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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

omg!es mission ke liye 3 months wait karna padega ...

oh no...!
but studies r imp..
all the best..


thanks ramya :) I hope u dont feel bad...will give all the updates once I come back 😊
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awesome part.

will miss ur updates 4 three months but

all the best n come back soon.
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Awesome part.
I loved it.
Next part is gona to be interesting.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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LOVED IT DEAR CONTINUE SOON... WANTS TO SEE MSK FACE AGAIN HOW HE FEELS AFTER GEETS ANOTHER PRANK...

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nice part
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loving the brat version of Geet..
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fabuls. jaldi se nxt one plz
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Okies! I am back! But I cant promise when the next part will be updated :) anyway guys...I have another idea for an FF...it is a psychological story on maaneet...I just want to know how many of you are interested in reading it...please let me know :)
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Originally posted by: bharadwajrad

Okies! I am back! But I cant promise when the next part will be updated :) anyway guys...I have another idea for an FF...it is a psychological story on maaneet...I just want to know how many of you are interested in reading it...please let me know :)



welcome back dear 😊
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Okay guys, here is the update 😊 Please don't forget to like and comment! I want LONG COMMENTS! No one gives me them! Boo Hoo! Okay enough of drama! here u go...

CHAPTER 3

Hotel Green Life's staff members geared up for the biggest corporate party they were going to host. People from every corner of the world would be attending it, they had been told. So it was a do or die chance for them. If they did, then their hotel would sky rocket and become internationally famous, but if they messed it up then no one would turn up into their hotel again. This was the order that Maan Singh Khurana, the owner of Khurana Group of Industries, threw on them.

When it came to his business, Maan wasn't the one ready to compromise. He wanted everything perfect. One mistake and the guilty were punished very severely and they had to endure the wrath of this rude business tycoon lifelong. So, arrangements were made taking extreme caution.

But, the hotel people had to listen to orders of someone else, who was way to higher than Maan Singh Khurana for them: their employer's daughter. But she, unlike Maan wasn't rude but it didn't mean they could slack in their work. She would never leave them until they did what they were supposed to do and today, to add to the employees' misery, their boss aka Geet Handa was also coming to the hotel to supervise their arrangements. It meant double wrath. 'Oh god! Please save us!' was the only chant under the breaths of the workers.

Geet walked inside in style. Her curly, dark auburn hair cascaded down her shoulders, with tendrils of hair astray. Clad in a crisp white shirt and a khaki colored skirt, she was looking like a typical, young business woman. Her hazel eyes were covered in thick sunglasses and her face wore minimal make up yet she looked really attractive. Her heels were resonating as she walked down the lobby to her chamber.

As soon as she sat in her high chair, she made a call to the hotel manager and asked him to come inside along with 2 helpers. The plan was set and even the reputation of her hotel wasn't given importance in front of her status of prankster that she needed to uphold and the promise she had given to her friend. She smirked as she twirled her pen between her fingers and thought of the experience waiting for that poor chap. But the only mistake she had made was that she had underestimated Maan Singh Khurana.

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'Geet ma'am is surely going to make us hang by thread' groaned one of the employees after they heard what they were supposed to do. This definitely would make Maan Singh Khurana's anger explode. They were truly not ready for that. But, unfortunately, Geet was their boss and they were forced to listen to her, no matter how preposterous her ideas seemed. Today, only god could save them and the reputation of their hotel.

'Let's inform to sir, he will know how to put an end to this' squealed one of the employees.

'Are you mad??? Do you want to get fired because sir is never going to believe anything against Geet ma'am. You know that, right?'

'Oh damn! I have never been so helpless in my life. If that Maan Singh Khurana comes to know of this then we are dead for sure. He will make our lives hell.'

'If such situation comes then I will say the truth, that Geet ma'am asked us to do this. If it wasn't for her then probably we would never be in this life threatening situation.'

'Yeah'I think that would be ideal but poor Geet ma'am, she is gonna suffer from his hands''

'But who on earth told her to do this to the Maan Singh Khurana?? We didn't, so don't worry.'

The employees scuttled away after completing their assigned job, feeling extremely fearful thinking about the reaction of Maan Singh Khurana!

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Maan walked into the hotel one hour prior to the commencement of the party. He personally wanted to check everything. He didn't want any embarrassing situations to arise today. He had enough of them. His two bodyguards checked everything in the venue and Maan was satisfied that everything was arranged the way he had hoped. There was still time for the party so he thought he would go to his room he had booked and freshen up before welcoming the delegates. He asked the guard to stay downstairs so that they would be able to inform if anyone comes early and took a lift to the 7 floor the hotel, to go to his suite.

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Geet and Meghna saw him going to his suite and they gave a quick high five to each other before grabbing the camcorder and running after him to record the hilarious scene that would take place.

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Maan swiped the card to enter his suite. As soon as he did, a whole bucket of water splashed on him from above and the bucket settled on his head.

'WHAT THE HECK!!!' he screamed and threw the bucket down from his head. His eyes were spitting fire and he looked extremely infuriated at this cheap trick. He glanced around the room and took one step inside.

He suddenly slipped on the oil that had been poured on the floor and fell on the floor with a thud. His formals were coated in grease oil and had become extremely dirty. His hair had been messed up and he was looking completely dishelved. He tried to get up and in turn started slipping more as his imported shoes didn't have the capacity to provide friction against the oil. As a result, he skidded and crashed headlong into a cabinet that was right in front of him. No sooner did he went and crashed into the cabinet then all the paints that were stored in it spilled on him, making him look as though he had come out of a paint fighting session. He looked like a total joker.

His anger broke its limit and he roared like a lion. The room service people came inside to find an extremely messy Maan Singh Khurana. They looked at him for one meaningful second and then burst out laughing. Maan was extremely angry and in that anger, he slapped the employee nearest to him who stumbled on the floor. The employees got a shock of their life and immediately stuttered an apology.

'Who cares your damn apology! Let me tell you, you have done a grave mistake and you are going to suffer from my hands. Go bring me extra pairs of clothes' he barked and lady cleaner ran away from the room.

Maan went to shower to get himself cleaned of all the paints and to his fury, the taps weren't working. He came out, wrapped in a towel and shouted again'what kind of filthy hotel is this? Who stores paints in the suits and the taps in the bathroom aren't working. Damn! Get it fixed! FIX IT! NOW!!!'

The hotel manager came and apologized for the inconvenience caused. He said regretfully 'Sir, you have been given the wrong suite. This isn't your room. We are very sorry for the inconvenience. Please shift to room 637. That is your suite.'

'Oh really? Then who on earth gave me this room? Tell me his name and I will rip him into pieces. What do you think of yourselves? This damn hotel of yours will never see its business again, I swear!'

'Sir, we are extremely sorry. The employee has made a small mistake and handed you the keys of 737 instead of 637. We are extremely sorry. Please do forgive us. This will be the last time. Sorry! Truly sorry sir!'

Maan, who was getting extremely irritated because of the paints, didn't even wait for the cleaner to bring clothes and stormed out of the room only in a towel. The people in the corridor looked at him with their mouths open and as soon as he crossed them, they broke into fits of laughter. The laughter echoed in his ears making him more and more angry by each passing second. He went into the lift only to be laughed at again because of his colourful avatar and he went inside 637 and banged the door with such a force that the whole floor shook as its impact.

Here, Geet and Meghna emerged out of the shadows looking gleeful that their plan had been a wonderful success. They hugged each other and hopped down to Geet's cabin to replay the video and have another dose of laughter looking at the most powerful business tycoon ridiculed in front of everyone.

PRECAP:

Hotel Green life shuts down.

Edited by bharadwajrad - 13 years ago

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