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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved this ff...
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so geet poor gal doesnt know the dirty tricks of neev and brij...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Read all parts
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved the update
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precap 😡 =O
haha shame on sasha
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Part 7

It was 8:00 o clock when pinky woke Geet up from her deep sleep. Geet wake up we are going to get late for uni with that pinky went to washroom and came out with mug of water in her hand's. In next moment wter was all over Geet.

Geet' What did you do that for? I was awake.' Pinky ' yah I could see that. Now listen up, I just forgot my shirt home so I'll get ready at home and be right back to you guy's up.' Geet 'ok'.

'I've looked on many women with lust. I've committed adultery in my heart many times. God knows I will do this and forgives me.' Jimmy carter

After sometime Geet came down all dressed up in jean's and long sleeve plaid shirt with scarf around her neck. looking really beautiful. Geet made breakfast for Riji and was about to call her but stoped when she saw Neev coming toward's her. She got confused ' what is he doing here this early?' She looked at the time it was just 8:30. She placed Riji's breakfast on table and saw neev was standing just few step's away from her. She was nervous and confused because Neev never came this close to her or even came to meet her like this. Whenever he used to come at home he used to meet brij or just say hi from far but never this close. Brij bhai is not even here. What is he doing here.

Neev came to her. He was unable to take his eye's of her. 'She looks so beautiful maybe it's the right time I should just do it and nobody will know about it and she won't tell anyone due to fear and Brij is not hear either. Yes it's the right time.' Thought Neev.

Geet out of nervous just said 'hi' Neev ' uhhh hi Geet . How are you?' withthat Neev moved forward and took Geet's hand in his and moved his thumb gently on the upper side of her hand. Geet in perplexed state said 'I I am fine.' Geet was not at all liking his touch so she immediately withdraw her hand and asked ' Can I do something for you?' Neev one step closer and Geet moved back wards until she touched the basin. She was about to move away when Neev put his both hands on either side of her and trapped her between him and basin.

Geet was about to say ' what are'..' When Neev put his hand on her lip's and said 'ssshhh not a single word just listen to me han?' Geet out of fear just nodded her head. Neev put his one hand around her waist and other hand on her face and started tracing line's on her forehead and then side of her cheek. sweat started to foam on her face. Neev ' So beautiful. You know Geet I ..' before Neev could go any further. Riji came down and shouted Geet's name.

Neev immediately withdraw his hand's from her. Gosh totally forgot about Riji. Dam her. I was just going to do that uhhh. Geet took advantage of this and ran toward's Riji's room. And locked the door.

Neev out of frustration banged hi hand on the wall and left from their extremely angry. Pinky was just getting out of her car when she saw Neev leaving and thought. Brij is not here then what was he doing here? 'Oh my God! What if he had done something to Geet? I better go inside and check.'

Riji '14' ' Di what happened? You look scared.' Geet ' Ahhh ummm nothing just nothing. You tell why were you shouting?' Riji maybe young but had really sharp and clever mind unlike Geet who was innocent and Nave. Riji could clearly see that something was wrong but didn't say anything just said ' I can't find my blue shirt.' Geet started searching for her blue shirt in her woardrobe and showed riji her blue shirt Geet ' Here it is.' Riji 'oh I didn't looked at that side.thank's di'

Pinky entered Geet's house and shouted her name 'Geet'. Inside riji's room Geet got scared and thought that something might happened to Pinky without any second thought she went to pinky.

'The way to love anything is to realize that it maybe lost' G.k Chesterton.

Maan was setting restless in office when Adi entered in office with the file in his hand. Adi 'Sssir this is a file of Mr Brij Handa with each and every info about him.' Maan 'hmmm and what about Neev Mehra? ' adi ' Sir we are still finding about him.' Maan 'Hmmm ok' adi left the cabin and Maan begin to read file. Maan ' This is not enough. I need to know more about him.'

Maan called the dectative and told him to get him each and every info about Brij Handa and Neev Mehra , their profil ,their whereabout's, everything.

Geet came downstair's and asked pinky worriedly ' What happened? Are you alright?' Pinky just hugged Geet. 'You are ok? I just saw Neev leaving. Why was he here?' Hearing Neev's name fear ran through her face. Pinky asked 'Geet are you ok?' Geet yah I am fine and told her about what happned in the kitchen between Neev and her.

Precap

Job interview

I was little unwell so couldn't able to update. I am really sorry for the delay in the update.

Thank you so much for you comments guys.


Edited by Moon002 - 13 years ago
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Part 8

'Again, you can't connect the dots looking forward; you can only connect them looking backwards. So you have to trust that the dots will somehow connect in your future. You have to trust in something - your gut, destiny, life, karma, whatever. This approach has never let me down, and it has made all the difference in my life.' Steve Jobs

Pinky stayed quiet and quietly took Geet and riji to the car. After the droped riji to her school Pinky begin 'How did you feel when Neev touched you?' Geet 'hey! What kind of question is that?' Pinky ' Just answere my question?' Geet 'Disgusted. I don't know why but I don't like his touch.' Pinky ' Then why did you let him? You could have said him no.' Geet 'yah but He just wound't let me. I tried to stop him' Pinky ' Now I am worried. you know Geet. He is not a good guy. You know what we can find a perfect match for you. You still have time.' Geet got angry hearing that and said ' You know it's a sin to think about someone else other then the person you are commited to and second it's my dad's choice beside's it look's normal between every couple.'

Pinky got really worried about it. She just don't know how to make her realize that. After a while they reached university and took their classes. It was a break, Geet and Pinky both were sitting in the lawn of their campus when a young and Handsome dude came to them. Pinky ' Oh I Angad! How are you? Didn't see you in awhile?' Angad ' I am fine. Just caught up with some personal problem's. Hi Geet!' Geet ' Hi' Angad ' Heard you got engaged?? Congratz' Geet was least interested in him so she just said 'Thanks' and left from their. Pinky covered it for her by saying that she had headache And joined Geet.

'She Walks in Beauty,like the night of cloudness claims and starry skies, And all that's best of dark and bright Meet in her aspect and her eye's' Lord Byron

Maan was sitting in his office and thinking about Geet. 'Ahhh she is more beautiful then last I saw her. I just hope that she remember's me.' After a while he received a call from detective who informed him about Brij Handa.

Maan was really shocked to know that Brij was suspected for the murder of Mr Mohinder Handa and Neev Mehra was a rich spoiled brat. He had spent his many nights with countless models and was charged for teasing a lady at the age of 15. Now maan was sure that Neev was not at all interested in Geet but her body. Thinking that he got really scared. He was thinking about a quick plan about getting Geet away from Neev when adi came and informed him that he needed to interview some girls for the secetary post. Maan told Adi to held the interviews tomorrow.

Pinky came to office after droping Geet at her home. Pinky was at the reception desk when Adi came out of Maan's cabin. Pinky ' Good evening Adi sir! Why are you in hurry?' Adi 'Good evening Pinky! Actully I have to do some sitting arrangement's for tomorrow's interview.' 'Job interview' Pinky exclaimed with excitement 'but for what post?' Adi ' For secetary post. You know that Maan sir's last secetary left because of his anger so that's why.' Pinky ' What's the time of interview?' Adi '9 'o' Clock. I should go know.'

Pinky was really excited when she got home and straight away called Geet. Pinky 'Hello Geet! Guess what I have got a really Good new's for you' Geet ' Really What?' Pinky ' Interview's have been held for the sectary post.' Geet exclaimed in joy ' When? Pinky 'uhhh Tomorrow' Geet Worriedly ' What tomorrow but I am not ready yet and what about university??' Pinky ' Don't worry Geet I know you will be fine and university its at 9 , it will take an hour or so and secondly tomorrow is Wednesday our first class start's at 11 so just relax.

Geet was not sure about that but she agreed for the sake of pinky.

Next morning Geet got ready for the interview. She wore jeans and White shirt with scarf on it with no make. Hairs tied in pony. Looking simple yet beautiful.

'Pinky I am really scared' said Geet Pinky Don,t worry to much you will do fine. Best of luck. Just answere the question's confidently. Ok? Geet ' Hmmm' was all Geet said and steped out of the car and went inside.

Precap

Maan shocked



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Edited by Moon002 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
thanks for the pm😊
u updated after many days
i was desperately waiting for ur update
but anyways u were not well so its not ur fault
take care of urself.😊
now coming to updates
first of all want to say i am first to read and comment.so,i am happy about that 😃😃😃😃
😃now coming to main point the updates
for 7th part:-neev is a really a very bad guy .maan should teach him some good lessosns for what he did with geet.😆😆
😆i just hate this neev😡😡😡😡
for part 8:-nice part .geet is very sweet and innocent she doesn't know about the real intensions of neev.now the story is progressing now geet we will join maan's company.
precap is really intersting waiting for what shock maan will get.😲
update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
lovely parts dear
ossum
so i think maan is shock to see geet there
get well soon dear
and update
ll be waiting for the update dear

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