MG FF-Till Death Do Us Part#8-Epilogue/Pg109/Jan14 - Page 78

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awsm update but u finished it in a rush
Loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
A BIG THANK YOU

THIS WAS GREAT. CAN YOU POST YOUR FULL FF TOGETHER SOMEWHERE SO THAT IT CAN BE READ EASILY?'

I love this FF. I have read it so many times. I am going to nominate you in the FF awards.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Woww awsome update ritzy
Really really loved it
I will miss this ff :(
Thanks for pm
Love ya :) xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
👏

very beautiful...
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Posted: 13 years ago
First of all thanks Di for mentioning my name 😃
Yeah so I was right one baby girl and one baby boy 😳😳😳 waise maine ladke ka naam Maanav hi socha tha but ladki ka naam samaj mein nahi aa raha tha and u surprised me Mishty se Misha bana diya so sweet
Ek aur khushi ki baat ye hai k Adi Pinky ki beti ka naam Piya hai 😳😳😳 chalo end mein hi sahi mera naam Maaneet k sabse khoobsurat ff mein ek baar aaya hai yipee
Loved the way maan was pampering his Mishty and he took full care of her when she was pregnant
So sab birthday celebrate kar rahe hai aww loved the song it touched my heart its so true "Rahe na rahe hum meheka karenge..." Perfect song Di
Now what should I say this was the end of my fav FF sirf itna kahungi k
"Zindagi k safar mein saikdoh modh aate hai
Kuch yaad reh jaate hai kuch bhool jaate hai
Kuch rishte mitaas bhar jaate hai
Kuch rishte kadwahat ki chap chod jaate hai
Jiski shuruwat hothi hai uska ek anjaam bhi hotha hai
Dil k kareeb rehnewala kabhi kabhi bhichad bhi jaata hai
Tum bhale hi mere nazro k saamne na raho
Tum bhale hi apna daaman mere haath se chuda do
Tum bhale hi mujhse nazre pher lo
Par iss dil ka kya karoge jispar tumhari jhalak humesha k liye kaid ho chuki hai
Najaane kaise humari ruh mein tumhari parchayi sama chuki hai
Shayad hum ab dubara kabhi na mile par ek vaada karte hai
Tum bhale hi bhula doh par hum apne zehen mein tumhe humesha zinda rakhenge
Jab tak humari saase chal rahi hai tab tak tumhe apne dhadkano mein samaye rakhenge
Humara saath yuhi bana rahega ab toh maut bhi aa jaaye tab bhi hume koi judaa na kar paayega"
In Simple Terms we will stay together TILL DEATH DO US PART
I love u Di and thanks for accepting me in your life
muahh
urs Piggy (Piya)
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Posted: 13 years ago
My comment updated on page 113.
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Posted: 13 years ago
a very lovely ending...

thanks for such a wonderful story ritzy...
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG..it ended😭

but nice end dear...
and congrates for new ff😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful ending!
loved your writing
time to move onto the next FF.. vivah!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Dear Ritzy:

For someone who claims to not have written any FF before, I must say you are doing a fabulous job of crafting such a beautiful story full of tenderness, laughter, family bonding, touching and very grounded-in-reality moments and such memorable dialogue. More power to your pen gal!

Like you, the ONLY TV serial I have ever watched (on YouTube) was Geet and like scores of others, I was captivated by the unique story and the incredible acting by the two leads. Awesome writers like you, Muskanp, Eternal_Maneet... continue to keep the serial alive in our hearts and imagination through your magical writing.

I have read your FF a doz times and it has almost become therapeutic -- whenever, I need to de stress, I randomly flip through some of your updates or Pyaar Ka Ehsaas by Muskaan. Happy is the day for your readers that you were inspired by such a fine writer like Muskan and decided to give your talent and creative juices an opportunity to express itself.

There are two aspects of this story that I have loved the most. Your portrayal of the lovely relationship between the leads and the various family members; it is so real. The other other is the constant "nok-jhok" and the easy banter and your expressive dialogue that everyone shares within this fictional family -- it reminded me of my interactions with my own extended family and how we horse around and never miss an opportunity to pull leach others' legs.

I was very disappointed that "Till Death.." ended. I was so looking forward to reading many many updates about this beautiful family and their daily lives; I hope you will consider writing "Till Death..." season 2. In the new year, I hope you will also continue to give us other heartwarming stories. Good luck.

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