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Posted: 13 years ago
awsem update love maneet meetin maan salesman ghoorne se product nahin khareedoongi



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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ff yaar
the karan part reminded me of tumko na bhool payega where similar incident happens with salman
n geet ne maan ko daant diya salesman samjh kar ha ha
waitng for more
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Posted: 13 years ago


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PART-6

daarji:humne maan ke liye 12 saal intezar ki hai aur o 12 minute nahi kar saktha tha...chala gaya...mujse ek baar bhi nahi poocha ki mein usse baat kyun nahi kar raha hoon..hum bhi unke daarji hai...hum bhi ziddi hai...(his eyes turns teary)bas..chala gaya...

s.d and rano also leaves the room with sad faces...

rano:didi..phikr mat kijiye...sab teek hojayega...chaliye maan ko apna kamra dhikathe hai...aur aapko khana nahi khilana hai aapne bete ko...

s.d smiles at rano...

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Maan who came out from daarji's room entered living room again and settled back in the couch.aadi notices maan and understands that he is very much tensed by his facial expressions.he settles himself beside maan and places his hand on maan's shoulder to bring back him from the thoughts he was engrossed.maan jerks slightly as soon as aadi places his hand on his shoulder.

Aadi:wat happened maan?is everything ok?tum pareshan kyun ho?

Maan:nahi...wo...mein actually...

Aadi:kahi tum humse naaroz tho nahi ho na?

before maan could say anything aadi continues with his..kyun na ho..u left house only because of us and...

Maan:nahi aadi actually baat ye hai ki mein..

ofo bete aap dono shuru hogaye..intrudes rano between their conversation.aadi bete maan ko thoda araam tho karne do baatein tho hote rahenge..

Nahi maa bas hum dono yuhi..says aadi.

Maa khana tayyar hai says geet who came there..maan beta tum fresh hokar aao phir khana khate hai..aadi maan ko kamre tak chod aao beta..signals rano to aadi..

Geet smiles at maan but maan glares at her and goes with aadi..

Geet:hey babaji ab mein kya karu.lagtha hai maan bahuth zyada naraz hai mujse.jo bhi ho mujse maan se sorry kehna hi hoga.

@mumbai:

Arjun,acp(assistant commisoner of police)reaches the place with C.B.I officer ram kapoor who is appointed to deal the murder case of rajeev sharma.they reach the place where karan/maan was standing.ram examines each and every inch of that place where as the remaining cops including arjun were busy in search of evidence so that they can atleast know who the murderer is...ram finally comes to the window where karan was standing..

Ram:so this is the spot from where the murder took place..

He notices the distance between stage where rajeev sharma stood..he takes gun from one of the constables and aims it towards the stage...

Ram:mr.arjun are u shore ?is this the place where actually the person was there..

Arjun:yes sir..humne use yehi dekha tha but badluck we cant see his face..

Ram:(self thought):hmm...if he shoots from here then the bullet should peirce in his chest but here...ok

Ram:don't worry mr.arjun I will find him soon..u just tell me wat happened actually on that day..

Arjun starts narrating the whole incident.at the same time they were climbing the steps which heads towards skyscrapper from where karan escaped...

Arjun:sir jab humne ne use pakadne ki koshish ki tab o yaha se escape hogaya..

But how???asks ram curiosly.sir he jumped on to the running train with the help of rope..

Ram:what???????are u crazy?how can this happen?koi itne unche building se kese?i mean how could he c jump from this building?that too on to the running train..huh it's impossible(nods his head in disbelief)

Arjun:but sir he did it actually..

Ram:really!!!!!iam impressed..koun hai yar ye banda?agar isne olympics mein participate kiya hota tho use zaroor gold medal mila hota.

Arjun looks at him with amused expressions and this is not gone unnoticed by ram..

Ram:ok chill!leave it ..now come to the case..so he has jumped from here hmm iam sure he might be a professional..

Arjun:professional??????

Ram:hmm..he smiles at arjun who is completely perplexed.ok lets's go now

When they were coming down ram stops exactly at the window from where karan saw vikram's accident..he finds bracelet there.he picks it up and reads the name engraved on it.he them pushes it in his pocket and moves from there.

@hoshiarpur:

Aadi brings maan to a big room where everything was arranged already.

Aadi:maan tumhe ye kamra yaad hai?bachpan mein hum kitna masti karthe the yaha..

He continues blabbering but here maan is lost in his own world..aadi notices this..

Aadi:maan kya huwa?

No reply..maan,...maan

Maan:ha..ha bolo kya huwa?

Aadi:even iam asking u that wat is wrong with u?u r not our maan..

Maan is shocked!!!!!!what???

Aadi:mera matlab hai tum wo maan nahi ho jise mein jaantha hoon..bachpan mein tum kitna shararat kathe hai.harwaqt muskuratha rehtha tha aur doosro ko bhi hasne par majboor kartha tha par ab wo maan kahi kho gaya hai..maan muje batao kya baat hai?

Maan:aisa kuch nahi hai mein tak gaya hoon na isliye chup hoon..

Aadi:achha teek hai tum jaldi fresh hokar aao hum milkar khana khayenge..

Maan:ok

Aadi is about to leave but maan stops him..

Aadi:kya huwa maan?

Maan:aadi actually muje tumse kuch kehna hai

Aadi:ha bolo

Maan:wo mein..

Aadi...Their conversation again got disturbed but this time it is geet who disturbed them..

Aadi:ha di kya huwa?

Geet:aadi maa tuje bhula rahi hai.

Aadi:ha di mein aatha hoon..maan tum fresh hojao fir hum baat karthe hai..

Saying so he leaves the room...

Geet just stands there smiling at maan and at the same time thinking about how to start her convo with maan...

Maan looks at her confusingly..

Geet:maan wo mein actually tumhe sorry kehne aayi thi..o mein jaan bhooj kar nahi ki...

It's ok..says maan

Geet:(st)are ye kya itni asani se maaf kar diya hai..mein ne jaisa socha tha maan bilkul aisa nahi hai..o bahuth accha hai..muje laga tha maan mujpar bahuth gussa karenge par..

She still stands there smiling at maan at the same time admiring him..

Maan:now leave..

Geet:ha..maan tum sach mein mujse naraaz tho nahi ho na..mein bhi na kitni jalli hoon..tumhe bolne ka mouka hi nahi diya..

Maan:geet...mein ne kaha na It's ok u go now..

Geet:nahi maan..mein sach mein pagal hoon..tumhe dekkar sales man samaj baiti..

Geet soon becomes busy in her blabbering and there maan is getting irritated with her continuos blabbering as he was not habituated with it.

Maan:(st)oh god!ye ladki phir se shuru hogayi..ye muje pagal kar degi..

Meanwhile,maan gets a message in his mobile..as soon as he finds the recepient's name he becomes more restless..

Maan:geet tum jao..mein ne kaha na it's ok

Geet:nahi maan aise kese..muje samjna chahiye na ki har koi sales man nahi hota jo formal kapde pehen the hai..aur..

Maan:Geettt!shut up now..

Geet:par maan...wo

Maan:I said shut up!bilkul chup!

He instantly comes to her,holds her arm and makes her walk outside leaving a bang of the door...

Geet makes o shaped mouth..

Geet:iski itni himmat..geet handa ko bahar phenk diya..o bhi is tarah..cadu kahinka..mein bhi kitni pagal thi is cadu ko sorry bolne gayi thi..chaddo!!!

After sometime maan comes down but he is relieved now..they all had lunch together..s.d feeds maan with her hands'geet is also busy in throwing glares to maan and taunting him silently which makes meera smile...

Precap:

Maan:I hope wo teek hai..agar kisi bhi cheez ki zaroorat ho tho plz inform me..

sorry for mistakes and bear with my language as iam not that fluent in them but tried my best to give best...plz comment and negative comments are mostly welcome...actually i want them so that i can improve myself...

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link to next part:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/53697135

Edited by maneetlover1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update..
so ds maan s not sd's maan..!
i luvd officer ram..
nw again geet in sherni mode...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update dear thank you for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsem poor maan geet blalberring






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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb prt...geet is such a cute chatter box.
thnxs 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hehehe awesome mind-blowing sweet and cute update sweety
Lol geet ka kya hoga kitna bolti hai hehehe
Poor maan ek din pagan ho jaaye ga...geet ke phase mien lolz
Don't worry maan geet tumhe pagan nahin hone degi lol
Loved it to the core
Interesting precap sweety can't wait to read more
Love u mwahhh xxx

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