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Maan observed sammer for while after that and then flows him. He sometime do talk to him. But that was rare.
"leave them before they leave me how can I do that?"
Sammer mouths fell right open, did maan spoke to him? No- no... More then one or two words.
"you want my advice?" sammer wonder with big eyes.
"I guess so!" maan looked here and there.
"well, yes that's the easy option. I do that with my girlfriends!"
"girlfriends?"
Sammer rolled his eyes. "Just wait until you come to the high-school dude!"

Maan was rather confused.. He went out with sammer sometime during the summer or satires at geet playing video game. For him, summer was supper slow, every minute was stuck its place. It would not move.

"play with me!" geet suggested. He hesitatie for a minute before joining. Geet handed him one of the controller and observed him in what exactly he was up to. She knew well, maan won't be able to play such game, he is used to playing more physical and live game then this.
"you don't have to play if you don't know how to play"
"no! I know how to play!" he snaps.
Geets eyes widens instantly. She looked at him in surprise, rather in aww. Did she here it correctly, maan speaking to her, in- in 3 years!
She came close, sat on her knee, took her long finger and pointed right at his face. Was he real? That's the first expression came in geets head. She wasn't sure what exactly but - but was there any reason to start or say a few words today. Get drank her saliva, still looking at him with confusion.

Maan observed her long small finger kept poking his cheek, then nose, then forehead. His eyes flowed from one place to another. Very confusing. "will you stop that?"

Geet jerked back. He surly was talking to her, and that ain't a lie!
"you are talking to me..."


"you are talking to me" she stood up in her red poker dot dress, one sock leaning down while another pulled high up. She drank her saliva, it was rather too much shock for a 10 years old girl. She looked here and there, left and right. To be 100% positive he was talking with her. "I ain't lying, I hard you talking to me!"

Maan looked down, realizing his truth, promising never to speak to this geet. "yes so!"
Geet jumped and came right across, sitting on her knee, resting her palm against his cheek, then forehead, "are you feeling I'll?"
"no!"
Maan simply replied. Just couldn't understand what exactly she meant.
"why would I be I'll?" maan replied back.
A wide smile formed on geets face. He broke his long meditation. She stood up, held his hand, and pulled him across the living room, letting everyone know, maan is actually talking to her.

Maan just silently observed her, and how instantly everyone started to smile at him, ignoring how hyper geet was. Rano and geets dadi came up to him, patting his cheek.
"I am very proud of you..."

Geet came out of the crowed and pulled him outside, "come we will go outside and play."

The park wasn't that far, only 2 minute walk, and geet knew well all her friends will be there to. And hearing maan is talking, that would be something beyond special.

Simi and ridzy was already there, chasing one another with scooter. She ran towards them, leaving maan to stair.

He never really understood girls, or to be precise any of his friends. If he had any! Geet was screwing and shouting as all three girls chased one another around. Jumping and screaming when sammer with his GF walks in. He is 16,. Very old grown up looking fella.

"you stink of cigarette!" maan told him. Because mr hands smoke, Rano made a restrict rule about not to smoke. Even mr handa go along but him self rather to week to stop. "mom said we are not allowed to smoke!"

Sammer looked here and there. He surly have put some perfume on, but gosh this maan! "common... It's ok. It's cool, you see dad smoking."
Sammers GF , tony, a very beautiful girl, with blond hair, very curvy body, and light blue eyes, came forward and pulled his cheek. "he is so cute"
Maan moved back a little. Wondering what she exactly meant. He pulled a face and then looked at geet, who was running towards them.
"look it's Sam- and- new girlfriend!" geets two friend came along and all three starts tease "ooo"
Maan looked at them with more confusion, wondering what they were exactly talking about.
"are you going to prom with my bro?" tony sighed. She looked down, and smiled. She was a very nice girl, maybe one out of his 3 GF through out the year was reasonable.
"are you coming to dinner tonight? My mum is cooking your fab, well that's what Sam told her! And I over heard..."
Tony sighed even more...
Sammer gave geet a glare to shut up and then both walked off.

Maan flowed geet, wondering what was all that about! He lives his life in so much isolation that new keeps least interested in his surrounding life.

"how do you know her?" maan asked geet. It was still really weird, that all of a sudden maan started to talk to her...
"umm..."
"how do you know She is coming round our house?"
Geet looked at him in aww, when he speak, a dimple forms.
"do you know when you speak a dimple forms" she sighed and teased. Ignoring his words. Geet takes her index finger and started to poke his cheek.
Rimi & simi came along and started to tease him to until maan snaps.
"stop it! How did you know?"
"au mama and papa was talking about it!" geet innocently replied.
"why didn't I know anything?"
"because you were in your room, meditating"

Geet giggled along with other girls. Nun of his words were having any effect at all.
Maan gave another last glare and walked off.

Dinner-

No surprise, tony came around. It was a busy evening, Rano and dadi did not like this at all. But did not disagree to.
Maan sat next to geet in annoyance, mostly everyone was concentrated in this new girl, even geet, who usally wouldn't shut up talking to him. He staved the carrot on his plate, anticipating for the time to move fast, waiting for it go quicker. He dropped his plate to grab Ramos attention which was successfully for a berief moment but then it went back to its path.

Maan was super happy when eventually tiny left, he had this weird hatred towards her now. Just not like he was.



next- opps maan restless...😲

(anything new?)

:)


few more parts on its way.. let me update mahsoos fast :D

xxx


Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 13 years ago
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awsem update so dimple formed oops
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lovely part dear
is he restless for geet dear
ossum part dear...
waiting for the next
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oh yayy... now maan is missing the attention from geet 😆

nice update!! --- hope you did well on your finals! (I hope I did too *fingers crossed*)
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awesom updat loved it
finally maan talked to geet
contnue soon
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good to see you back dear ..
nice update

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