My random OS Scribblings!!! CREATIVE THRD Pt 8 p27 - Page 13

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesum part..
waiting for maneet to meet..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SallyAmanda

me planning fr an insight into past...wat say???


Great idea go ahead dear
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 8..

He was walking to his room when he felt dizzy again.A series of hazy images clouded his mind."Ah!"he yelled..There was noone to help him out.Though he accepted that Geet and he had fallen in love and he remembered every bit of that,he couldn't actually guess how Geet looked.Unable to take his pain he screamed,"DADIMA!!!"************"Maan!" Geet said as she woke up panting.She wiped off the sweat on her forehead and whispered "Maan!"as helpless tears rolled down.Her Maan was dead..How could he??He had promised that he'd never leave her but now???She looked at the garlanded photo of him.He was in a black T-shirt and blue Jeans.She smiled a bit thinking about the past..PAST...IN ITALICS😉"Geet!!!"a voice yelled from below."...Geet"It called again."Ms.GEET HANDA!!!WHERE ARE YOU?"the voice said"Cumin Meera!!!"she replied back as she tied her long hair in a ponytail.She was dressed in a light grey salwar."Babaji!Raksha karna!"she said as she climbed down the stairs.---It was her first day to college as a senior-a third year student.She was doing English Literature-third year.She climbed into the car with Meera,who was on her first day to college.She was taking up Music and Geet knew that Meera had a beautiful voice."Chill Meer...It'll be our group who's ragging you!"Geet said to Meera while driving the car."wahi toh...It's YOUR GROUP that's ragging me!!"Geet laughed at her little sister and suddenly the car stopped."Damn!"Meera said as Geet checked the fuel tank."Oh No!"she said and they both sang in unison "Phir se!"and laughed.They got down from the car and looked around for help.When there was no sign of help,Geet decided to call Yash,her best frnd to help them out.----After 15 mts,Yash came to the place and said,"I'll take Meera,Okay?u wait till I send Ramesh..Okay?"Geet nodded as Meera and Yash climbed on his bike and went away.---Geet waited for half an hour,there was no sign of neither Ramesh nor Yash.She was getting frustrated when she saw a bike racing at her in full speed and stopping in front of her.Geet raised an eyebrow.The guy removed his helmet and shook his hair.Sweat drops danced on his forehead and he gave her the same grin he always gave her for the past 3 years.Geet felt the color drain."Maan?"she whispered.*****PRESENTMaan was lying on his bed.He was trying to put those images together.All he could hear was "I Love U Maan"in a sweet voice."Geet"he murmured.He turned and twitched trying to atleast get a glimpse of her face.Trying hard,he felt himself dissappearing into darkness when he saw it!!!HER EYES!!...Sum1 take it frm her...@Mel-Hope I did justice😳@Jazz di-feel free to tell me if u don't lyk it di...I'll delete it😊
Edited by SallyAmanda - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it Sally dear!!!!
I've been dying to know something abt their past...glad that u thot abt writing it!!!!
Thanks for such an amazing part!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
loving it sweeties u all are awesome writers keep up the good work
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update dear...
maan rememered geet...its really lovely...
loved it very much...
thank u very much fr such a lovely update...
waiting fr d nxt part...a long one plz...
continue soon plz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow!loved their glimpse of past..
nice work sally..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Mel and Sally great updates 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome parts
but very short
pls cont
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice prt...luvd d glimpse of past

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