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Mounika sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: backy
superb part!!!

plz cont soon

thanx esha😊😊

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Mounika sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: minnie_tweetie

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http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2651796&PID=51550648&#51550648

awesome update
this was so beautiful
loved geet explaining abt her hubby
please continue soon mona

um loving this

thank u soo much silky😊😊
iam glad that u loved it...
will continue soon..
love u dear...

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Mounika sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Mounika sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#144

[banner credit goes to sakshi]

PART-4

geet enters daarji's room with medicines..

geet:daarji...aapki dawai..
[daarji..here are ur medicines]

daarji:accha puttar waha table par rakdijiye..waise aap kaha thi abhi tak?
[ok plz keep them there on the table...btw where were u till now
?]

geet:mein...ha mein aapkeliye dawai lene gayi thi..
[me..actually i went for ur medicines..]

daarji:puttar hum aapki daarji hai...hum acche se jaanthe hai aap kya sochti hai aur kya karthi hai...
waise puttar itna gussa teek nahi hai...
[dear iam ur daarji and i know very well about each and evry moment of u...btw anger is not good beta..]

geet understands that there is no use of hiding anything from him as she understood that he came to know about everything happend on road...

geet:matlab aapko sab pata hai..teek hai ab aapse chupa ke kya faida...ha mein ne us ladke ko maara tha par ab jaanthe hai kyun usne didi ko cheda tha aur muje love letter diya tha..ab aap hi batayiye mein ne kuch galat ki..?
[so u know every thing...now there is no use to hide from u...yes i beat that boy but u know y?he was teasing di and wrote love letter to me..is there anything wrong in it?]

daarji:hamari gudiya kabhi galat ho sakthi hai kya?
[will my doll do anything wrong?]

geet:(smiles)waise aap ko kisne bataya ye sab?kahi us aadi ke bacche tho nahi?
[btw who told u about this?aadi?]

daarji:(smiling)nahi bete humne apni aakon se dekha hai..o kya hai na hum aur humara dost waha se guzar rahe the tho mein ne sab dekhliya hai...sach puttar hume tho bahuth maza aaya tha aur tum tho sherni bangayi thi...(laughs loudly)
[no he didn't say anything to me..when i was passing through that road with my friend i found u there...really i enjoyed it and u became sherni at that time]

geet:hmm..aakhir pothi kiski hai?
[after all iam ur grand daughter..]

daarji:par bete aap agli baar aisa akele mat jaayiye...aisa jaan teek nahi hai...
[next time don't go anywhere alone like this...that's not safe for u]

geet:hmm teek hai teek hai agli baar akeli nahi jaaungi..
[ok k i'll never go alone]

daarji:balki hume bhi aapke saath le jaayiye ga..hum bhi dekthe hai koi humari pothi ko chedne ka himmat kaise karthe hai..
[u take me along with u so that i'll see them who dares to tease u]

geet:(smiles)aap na is duniya ka sabse best daarji hai aur mera best friend...
[u r the best grand paa of this world and also my best friend..]

saying so geet hugs her daarji...
meanwhile,s.d enters the room..

s.d:aur hum koun hai?
[and who iam i?]

geet:is duniya ka sabse best buwa..
[u r the best buwa of this world]

geet starts explaining every incident to daarji and s.d...
they start laughing loudly...

s.d:shhh...chup ho jayiye rano aarahi hai shaayad...agar use pata chal gaya ki baauji bhi tumhare saath hai tho o baauji ka bhi kabar legi..kahegi ki aapki laad pyar ne geet ko bigaad diya hai..
[shhh...be silent now...may be rano is coming here..if she comes to know that baauji is with u then she starts scolding bauji too..]

geet giggles 'ha mein chup rahungi' places he finger on lips..

rano enters the room with tea in her hand...

rano:bauji chai lijiye...

he starts sipping the tea with out saying anyword...
geet and s.d stands silently besides him..

rano:geet tu abhi tak yahi hai...mein ne tuje sabzi kaatne ko kaha na..waha meera akeli hai ja jaakar uski madad karo..
pata nahi ye ladki kab sudregi...
(she turns towards daarji again)aap hi samjayiye ise...jab dekho shararat karthi rehti hai..meri ek nahi sunthi...upar se didi bhi ise har waqt support karthi rehti hai...
[geet...u are still here...?i told u to cut the vegetables and u are timepassing here..meera is working alone there...go and help her now...
baauji u tell this girl to stop behaving like a kid...she'll always do mischievious things and didi will support her in everything..u tell me now wat should i do with this girl?]

daarji:(showing fake angry face)
kyun geet...kyun pareshan kar rahi ho meri bahu ko...sambhal jao warna...
[why are u troubling my bahu?be a good girl and stop doing mischievious things..otherwise..]

geet:(holds her ears and making innocent face)
sorry maa...sorry daarji...
i promise mein aaj ke baad kabhi koi shararat nahi karungi..i swear..

here s.d is trying very hard to stop her laugh...
but both daarji and s.d are enjoying geet's nautanki...
this time rano is also not ready to fall in geet's trap...

rano:chal jooti...yu baar baar jooti kasam mat kha..
[u lier...dont take false promises again & again]

geet:mein aur joot...nahi maa..
[i..iam leir?]

rano:accha kal tune jo bahi kaha wo kya tha...
bachpan se jaanti hoon mein tuje...bachpan mein bhi aise hi karthi thi tu...
[oh really...so wat was that which u were saying yesterday...?
u are doing the same since ur child hood..]

s.d:ha ye tho hai...bachpan mein geet maan ke saath milkar kitna shararat karti thi...ye sab maan ne hi sikhaya tha geet ko..o bhi aise hi jhooti kasam khate the..
[yes...u and maan used to do very much masti and he too used to take false promises to escape from me..]

tears roll down from her cheeks..
geet and rano comes to s.d..

rano:didi aap fikr matkijiye...maan zaroor wapis aayega..
[u dont worry di..maan will be back soon..]

geet:ha buwaji aap dekhiye ga...o jaldi wapis aayega..
[yes he'll be back soon]

s.d:babaji kare aisa hi ho...o hamare maan ko jaldi se hamare paas bhej de..
[i hope that god will send him soon]

daarji:(in serious tone)
babaji ko dosh dekar kya faida..jab o khud aana nahi chahtha hai...agar use lautna hota tho kabka laut chuke hote,...
hume u roz roz nahi rulathe...
[if maan wants to come back..he would have come long before..then y are u making god responsible for this..]

s.d leaves the room with tears...
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@mumbai:

karan and vikram reaches the building from where they have to carry out their operation...

vikram:so karan are u ready..

karan:tum jaa kar apna position le lo...get ready..
[u go and take ur position...get ready]

vikram:ok..

karan enters the building and vikram will be outside as he have to be ready with his plan outside to escape from there...
karan reaches the window of one of the floor...
the building is just opposite to the stadium in which party meeting of rajeev sharma is held...the stadium is surrounded by police security and also with loud speakers...the sound is very loud that even shooting sound cannot be heard in that...
the party meeting starts and rajeev sharma starts giving his so called speech...only ss is aware that karan is in opposite bulding..rajeev sharma just knows that he is gonna be shot but not
fatally..ss is waiting for karan to shoot and at the same time he is very scared of the situation as the stadium is surrounded with cops and if karan gets caught he is gonna die first...

karan aims the gun at rajeev sharma and slows his fingers starts moving near to trigger...but however,before karan could shoot some body shoots rajeev sharma that too fatally...
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s.d devi comes to her room and starts sobbing by holding maan's child hood photo...
geet enters the room and notices s.d..
she wipes her tears and makes her to sit..

geet:buwaji aap phir se ro rahi hai...
[u started crying again?]

s.d:babaji hamare saath hi aisa kyun kar raha hai bete...
hume hamare bete wapis chahiye...
[y god is doing this to me?i want my son back]

geet:aap chinta mat kijiye buwaji...babaji zaroor bhej denge maan ko..
aur waise bhi mein ne babaji ko warning de kar aarahi hoon..agar un hone humare buwaji ko rulane ki koshish ki na...
[dont worry he'll send maan back..and i warned babaji that if he again make my buwaji cry then..]

s.d hits on geet's head with her palm...

s.d:chal pagli...kya karegi tu..(smiles)
(serious again)bagwaan bas hamare maan ko hamare paas bheje..hume aur kuch nahi chahiye...
[i just want my maan back and i dont want anything more than that]

geet:hmm..tho maan ko aathe hi aap muje bhool tho nahi jaayegi na..
agar aap bhul bhi jaaye na mein aapko chod ne wali nahi hoon..agar zaroorat pade tho mein maan se shaadi karlungi aur aapke paas rahungi par aapko chod kar nahi jaaungi..
[dont forget me after maan's return..even if u forget me iam not gonna leave u..if necessary i'll marry maan but i'll never leave you]

she makes baby face and hugs s.d..
but s.d's face glows like a star with that one one word ..

s.d:sachi..?aap hamare maan se shaadi karegi?
[really..will u marry maan?]

geet:(self thought)
meri ek baat se buwaji kitni kush ho rahi hai...agar maan mera dream boy jaisa nahi hoga tho..nahi nahi o accha hi hoga...bachpan mein bhi kitna cute lagtha tha..)

s.d:kya huwa bete?aap kuch bol kyun nahi rahi hai?aap karegi na maan se shaadi?
[wat happened?y u r silent..u'll marry maan na?]

geet:ha..buwaji ke liye kuch bhi...
[anything for u]

both hug each other...
meanwhile,lucky enters the room...

lucky:oye geet didi...buwaji...

geet:lucky tu yaha..aur tum itna chilla kyun rahe ho..mein abhi deaf nahi hoon muje sunayi detha hai..
[lucky..u?and y are u shouting like that..iam not deaf and i can hear u]

lucky:are didi pehle meri baat tho suno...
[ u listen to me first]

geet:muje nahi sunni hai tumhari bakwas...jaa kar aadi se kaho..o buddu sunlega tumhara bakwaas..
[i dont want to listen to u..go and tell aadi whatever u want]

s.d:are bete uski baat tho suno..
[just listen to him na]

geet:nahi buwaji agar ye baat karna shuru kiya na tho isko rokna kisi ki bas ki baat nahi hai..kaamka hamara dimag karab ho jayeega..
ab dekh kya rahe ho...chalo apne dost ke paas..
[no..if he starts his convo then no body can stop him..and our brain will get damaged if we listen to him]

lucky:are didi..aap rukhiye na..
buwaji abhi abhi post master ji ne kaha ki kal maan ka phone aaya tha aur o aaj shaam ko aaraha hai..
[postmaster said that maan is coming today evening]

s.d:kya kaha aapne ...mera maan aaraha hai..
hey babaji aap ka laak laak shukar hai...
lucky agar maan kal phone kiya tha tho aap hume abhi bata rahe ho aur maan ghar par phone kyun nahi kiya..boliye na..
[what?my maan is coming today and u are informing me now..?y didn't u inform me yesterday and y didn't he called at home?tell me..]

lucky:buwaji shaant hojayiye...post master ji muje abhi bataya hai..aur maan isliye waha phone kiya hoga kyun ki uske paas hamara ghar ka number nahi hoga..jab o gaya tha tab village mein sirf ek hi phone tha na aur o bhi post office mein..aap fikr mat kijiye post master ji ne maan ko ghar ka no diya hai aur wo thodi der mein yah pahunch ne se pehle hume call karega..
[just relax!he just informed me now and maan called there because he dont know the number and dont worry he'll call us after sometime before his arrival as post master gave him the number]

s.d:accha teek hum abhi jaakar sabko batate hai...aap station jaakar hamare maan ko le aayiye...
[i'll inform evry one about this..u go to station to pick maan]

s.d instantly moves from there to inform every one...
geet and lucky feels happy for her...

precap:
aadi:maan tu aagaya?

sorry for mistakes and bear with my language as iam not that fluent in them but tried my best to give best...plz comment and negative comments are mostly welcome...actually i want them so that i can improve myself...

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-mona

link to next part:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/51865663

Edited by maneetlover1 - 13 years ago

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Remya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#145

is maan really cumg..
ya sum1 in his name s trying to get into the family..?
Luvd the update.

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nagajyothi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#146

wow... awesome update dear...
loved it...
buaji is soo sad...
geet ne maan se shadi... yay...
maan is coming wow...
continue soon dear...
thanks 4 the pm

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quit

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Posted: 13 years ago

#147

hey mona its nice one..

so maan/karan is a killer or karn going disguise and come as maan
its very confusing waiting for next part...

Edited by nishha - 13 years ago

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shweta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#148

loved it waitng for maneet confrontation

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maaneetmaahi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#149

OMG!!!...maan geet know each other from childhood...
superb update...
maan is coming to home..something fishy!!..
thank u for the update and pm..
please continue soon...