NEW FF MAANEET TUJHKO JO PAAYA THD3 UPD pt26 pg120 - Page 25

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Posted: 13 years ago
superb part cont soon thanks for pm
HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update👏
Maaneet moments so romantic😳
Songs selection and pictures are perfect..⭐️
Continue soon
Eagerly waiting for next😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb update dear.

Maneet moments are oh so very cute.

loving this story.

Pls continue soon.

Thanx for pm dear.
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowww loved it
awesome part n the rain dance was awesome
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Posted: 13 years ago
mindblowing updates. i am speechless. 18 update was rocking. loved the gifts. hope the twists r happy ones. [my like button is not working}.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome Part
Amazing FF
waiting for next
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Posted: 13 years ago

wow Piggy what an update...rain sequence was just beautiful...i am still lost in it

I don't know how you manage such apt pics for your every word...it is like watching an episode
They both realised and confessed their feelings in their own way...it was utterly romantic and emotional at the same time. on one side you have Maan who has been waiting for this moment for so long and loves her unconditionally. On other side is Geet who hates love as she felt she never got it from anyone.
Truly fantastic
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for your love and support dear friends. Here is the next part I hope each one of u would enjoy reading it.
Twist coming in few updates be prepared for it
All those who are comfortable with Hindi kindly do not read the translations
love-Piya
PART 20

The intensity of the rain increased it seemed that the entire universe was celebrating their union

Both of them had lost the count of time they were not sure for how long they were standing in the rain hugging each other but it was the most peaceful moment for both of them

If God had granted them a wish then both would have requested God to stop the flow of time at this particular stage

It really felt like heaven both were not sure whether they were alive or not but somewhere deep in their heart they knew that they were waiting for this moment

Maan: (thinking)

"Kaash aaj khuda ki mujhpar inayat ho jaaye

Aur waqt ka lamha yahi tham jaaye

Yuhi tumhe apni baho mein samete hue

Zindagi ka har lamha beeth jaaye"

[I wish God showers me with his blessings today

May this moment stop now and remain between us

I wish that my whole life passes holding u in my arms]

Geet: (thinking)

"Iss gadhi k intezaar mein najane kitne lamhe beet gaye

Yuh keh lo k zindagi k kuch haseen lamhe patjhad mein badal gaye

Tumne hume yun chu liya toh vaadiyon mein dhadkano ki aawaz gunjne lagi

Humhe apne aaghosh mein le liya toh khushiyon ki bauchar humpar hone lagi

Najaane ye kaisa ehsaas hai najaane ye kaisi pyaas hai

Shayad hum ye baat jaan chuke hai ya shayad aaj bhi nasamaj bane baithe hai

Kuch toh baat hai humare beech jo aaj phatchad ne bahar ka roop le liya

Kuch toh rishta hai humare beech jo tumhare chune se hume zinda hone ka ehsaas aaj ho gaya"

[I have been waiting for this moment since ages

Precious chapters of my life turned into a demolishing autumn waiting for this moment

With your simple touch today I could hear my heartbeats echoing in the mountains

You have showered me with contentment by holding me in your arms

What type of emotion is this what type of feeling is this?

Maybe I have the answer to this question or maybe I am still unaware

There is certainly something special between us that today the autumn of my life is giving me the pleasures of springtime

There is an extraordinary bond between us that is making me realize that I am still alive]

Maan's mobile started ringing which forced them to come back to reality

Maan attended the call it was a wrong number

Maan: Geet hume ab chalna chahiye ek baar car ko check kar lethe hai warna main Adi ko phone karke yahi bula lunga [Geet I think we should leave now let us check the car once if it still doesn't start I will inform Adi]

Geet nodded her head

Maan was successful in starting the car both of them were already late so instead of going to the movie both of them go to some other place

Maan gets golgappe for Geet and both of them enjoy eating golgappes

They did not speak much but they were satisfied that today they were together

Maaneet return back to their respective Mansions

Handa Mansion

Geet was lost in her own thoughts

Geet: Jo main kar rahi hoon kya wo sahi hai? [Am I doing the right thing?]

Geet: Aaj pehli baar mujhe apne sawalo k jawab nahi mil rahe ye kaisi uljan hai kya main kabhi inhe suljha paaungi? [There is a strange confusion in my mind as I am unable to find the answers to my questions]

Khurana Mansion

Maan was writing the letter

Maan: Ab ye letter bahut hi jald complete honewala hai Geet main nahi jaanta iss khat ka anth main kaise karunga par ek umeed hai k kaash shuruwat ki tarah iss khat ka anth bhi achha hi ho [I would finish writing this letter very soon I am not sure how would I end this letter but there is a hope in my heart that maybe the end of this letter would be as beautiful as it's start]

Maan stops writing the letter and keeps it back in the book and goes to sleep

Next Day

Maan gets ready for office

Dadima: Maan bete aapko aur Geet ko movie pasand aayi k nahi? [How was movie Maan?]

Maan: Dadima darasal humari car bigad gayi thi issi wajah se hum movie dekhne nahi jaa paaye [Dadima we did not go for the movie as there was some problem with our car]

Dadima: Aap dono movie dekhne k liye nahi gaye? [What you both did not go for the movie?]

Maan: Ji Dadima waise Adi kaha hai? [Yes Dadima btw where is Adi?]

Dadima: Adi college gaya hai keh raha tha aaj koi bahut important baat honewali hai college mein ussi ka discussion karna hai [There is some special event in college today Adi is in college right as he wanted to discuss something with his friends]

Maan: Thik hai Dadima main office k liye nikaltha hoon [Ok Dadima I need to go I am getting late for office]

Dadima: Ji [Ok]

College

The students were busy discussing something

Armaan : Hey Guys aaj prom night hai and let me remind u maroon aur black ye dress code hai waise maine toh apna partner decide kar liya hai main toh Shilpa k saath hi jaayunga [Hey Guys let me remind u that the dress code for the prom night is maroon and black I hope everyone has selected their respective partners I would be going with Shilpa tonight]

Shilpa: Waise Meera tu kiske saath jaayegi? [Meera what about u?]

Meera: Main? [I..]

Adi: Meera prom mein mere saath chalogi? [Will u be my partner?]

Meera: Haan [yes]

Sid: Oye balle balle sabko apne apne partners mil gaye waise aaj prom mein kuch special events ka intezaam kiya hai [Wow so finally everyone has got a partner but there is a special program in today's event]

Riddhima: Prom mein humesha ki tarah dance hoga issmein special kya hai? [As usual there would be a dance event what is extraordinary in this?]

Sid: Wo toh main nahi jaanta par Reema jo k iss event ko handle kar rahi hai usne kaha k aaj ek special surprise hai sab k liye [Reema the incharge of this event was telling me about this she has planned a surprise for all of us]

Adi: Ab wo toh shaam ko hi pata chalega waise Geet kaha hai Meera? [We have to wait till the evening to know about it btw Meera where is Geet?]

Meera: Wo ab tak college nahi aayi wo aaj thoda late aanewali hai [She would be coming late to college]

Adi: Thik hai waise wo aaj prom night par aa rahi haina? [Ok but she is attending tonight's event right?]

Meera: Pata nahi par agar wo aa bhi gayi toh uska partner kaun banega saare ladke toh usse darte hai [I am not sure and even if she agrees to come who would be ready to become her partner every boy is scared of her]

Adi: Bro aur kaun? [Who else other than Bro?]

Meera: Par Maan bhai kaise aa sakthe hai I mean ye function toh sirf college se related logo k liye hai [But this event is only for those who are associated with this college how can Maan bhai attend this fuction?]

Adi :Tum bhool rahi ho Bro iss college k trustee bhi hai [Meera how can u forget that Bro is the trustee of this college]

Meera: Haan ye toh bhool hi gayi thi ab toh the raha k Geet aur Maan bhai ko iss event mein aana hi hoga [Oh yes that means Maan bhai can attend this function along with Geet]

Adi: Main Maan bhai ko mana lunga tum Geet se baat kar lena [I will talk to Bro you talk to Geet]

Meera: Thik hai [Ok]

After finishing the lectures Adi goes to the office and convinces Maan to attend the prom night

Meera is also successful in convincing Geet

Maan dials Geet's number

Geet : Hello Maan kaise ho? [Hello Maan how are u?]

Maan: Tumhari aawaz sun li bus meri saari pareshaniyaan dur ho gayi waise Geet main tumse kuch puchna chahta tha [After hearing your voice all my problems have disappeared Geet I wanted to ask u something]

Geet: Pucho [Go ahead]

Maan:

"Ek gustakhi karne jaa raha hoon

Yun samaj lo falak se uska chaand maangne ja raha hoon

Aukaad toh nahi meri par phir bhi apni kismat ko aazmane jaa raha hoon"

[I am committing a sin right now

As I am planning to take away the moon from its sky today

I do not stand a chance to succeed in my plans but still I want to give a try maybe my destiny has different plans for me]

Maan: Geet mere saath prom par chalogi? [Geet would u attend the prom with me tonight ? ]

Geet: Haan [Yes]

Maan: Main tumhe shaam ko lene aayunga [See u in the evening]

Geet: Main tumhara intezaar karungi [ I would be waiting for u]

Maan: Bye apna khayal rakhna [Take care of yourself]

Geet: Tum bhi [U too]

Evening

Geet was waiting for Maan

She had selected a net sleeve maroon colored knee length dress with black boots

Maan arrives

Maan had selected a maroon shirt with black formal coat and black jeans

Geet was looking gorgeous in this outfit

Maan:

"Shayar ki shayari kahu ya Gaalib ki gajal

Chand ki chandni kahu ya pyar k dariyaan mein khiltha hua kawal

Kudrat ka karishma ho ya khuda ki rehmat

Lafzo k motiyon mein tumhe tarashana mushkil hai

Rango k mehfil mein tumhe pirona mushkil hai

Kya karu bebas hoon bus yahi keh saktha hoon

Kayinaat k daaman mein tumhe sametna mushkil hai"

[R u the poetry of a poet or the song of Gaalib

R u the light of the moon or a beautiful lotus that is present in the lake of love

R u the magic of nature or blessing of the almighty

It is difficult to capture u in the pearl of words

It is difficult to confine u in the congregation of colors

What can I do I am helpless I can just say

That it is difficult to capture u in the folds of this universe]

Maan kissed her hand

Geet: Thanks Maan

Maan: Chale? [Shall we leave?]

Geet: Haan [Yes]

After half an hour drive they reach the venue

Adi and Meera were already present

The program starts

Reema: Guys jaisa k maine kaha tha k aaj k function mein maine kuch special plan kiya hai toh wo special baat ye hai k hum ye dekhna chahthe hai k kya yaha maujood kisi ladke mein itni himmat hai k wo apni lady love ko propose kar sake agar aisa koi ladka yaha maujood hai toh hum sab k saamne uss ladki ko propose karke usse special feel karwaiye [Guys as I had already announced that there is a special thing coming up in today's event so finally it is time to reveal our special plans. We want to see whether any guy has the courage to propose his ladylove in front of everyone can any guy love a girl to such an extent that he can make her feel special if yes then here is your chance]

Shilpa looks at Armaan but Armaan does not move from his place

Reema: Common guys kya kisi mein itni himmat nahi hai? [Is there not even a single guy who has the courage to take up this challenge?]

Geet: Aaj kal kaun aise kisi bhi ladki ko propose karega mera matlab hai saare ladke toh yun chutkiyon mein apni girlfriend badalthe rehthe hai sachha pyar karta hi kaun hai haina Maan? [Who will propose a girl in front of the entire world every boy changes his girlfriend in a matter of seconds true love is no longer present in this world right Maan?]

Maan starts smiling

PRECAP: Will Maan propose Geet?

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Love-Piya

Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Pihu tu sachchi kamaal h beautiful description of deir feelings in dat soul soothing hug...n nature celebrating wid dem n to add stars to d beautiful scenario ur mesmerising verses...
luved dem sweetu...muah muah for each...
but for me geet's verses were d most beautiful...every word was beautifully expressing her longing fear love n d solace she found she found in his arms...bows for dis one sweetu...
haye golgappe mujhe bhi khaane hain...
geet sari uljhane sulajh jayengi apne maan par bharosa rakho...
i hope maan ki ummeed poori ho aur letter ka end shuruat ki tarah khoobsurat ho...
luv u adi n meera for convincing my maaneet for prom...
luved ur beautiful piece of shayari sweetu...n maan ki adaon p to main already fida hoon par har update k baad i fall for him more n more...
haye maan itni khoobsurat tareef kisi larki ka bhi din ban jaye but i know maan ki har ada sirf uski shehzadi k liye h...😔
beautiful shayari sweetu...u truly rock dear...
m damn sure maan is going to propose geet afterall geet ne aisi baat jo keh di...phattoo armaan lol...
beautiful n amazing update sweetu...luved every bit of it...
special ovations n applauds for ur amazing piece of shayaris...
muah sweetu...luvya loadzzz...
Edited by crazydevil87 - 13 years ago
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Piya di... now this is for u...
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
and now this...


amazing update Piya di... dil khush ho gya... especially aapki sari shayaris... OMG... i'm literally drooling over ol of dem...
un sari shayaris ka 1 1 lafz was so beautifully woven... they juz gave a magical touch to ur update...
n Maan ke wo letters.. my god... dil jeet lete hain yaar... they juz bring about a wide smile on my face... 😃 yes yes... letter jaldi se complete hoga... Maan aur Geet se wo MAANEET ho jaega... 😃
yipppeee...!!!!! prom night aa gai...
Piya di... luv u meri farmaish ko puri karne ke lie & Geet n Maan ko wo dresses pehnane k lie... m juz imagine.. un dono dresses me dono kya killer lag rhe honge... hehehhehe...
waah prom night ka surprise to bada acha tha... interesting haan... so girls r testing ki ladke himmat wale hain ya buzdil... sachha pyar krte hain ya time pass... heheheh... sahi hai ladkon ki to lag gai... but hamara MAAN hai na... wo dikhaega Maan Singh Khurana ka jigar n karega Geet ko propose... 😃
m sooo waiting for the nest update...
jaldi karna Piya di...
luv u... ❤️ *hugs* 🤗 🤗
👏👏
Edited by AbbyluvsMaan - 13 years ago

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