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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the updates...
oops seems like maan has changed a lot..
sameer has always been a wrong guide to him...
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I like geet scolding to maan for her friend...moly also knows that he changed b'coss of sammar...and geet reaction was stupid heart breker...
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Awsome prt,maan changed a lot...
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maan blindly following sameer's advice
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At the end of the day, geet silently sat at the front of the bus while maan at the back with his new found GF. She just wonders... Sammer have left for uni otherwise she would have asked him to fix everything. "stupid heart Breaker" geet complained.

Molly sat next to geet, who was still lost in the book. "Molly di, I was thinking..."
"yes?"
"why can't we make a plan to fix him? I mean he is not all that b-a-d!" geets word disappeared with Molly's glare. She forcefully smiled, trying her best not to heart her.
"how can you not see bad in him?"
"he was never like that, it's just one or two word usally irritates him, and he will do anything for attention." geet pleadingly looked at her.then back at maan.

As they slowly walked off together, geet kept looking at maan, how he managed to change so much. It's not like she haven't hard what sammer used to tell him.

"maan..."
"yes..." he was busy looking for the key in his pocket, while his phone wouldn't stop beeping.
"au..."
"if this is something about Molly then I don't like her to!"
"no- it's not that..."
"then?"
"why are you like this? You always used to be quit, you barely spoke to me... Then what happen?" maan spines around, gazing upon geets questioning eyes. He wasn't sure what to say, what to answer...
"why you asking me this?"
"are you doing this only for attention... Then don't..."

Maan couldn't understand exactly what she meant,, nor his mind wanted to. He walked off, locking the door, silently sat there for a minute or two, trying to read geets eyes. Trying to concentrate... It wasn't long before the beeping of the phone again disturbed him.

At dinner, maan kept silent, while everyone trying to make him comfort, he always loved his time with family, but like geet pointed out what happens when he steps out of the house.

Geet came and sat next to him, both exchanged a quick glare before eating the diner in silent. Her hair was rigged back in a ponytail, wearing a red simple kurti & maan with a white shirt. Which also seems to be his favorite color now days. He watched how geet ate her dinner, then observed at other. Wondering what to ask and what to say...

Next morning, maan slowly opens his eyes, cleaning the odd words of geet from last night. He sat up, rubbing his eyes, wondering what exactly have happen to him last night, usally he is not like that, never, but geet is family, maybe that's why her word is more effective to him then anyone els... But that's not mean he will change.

Maan rushed up from the bed, quickly taking a cold shower after 1 hour of geet spending in the bathroom, then dressed up. He rushed down, taking a toast from the kitchen and ran out, flowed by geet.
"wait... Wait..." geet shouted from the back. Maan twisted his neck to the sideways to see her from corner of his eyes running with 4 bags. Very heavy.
"why are you carrying this many bags?"
"umm... One for P.E, one for dance... And one with books and another with lunch. And another for rugby protection." geet twists her lips "that's 5, where is my 5th bag?" she spines around, hoping she have not dropped any. "oh no I left it at home!" geet frowned. She started to panic.
"if I don't take it then those girls will beat me up!" geet panicked even more. Se dropped all the bag on the floor and ran straight towards home again.

Maan stood there, confused, looking at the 4 bags. "i am going!"
"NO YOU WONT!" she shouts back.

Maan ignored her words, he just couldn't leave the bags, he took the bag and walked off. Geet missed the school bus!

As maan walked in trough the black mettle school gate everyone starred at him. Now it's not something usal for maan to carry a girls bag. Few of his girlfriend came straight running to him.
"whose bags are this?" maan looked at the bag, who seems to be least bothered to answer. Nun of there problem, but who would tell maan that's jealousy.
"why?"
"because I am asking wise bag are they?" one of maans current GF demanded an answer. He ignored and walked straight to geets locker. Her main bag was there, therefore her keys. He opens the bag, and starts to look for the key.
"why are you opening a girls bag?" few girls group were sailing at him from the far, while his GF annoyingly wouldn't stop asking question.

Maan opens geets locker and shoves everything in, locking the locker and then shutting it down, putting the key in his bag.
He slowly turns around, very irritated, "you are dumped!" the word wasn't something new, but every time most of the girls forms tear on there eyes.

Break up of maan spread all over the school like a rocket. But surly it's a very good news for a girl, as maan was never single even for a minute.

...

Rano dropped geet. Who is now more worried about where did maan took her stuff. "mama please call maan na... I don't even have my phone..."
"he should be in biology class now. Just go and ask..." Rano smile and drive off.

Maans new GF was no other then his biology class buddy. Who was thrilled and nearly had wary attack, after 3 years of crash he eventually asked her out.

A small voice catches maans attention. He looks up instantly. It's geet. In-front of him she could kill him with words, but infront of people she is like forbidden to talk. She looked at everyone, they were two years older and looked scary.

The teacher question, she instantly looked at maan. And everyone moved there gaze from geet to maan, the GF was already jealousy.

"she is with me sir... Can we go outside and talk?" geet smiled. Lucky she had to say no word. Both walked out.

next part on its way :)
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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 13 years ago
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omg omg omg u updated..yeppy
its very very very very nice..
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awesome ...part
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superb update dear...so geet's words effects maan great...

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