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jasraj123

@jasraj123

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

wowww sneha very well and nicely written yaar👏👏👏👏 and the os itself speaks for it.
love the way u put everything all the emotions in one update. it is hard to do but u did it.
I luv it and u 🤗

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Rituja

@mishtiritu

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

First up All Congrats For this OS...

U did a fab Work yaar...

Loved it to the core...

Uff I m ur poems fan now... It was like wow yaar...

And uff Maan Confession was just superb...

VEry gud sneha...

Plzzz Do write some more OS...

Would love to read them...

Hugss and Kisses to u...😳

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Rituja

@mishtiritu

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

I Here Again...

Wanted to say That... U r just Fabulous...

U knw It was just Osum to read this Os...

Total Story In one part...

U did it very well yaar...

From starting with Maan in coffee to end till their confession...

It was Just Flawless... I m in love with this OS...

The Concept was sooo sweet...

I m reading it again and Again...

ANd Maan Conffession...

It was best till date now... Loved it like anything...

Just Fab and wow wow wow...😊

Hats of to u sweety... Really It was mindblowing...

👏👏👏👏👏👏

Plzzz Continue To write Some more...

Now Coming To the Poem...

It was awesum yaar... Small and sweet lines

but Have Deep meaning in them...

They convey each emotion of story yaar...

Loevd it to the core...

Muuuaaahhh...

Luv ya sooo Much...

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Abreshmina

@Abby-GC-Crazy

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

aaahhh... amazin...!!!!!!!!!!!
sabse pehle to i luvd ur poem... it ws beautiful...

den.. d way u started d OS was sooo perfect.. it felt as if dats how it ws meant to be... well done yr...

aaahhh... den Maan ka jo description dia na... i swear yaar... i ws drooling ova d description.. hehhehe... it ws sooo HOT...

den though Johney wasnt a big character.. bt I loved the way u used his character to tie Maan n Geet... 😃

aahhh... n dat moment ws really beautiful... wen Maan came to knw Geet's name n he whispered it... widout even hearing dat it sounded so musical to me... 😃

i luvd d way u described their first meetin.. it ws cute... Geet is sucha cutie... she said sry so many tyms for accidently hittin Maan wid d newspaper... aww...

d way dey got connected even though dey didnt tok to one another ws sooo sweet... 😳

den.. bechari Geet... Maan ws testing himself stayin away from Geet... but us chakkar me bechari Geet ka bhi test ho gya... 😆

but den Maan came to Geet's home to meet her... may b Johney told him dat Geet ws worried bout him... 😃

aww... Geet is sucha sweetheart.. she wrote notes for Maan wid a rose evryday.. OMG... she ws so deeply in luv wid Maan... 😍
meri to aankhen bhar gain uska pyar dekhke...

i luvd d way Maan got Geet to confess...
n den her outburst on Maan ws sooo cute... 😳

den d end part.. Maan ka confession... 👏 👏 👏 for dat... awsumly written Sneha... bohot amazin tha rlly... i totally luvd it... n den especially d last lines...

Maan in between her lips, spoke.. Be mine.. Forever Geet..!!

A tear drop escaped her eyes as she pressed her lips onto his & said Forever.. Maan..!!

these lines are craved on my heart now...

gr8 job dear... 😃