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Mounika sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: valli22
nicepart...
i think maan n karan look same

thanx😊😊

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Mounika sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: DDbiggestfan
Amazing part...
Loved it...
Thanks 4 d pm..

thanx dear😊😊

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Mounika sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: spvd
part 4
nice part...
so Maan and Geet are related and cousins...
Maan is coming back...
very good...
cont soon dear...

thank u so much deepa😊😊
will continue soon...
love ya

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Mounika sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#204

thanx for ur love and support dearies...keep suppoting me in the same way...
i replied to all ur comments...

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Mounika sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#205

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                                              PART-5
@mumbai:

karan and vikram reaches the building from where they have to carry out their operation...

vikram:so karan are u ready..

karan:tum jaa kar apna position le lo...get ready..
[u go and take ur position...get ready]

vikram:ok..

karan enters the building and vikram will be outside as he have to be ready with his plan outside to escape from there...
karan reaches the window of one of the floor...
       the building is just opposite to the stadium in which party meeting of rajeev sharma is held...the stadium is surrounded by police security and also with loud speakers...the sound is very loud that even shooting sound cannot be heard in that...
               the party meeting starts and rajeev sharma starts giving his so called speech...only ss is aware that karan is in opposite bulding..rajeev sharma just knows that he is gonna be shot but not
fatally..ss is waiting for karan to shoot and at the same time he is very scared of the situation as the stadium is surrounded with cops and if karan gets caught he is gonna die first...

              karan aims the gun at rajeev sharma and slows his fingers starts moving near to trigger...but however,before karan could shoot some body shoots rajeev sharma that too fatally..
nobody could hear the bullet sound in that crowd but they realise it as soon as they witness rajeev sharma lands on the ground with bullet in his fore head...

ss:rajeev ye kya hogaya tumhare saath...police tum log dek kya rahe ho?dekho waha hai o murderer..(he points his finger towards karan)
jao jaakar use pakdo warna wo bhag jaayega...
(he starts crying crocodile tears)
[rajeev..why this happened to u...police..wat are u waiting for..?go and catch that criminal(he points his finger towards karan)..otherwise he'll escape from there..and starts crying crocodile tears]

police man:yes sir..

               here karan is totally shocked with ss's act and with the real death of rajeev sharma...

karan:mein ne tho goli nahi maara..tho phir ye kese ho saktha hai?
[i didn't even shoot him then how could this happen?]

             he notices the police moving towards building and instantly moves from there...however,his attempts go in vain as police were very quick to surround the building...

                he then reaches the window from where he could see vikram who is waiting for him in karan's car to escape from there...but the car in which vikram is sitting meet with a big accident...

karan:oh god!vikram...
iam sorry vikram...

         karan could hear the foot steps of police men who were climbing steps to reach the floor in which karan is standing...


karan:i think muje yaha se jaana chahiye...
[i think i have to move from here]

                karan quickly goes to the top of the skyscraper but he become helpless with police behind him...he is not scared or afraid of them but at the same time he don't want to be in the hands especially for that murder which he did not do...
now he is standing at the corner of the building with his back facing the cops...
one of the cop aims gun towards karan but his identity is unnoticed by the cops...

cop:stop there...wahi ruk jao...
apne aap surrender hojao...agar bhagne ki koshish bhi ki na tho mein tumhe shoot kar saktha hoon...
[stop there...u better surrender urself...if u even try to escape then i may shoot u]

            but our karan is in no mood to listen to his crap and not even afraid of them...he just stood there with both his hands helding his waist and just observing his surrounding at the same time panting...
the cop is slowly approaching with gun in his hands and it is aimed towards karan...karan knows that the man is approaching him..


cop:look..if u even try to think that you can escape from us,then i want to make it clear with u that it is gonna remain as ur dream becoz police have already surrounded the building and u have no way to escape rather than surrendering urself...

            but our karan who don't allow anyone to go against his will,who wont like to dance like a doll according to other's wish smirks...as if he is saying them...
tum mera kuch nahi bigad sakthe ho...

          police were very near to him and about to catch him but what can they if they are not fortunate to face our lion...
because a train comes at the right time in the railway station which is present at the back of the building,the same where karan is standing and could see it infront of him... he uses a rope which was just a step far awat from him and jumps from the sky scrapper on to the train...
thus police fails to find his identity also...
as soon as karan jumps from the building...police reach the edge where karan was standing...

cop:oh god!how does he do that?
tum koi bhi ho...mujse bach nahi paaoge...
[who ever u are...but u cant save urself from me]

          karan enters inside the train through the door of the train...a passenger who is sitting near the train gets flabbergasted to see karan entering the train in such unique way...
karan goes and settles in a seat that too very normally as if nothing has happened...

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@hoshiarpur:

aadi:buwaji..buwaji...

s.d comes out of the kitchen along with geet...

s.d:kya huwa bete...jaldi batayiye...humein maan ke liye khaana bhi tho banana hai...
[what happened?plz tell me soon..i have to prepare food for maan]

aadi:(with his same silly smile)buwaji maan ka phone aaya tha...o ab train mein hai aur 2 ghante mein hoshiarpur pahunchjayega...
[i received maan's call just now..he said that he is in train now and will be here in 2 hours]

s.d:(excitely)kya maan ka phone aaya tha...aur aapne hume nahi bhulaya..hume hamare maan se baat karni thi...(and glares aadi)
[what maan called u?and u didn't even informed me?i want to talk to him]

geet tries to pacify her...

geet:buwaji...maan thodi der mein aap hi ke paas aajayega aur wo bhi humesha humesha ke liye..tab aap unse jee bhar ke baatkijiye ga...
[buwaji...maan will be here soon and u can talk to him as much as u can]

s.d:ha bete...humare maan humare paas hoga(smiles)
[ha...my maan will be with me..]

lucky:tho hum station chale...maan ko pick karne
[shall we go to station to pick maan]

aadi:ha lucky chalo...

geet:ek minute...maan tho 2 ghante baad hi hoshiarpur pahunchega na. tho phir tum dono abhi se station jaakar kya karoge?
[one min...maan is going to reach hoshiarpur after 2 hours then y u people want to go nowitself]

lucky:didi aap tho jaanthi hai...is trains ka kuch barosa nahi...kabhi late aathe hai kabhi jaldi...isliye abhi se jaa kar maan ka wait karthe hai...
[di..u know that we cant believe in train timings...once they come late and once very fast..so we want to wait there from now]

geet:ek minute...teek hai tum dono station tho jaayenge par maan ko kese pehchanenge?o tho bada hogaya hoga na...isiliye kehthi hoon buddu ho tum log...
[one min...u'll go to the station..that's ok but how will u recognize maan as he is grown up now]

aadi:di...hum dono buddu ho tho kya huwa maan tho hum se samajdaar hai na...o hume pehchanega...
[no problem...maan is intelligent and he can recognize us easily]

geet:ek minute...

aadi:(irritatingly)ab kya huwa di..
[wat happened now]

geet:tum dono sirf buddu nahi..bewakuf ho...
[u both are not only buddus but also stupids]

lucky:bewakoof???aur hum?

geet:aur nahi tho kya?maan tum dono ko kese pehchanega?ab tum dono bhi bade hogaye ho na...
[how can maan recognize u?u both are also grown up now]

lucky:didi...aap insaan hai ya question bank?itne saare sawal shayad exam mein bhi nahi poochthe honge...
[didi...are u a human being or a question bank?we may not find these many questions even in exam]

geet:accha bacchu mein tum dono ka madad karna charahi hoon aur tum mera mazak uda raha hai?ruk abhi mazak chakati hoon...
[oh..here iam trying to help u and u are teasing me...wait..i'll show u]

s.d:waise lucky geet bilkul teek keh rahi hai..
[actually geet is right]

geet gives victorious smile to lucky...

s.d:ek kaam karthe hai..hum bhi aapke saath station chalthe hai...maan apni maa ko tho jat se pehchanlenge na...
geet bete aap khana banalijiye hum station jakar aathe hai..
[better i'll accompany u people..maan will definitely recognize his mom na...
geet u take care of food]

geet:ji

three of them go to station to receive maan...

precap:
s.d:maan bete aap aagaye apni maa ke paas...

sorry for mistakes and bear with my language as iam not that fluent in them but tried my best to give best...plz comment and negative comments are mostly welcome...actually i want them so that i can improve myself...

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-mona
LINK TO NEXT PART:
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2651796/maaneet-ss-wanted-thread2-added?pn=49

Edited by maneetlover1 - 13 years ago

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maaneetmaahi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#206

Awesome update...
eagerly waiting for maaneet meeting dear..
update nxt part soon

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Deepa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#207

part 5
nice part...
who shot that man if not Maan/Karan?
what happened to Vikram?
cont soon...

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stuti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#208

Wonderful update...
I just love the concept of the this story...mam as a killer and geet as an innocent but mischievous village girl...
Good concept...
Just one confusion...if s.d is geet's bua and maan her cousin then how can mam and geet fall in love...how can s.d ask get to marry her son..bua's son is considered.as a brother in india..plz do clear this confusion...
Continue soon...

Edited by icy_magma - 13 years ago

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Sonia KN

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Posted: 13 years ago

#209

This seems picture in front...n the Geet part as always too funny...Ya Maan's part till now seems heavy per jab Geet aati..hai...its really good..lets see how they gonna face each other 😃