she goes to Geet
Amrita: Geet usse dekh rahi ho wo hai MSK yahi wo ladka hai jisse tumhe ye ugalwana hai k wo tumse nafrat karta hai [ Geet he is MSK he is the guy who should tell that he hates u ]
Dev: Uss ladki ko dekh wo Geet Handa hai aur iss ladki se tujhe ILU bulwana hai [She is Geet Handa and this is the girl who should say ILU to u]
Maan and Geet look at each other at the same time
There was something that clicked immediately their eyes were fixed on each other as if there was some kind of magnetic attraction between them
Amrita was busy talking to Geet and Dev was busy talking to Maan but both of them were busy talking to each other through their eyes
Amrita: Geet kya hua tum sunn rahi ho main kya keh rahi hoon? [Geet what's wrong r u listening to me?]
Dev: Maan meri baat sunn raha hai k nahi? [R u listening to me Maan?]
The eyelock is broken
Dev: Kya hua? [What happened?]
Maan: Mujhe teri choice pasand aayi ab ye khel khelne mein maza aayega [I love u choice it would be interesting to play this game]
Amrita: Kya soch rahi ho Geet? [What r u thinking Geet?]
Geet: Iss MSK mein kuch toh baat hai isse apni ungliyon par nachane mein kafi maza aayega [There is something different about this MSK it would be fun to make him dance on my fingertips]
Amrita: Chalo main tumhe usse milwathi hoon [Come let me introduce both of u]
Dev: Chal unke paas jaate hai [Let's go to meet them]
PRECAP: The game begins😉😉😉
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Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb ... Maan ki 4999 gf...Hey Babaji!!!!!!! 😆 Waiting for the...


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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry dear my like button is not working...but i loved ur FF...continue soon...
Edited by love4maaneet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Waiting!!!!!!!
Plzz uodate b4 12..!!not 2morw!!!
Waiting eagerly!!!!!?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh amazing part Piya di...wonderful... but...Amrita's nature was a bit confusing...coz if Geet's heart breaks...then she won't be able to do anything but just lament... so... i didn't like this aspect of her... regardless what she said about kismat...it's a heart after all...which may suffer... Geet is sho different...she's not the devil interested in any boy...but Maan is kind of a super casanova... waiting for their meeting... and their eye-lock was cute...

waiting for the challenges to begin!
Edited by CIDMaaneetNaksh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ossum dear
superb
lived it
waiting for the next part dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
nyc update dear...

finally dey both get
challenge...

ab aaega game ka asli
maza...

waiting for game
to begin...
Edited by khushi1022 - 13 years ago

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