OS {MG}:A Kiss To Remember...! part 3 (pg16) 9/9 - Page 10

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Hii Guys!

me here again after a long wait with a part sorry for this long n still not the part is worth enough all yoru wait but this is the bets i could write it one hour so plz plz bear with me with all a sad mood n mess i could write only this so ireally hope u like this

N this is dedicated to non another but my sweet dazzler this is only for u n U n I really hope u like it


The party was on its full swing, everyone was pleased and excited specifically about the theme. As they were missing those old days they thought of reviving those memories of childhood. So they kept most enchanting theme of 'Fairytale'. Everyone was dressed as their favourite character, even the Grand atrium was decorated in a way to drift you away from this exhaustic world to a soothing century to be lost in those fantasies. It wasn't kept bright as illuminated with dim lights but colourful, long curtains waving, railings adorned with flowers, they didn't left any stone unturned to make this night magical.

Every one dressed up in their respective attires so does geet, she simply wore a hand made gown depict sleeping beauty, to her story wasn't much different. As she believed there was a spell too which might be broken only by his prince kiss. A life spent in his wait, was not less than a deep n long slumber. She was lost in her own thoughts. When she heard a shreik "Geeettt!" her trance broke n she replied "Hmmm" just then jyoti poke on her shoulder and bringing her back to the real world "Bas bhi kar yaar I know where are you wandering but khayalon se zada neeche dhundhegi na to kya pata tera prince hume neeche hi mil jaye" listening word prince her cheeks were graced with the deeper shade of red.

Just then aashu interrupted "yeah who knows ajj teri bhi love story'.ooops nahi nahi fairy tale complete hojaye" both the friends had Hi5 and dragged geet along with them, as they didn't wanted to be tardy. Boys were waiting for them, just that they pretented but actually busy in checking out other girls. Though they were not able to see the faces as everyone wore a mask, well that was the twist of the theme. Soon the girls joined them too. Ansah tried looking her best, for np no one could have been best than aashu, n for sure rahul could only just see jyoti, but still what they couldn't deny was the immense oozing out of geet, out of the crowd of thousands she was antihetical, though she was wearing the simplest dress of all with white in color but it depicted truly her purity, her tranquility her serenity.

People was just loving it, be it from the same college or other they thought it to be biggest one, it had everything it required except one thing, drinks. Out of all the people there was one who was frustrated to the core especially with the theme. "Had hoti hai bachpane ki 'Fairytale' I mean seriously in the present century we are decked up like some stupid fiction character n not looking less than some joker n top of it this wasn't enough to have cherry on the top we have this mask to cover ourselves in embarassment" his cribbing session had no ends. Vicky had enough "Shut up! Just shut up apni story pe kabhi dehaan diya'.usse zada faltu koi ho hi nahi sakti'" well on that maan's stare was enough to stop right there, a word against his story rather her princess could turn blue n black vicky tried continuing "chal theek hai faltu nahi hai per esi hi ghisi piti fairy tale hai samjha" maan gave up. Least he knew why was he so chafed was it actually the part or something else disturbing him.

Since the moment he entered he had those different feelings surrounding him, he seems to be unfamiliar but were they actually strange. Geets condition wasn't different too, she had the sensation coocooning her a warmth, yet acquainted. Maan had left it long back if it wouldn't be his dad's college but he had to stay, geet tried her best escaping this weird tinglings but her friends were not less than the bind, least they knew the conspiracy of destiny.

Sid look around among all few were not very interested in their surroundings, it all felt a bit clumpsy. He was thinking what it could be that was missing just then it clicked, he immediately winked at jyoti and asker her to come aside. Hie whispered something to her and then there was chinese whisper between all friends except geet. She was unaware about the plans against her. They all surrounded her with a grim plastered on their face, she knew very that moment something is fishy. Before she could speak ansah jumped "Please, you can't back out!" she was caught off guard just then np and aashu emphasized "Yes you have to do this" she was still unaware what they were actually talking about, rahul encircled her with one arm and exclaimed "C'mon I am very sure you will do it" atlast they out of curiousness she spoke "Do what?" just then jyoti said "nothing just song a song for all of us" not even her dreams she thought they were planning this, it isn't she can't sing she sung many times but that just infront of some friends precisly only friends.

"No way" ansah smiled n said "You really don't have a choice babes" she knew she can easily loose but still she tries but all her attemots came to end when jyoti confronted "For him?" she lost it completey. Undoubtedly she couldn't refuse even if she wanted, something unconditional that bounded her to him. She would blindly accept anything for his sake, and now this seems nothing. She moved a step forward with determination she knew she can do it for only for him.

Maan almost gave up he couldn't stand anymore all this, after a long persuasion he was no where to listen any more excuses. He made his way to the exit but his steps retarded when he heard that melodiously saccharine voice. It didn't reach his ears but to his heart, voluntarily or involuntarily he turned and started moving towards it though it was picth black.

Pyar tune kya kiya

Yeh pyar tune kya kiya

He couldn't properly spot the person who was singing, though he knew he didn't required any assurance he knew, his heart knew very well who it was. But where was she why weren't they spotting a light on her. He kept searching for her looking here to there moving around.

Ek hi pal mein achanak

di hai nahyi dunya

Di hai nahyi khushyaan

But even in his hunt he couldn't miss those sweet words. He stopped in his track and was delighted to know she was no different and smiled.

Pyar tune kya kiya

Yeh pyar tune kya kiya

She couldn't think of any other song at the moment. With his name n memories this would only linger in her mind.

Ek hi pal mein achanak

di hai nahyi dunya

Di hai nayi khushyaan

One of the best which would express her feelings the way she could ever do. How she wished what she felt, he would feel the same and smiled.

Pehli dafa usse dekh kar

Hone laga kuch esa asar

Maan immediately travelled back to that night when he faced her for the first time rather the only time. He still felt those similar jitterswhich he felt that time. He was amused she still had that same effect.

Pehli dafa usse dekh kar

Hone laga kuch esa asar

Geet moved around her friends recalling the most beautiful moment of her life, she could never forget what she felt now and then.

Khud se hui me bekhabar

Me hun yahan dil mera hai wahan

They both were still stuck on that very moment. The time surely moved forward but they were still standing there with the hope to endure it again. Their heart still clung to that night, place and to that special souvenir.

Pyar tune kya kiya

Yeh pyar tune kya kiya

Ek hi pal mein achanak

di hai nahyi dunya

Di hai nayi khushyaan

They both were delighted one with the feel and other with the presence. She was pleased to have expressed it to everyone, he was pleased that he finally found her.

Dil de raha hai ehsaas yeh

Jese koi mere paas hai

Maan have stopped search for her, He didn't wanted to spoilt the feel in this urge, he have waited enough, he could resist few more moments. But the feel right now she was filling him with was just nostalgic. He was happy as existing in the same place as her, breathing in the same air as her, seems eternity.

Dil de raha hai ehsaaas yeh

Jese koi mere paas hai

Well she felt more restless, though from the beginning she did but now with this feel her heart was thumping within that cage.

Jiske badan ko choo ke

Mere badan choo rahi hai hawa

A gush of wind passed her touching and soothing her restless soul. As if it was him, tears made its way, but she bravely drank them. And shrug the idea it wasn't possible and went away with the feel.

Pyar tune kya kiya

Yeh pyar tune kya kiya

Ek hi pal mein achanak

Di hai nayi dunya

Di hai nayi khushyaan

When it came to an end no one realized everyone was mesmerized with the feel with all the couples on floor dancing. She requested it to sing without a mike and without lights, she did't wanted anyone to see her, she could sing this only when she is alone. Her trance broke with a huge round of applause, she couldn't express what she was feeling at the moment. Her friends looked at her cheered her, they were happy.

She was feeling that strange stare on her, despite everyone was looking at her didn't scared her but something different again, she looked around but couldn't spot anyone. She couldn't bear this anymore, this agitation was killing her within. She moved to leave this place when she felt a tug on her hand. By the mere touch she had goosebumps, she couldn't believe, she had hold her heart while turning. He saw a handsome hunk standing right infront of him, but with that shield on his face. She knew but wanted to be assure as the lights were still dim. He knew it even that veil couldn't hide her from him, as not the eyes but it was his heart who recognized her. With just a slight push she was almost on him but still they had a gap to breathe. He knelt down and asked erotically "Can I have a pleasure to dance with you?"

Well she was flabbergasted, was that a invitation to dance or to test her patience?


Can anyone jus temme y maan is so obv about it...not fiction but something logical😉

P.s I love this song though isha n salman made it a nightmare for me but still couldn't resist do listen while reading😉

Do hit like if u like it and share ur comments please please

why always i have to post this on my flight day🤢

Edited by muskaan_cute19 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
his belonging is with her...always...

n i want the next part soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
part 3
nice part...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Mmmuuuahhh mmmuuuaahhh mmmuuuaaahhh


wardahhh I just love U...just love U for this...thanxu thanxu thanxu
Love U...will read it in a while i get back from class...

Aowww I just Love U...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
Awesome!!!!

Loved dis song.


Plzzz conti sooon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
Aowww i just love you, love you lots n lots for this ahhh finally I got my update after so long of wait n trust me the waiting was worth it,
as it was sooo damn mesmerizing and soulful that I cant have enough of it, ahhh I just love it, and i love you more for making my day aowww Just Love You till the end

but but but...u made me deamanding again

darling but with a new demand ''I WANT A NEXT PART''

the start was studendous how they caught her off gaurd to sing by taking his name aowww how can she deny then and then during the song they started there day dreaming...hayeee both lost lost lost in their own world
where they meet, where they lost themselves for the first and last tym how they lived since then

they both could feel each other's essence in the air, the feel to be in same air filled their nostrils making them think all that, aowww they were drugged with on other's presence

aoww he was so happy to find his solace and she was soo damn restless still unsure of his presence, anyway how could she be so sure till the end, he dint made any feel of hom being present 😉

aahhh the point where u said he stoped his search not to spoill the feel of this moment i felt like chewing him up auwww he is indeed a darling although usko meri Geet ki prepared part nahi psnd aayi still I loved it mmuuuaahhh to him

aowww and then Maan ka last bowler...aowww mereko dance and after dance effects dekhne hai plz plz plzzz
coz U left us at clifhanger again...mumiee this is not done...
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I want part 4 ❤️
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I want part 4 ❤️
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I want part 4 ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
I want part 4 ❤️

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