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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 18


Addi he had reached Shimla..at Reena's house..Pinky's cousin….Her husband Mr Arun Walia was class one officer at CM office. So he had reach upto higher authorities .He was able to help Addi.Arun suggested to giv Maan's photo in news paper n local cable network.But Addi denied as Maan was a big name in construction business..also if this news came in media.. some where Khuraans would get this news about Addi's hunt for Maan..it might b dangerous for Maan if he was in any difficult condition .He wanted to keep it as a secret as possible as he could.

Addi decided to start hunt by himself….n his first target was same area…n He was also rite.Maan was missing from that point of hill top area..coz after that ..there were not clip or photos in handy cam n tab memory cards.

Addi searched Maan near by areas to that point….Near by villages… all towns...hospitals.. rest houses..Mandir Gurudawars….but no effect.10 days had been passed.At least there should b any who had seen Maan...when he came to this area…But no body was there.He had lost his every hop...sowin Maan's pics to every one.Even Arun had passed Maan's pics to near by police stations.But nothing happened…As usual one day…Addi left his rest house far away in search of Maan without noticing it was darkening….Even no transport was there...This was not metropolitan where u can move out even at late nite.Here only limited transportation was available..How to go back ..He was thinking when he found a man on motor bike was coming to same side.Surprisingly smile came on his face.He stopped him…But biker crossed him.He started to shout..giving voice to that bikar from behind.After going some meters that biker came back.

Biker: Kyo bhi saab kyo chill a rahhe ho…lutne ka iraada hai…

Addi : Ji dekhiya main kyo lutuna apko..jab k main khud lut sakta hu..I mean I m new to this area….koi bhi akela dekh kar lut sakta hai…dekhiya mujhe vaapis jaane k liye kush nahi mil raha..aur raat ho gayi hai…is thannd main baahar rahha to subha takk kya hogga I don't know….

Biker: To aap yeh chaahte hai..main apko apki jagah per chod du….

Addi: Ji agar aap chod dengay to bahut ahsaan hoga….main forest department k rest house main thehra hu…

Bikar: Bhi saab wohh to yahan se 5 km durr hai.apko chod kar main fir wapis aaya to kitni derr ho jaayegi patta hai…uper se dekhiye pehle he itni baraf padi hai…din main gaadi to kya bike nahi chalti us taraf aap raat ki baat karte hai……aasmaan main kitne baadal hai…bearish to kya..lagta hai…baraf padegi aaj to …

Addi: Agar aap nahi jaa sakte to koi hotel hai yahan to mujhe aap wahi chod dejiye….


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Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Biker: Hotel yahan is chotte se shahr main khaane peenne ko to milay gay kai place…per rahne ko nahi…ha per ek kaam ho sakkta hai…Main yahan pass he k hospital main medicine shop pr kaam karta hu..aur aaj meri night duty hai..aap mere sath chal sakte hain... duty per jo staff hota hai..unke liye wahan arrangmenet hai…aap raat wahi reh lijiye ..kaal kush na kush intjaam ho jayega ( so he gav mid way )

Addi said yes..felt much relieved ..it was like biggest achievement for him to get a shelter at this time n season.Addi put his beg on back n sat on back seat of bike. Biker started conversation wth him

Biker: waise bhi saab aap is mausam main itni raat ko kya kar rahhe thay….yahan k to nahi latay…

Addi: Ji main Delhi se hu..( he was not in mood to talk but he said in limited words)

Biker: theek pehchana….yahan k hotay to season aur transport ki jankaari hoti aur aapko aise problem na hoti…forest department main hai aap.( he thought Addi was in forest rest house might b any official there )

Addi: Nahi ..nahi actually meri jaan pehcaah waale hai…jinhone mere yahan rehne ka arrangement kiya..

Biker: oh ghumne aaye hongay…snow fall ka mazza lene…per aapke liye yeh mazza hogaa..hum jo yahan rehte hai…unke liye sazza hai…( he laughed)

Addi: Nahi bhi saab main yahn ghumne bhi nahi aaya….

Addi could say more Biker put a break to bike.Hospital was in front of them.He parked his bike..in a big hall especially for parking vehicles…as in this season vehicles couldn't b parked in open area.

Biker: Chaliye bhi saab…waise aap baata ra rahhe thay aap yahan ghumne bhi nahi aaye to fir….there should b any reason..if not personal...( he again started conversation)

Addi: Ji sir..personal to hai..per chupaane walla bhi nahi..actually mera koi apna…kai maheene pehle yahan aaya tha…per ghar nahi lauta…kaha hai..kaise haalat main hai…patta nahi…..I thought main dhund lunga…per aab to himmat haarta ja rahha hu…( he was about to cry )

Biker: Yeh to bahut dukh ki baat hai…au raise ilaake main kissi ko binna naam patte dhundna bahut mushkil hai…( he showed interest )

Addi became too emotional ..that he put out Maan's photo which always he had in his pocket

Addi: Kahan challe gaye aap Maan Sir…kahan dhundu aapko…..umeed k saath aaya tha k aap ko sath le kar he jaayuna.( he put off his spects n wiped his tears wht his coat.)

Biker: Maan…yeh naam to jaise sunna hai ( he said thinking )

Addi: Maan…apne sunna hai yeh naam…kahan ( he became restless)

Biker: Yaad nahi aa rahha..per lagta hai jaise kai baar sunna hai…

Addi: Yeh photo dekhiye shayad kush yaad aa jaaye.

Biker took photo from his hand. Continuously looked at…a smile came on his face

Biker: Arre haaa…yeh to issi hospital main milay thay humme….kai months ho gaye..

Addi: Four…

Biker thought for a while..He calculated some thing

Biker: Ha itne to ho he gaye hai..unhi dinno main meri behen ki shaadi thi…aur usko kuch dinno main 5 months ho jaayegay .

Addi: Wo yahan thay..fir kahan gaye…kush patta hai aapko..( he tried to know mor)

Biker: Unko bahut burri haalat main yaha laaya gaya tha..shayad bahut height se niche jheel main ghir gaye thay…Bhalla ho un logon ka jo unko yahan le aaye

Addi: Per aab wo kahan hai..

Biker: Unko kush dinno yahan rakha humne…mujhe is liye patta hai..kyonki patients k rooms main medicine pahucaane ki responsibility hamari hai…aur jo medicine doctor prescribed karte hai..ghar mai le jaane ko...wo yahai se jaati hai….aise medicine dettay hue unko aksar dekhta tha…aur aab bhi jab check up k baad medicine detay hai unko ..yahin se jaati hai…

Addi: wo yahan se medicine le kar jaatay hai…wo doctor k paas aatay hai check up k liye...then fir Maan Sir ghar kyo nahi laute…( he put his hand on his hair )

Biker: Bhi saab bahut to patta nahi..per regular patients se kush jaan pehcaan ho he jaati hai…aur yahan takk main jaanta hu..yeh saab puri tarah se paralyzed ho gaye thay..kissi ko kush nahi patta inke baare main….per ek bhalli ladki aur uski Maa ne na sirf inki zindgai bacchai…saath main inki aaj taak care kar rahi hai….wahin aati hai inko check up k liye..aur jab wo medicine lati hai..yeh saab sath hotte hai wheel chair per..

Addi was shocked to know this .A man who always created his rules n compelled others to follow .Who always lived his life in his own way...Now he was depending on some other.Some where he was happy to thing…His hunt was not a waste. At least now he knew He could reach him soon.

Addi: Sir kya aap mujhe unka patta batta sakte hai..main milna chahta hu unse…

Biker:Abhi to bahut raat ho gayi hai…aur Rajni..I mean jo ladki hospital ka record handle karti hai…sshe ll come tomorrow.U hav to wait.Tab takk aap staff room main rest kijiye...apke sonne ka intzaam main kar detta hu ..aur khaane ka bhi ...

It was much difficult for Addi to wait .But he was helpless n consoled himself that where they had waited for months it was a matter of nite

But this was not a matter of nite for Geet.couple of days back Rano took her to gynecologist.Leela stayed back wth Maan to take care.Rano's intentions were clear she wanna abort child.Geet was not ready for this.Rano took her forcibly .After tests it was clear.Every thing was okey wth Geet's pregnancy n doctor also suggested not to go for abortion….n why they want abortion..if she was a married girl…n to hav a kid always b a desire for a girl.Rano asked doctor that they hav any personal problem so abortion is only thing left.

So doctor had no option.When nurse took Geet to operation theater n she checked her bp..that was high….She wanted to say some thing but she was not in condition to think that she could rite.

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Doctor looking at her condition rejected to abort child.

Doctor: Dekhiya Rano Ji apki beti nahi chahti ..to aap kyo zid kar rahhi hai…

Rano: Per doctor woh nahi samjhti jis halaat main hum hai bachchay ka bhoj nahi utha sakte ( she insisted)

Doctor: Jo Maa 9 months takk apne bachchay ko apne andhar rakhne ko tayaar hai..wo apne bachchay ka bhojh kyo nahi utha paayegi…Janti hu aapki beti bejuwaan hai….per ek aur bejuwaan ko khatam karke aap do do bejuwaan zindgi-on (lives) ko maar rahhi hai…main doctor hu…hamara farz hai ilaaz karna…agar patient bimaar ho..per aap ek acchi bhalli ladki ko kyo patient banana chahti hai…dekhiya usko…( doctor pointed Geet)apne bachchay ko khonne ka khoff uske chehere per aabhi bhi dikh rahha hai…

Geet she was sitting lik a statue in operation theather….Putting both her hands on her belly.Rano looked at her.She was not wrong at her place.She knew Geet had to face much difficulties in future.n to avoid ..she took this step.Now she realized she was wrong……If after aborting child she was hoping a good lif for Geet...it would never gonna b true…For her daughter Maan n their child was only reason to liv.She took Geet back home.From that day..Geet started to avoid her.Jst for ever day work she went out of room other wise she always tried to lock herself wth Maan in room lik she was afraid of her mother.

At this nite same nite


Rano knocked Geet's room

Rano: Geet open the door.

No response… continuous knocking irritated Geet n she opened door.But she not looked at Rano.

Rano: Geet I know how much angry u r wth me…But I m your mother.Tumhare siva kya hai mere pass….Tumhara burra nahi chaah sakti kabhi

Geet not responded.Rano took her name gain n gain so to get response frm her.At last Geet took her slate in her hand.n started to write

Geet: I know Maa u never think wrong about me..But why u r behind my child.If u say u always want my happiness..why can't u see my happiness is in front of u..Maan n my child.u wanna take my child.

Rano repeated her words.

Rano: Main tumhare bachchy ki dushman nahi..jab operation theater main abortion k liye tumko le kar gaye..tabhi mujhe lagga main galat to nahi…fir tumhari haalat dekh kar ehsaas ho gaya…I was wrong..I hav no rite to snatch ur baby from u….or Doctor ne mujhe puri tarah se yakeen dilla diya…main galat thi…

In between this conversation..Maan's deep breath got their attention.


Geet ran toward him n held him in her arms.Maan became normal ..his breath was normal..but heart beats were fast.


Rano: Kya ho gaya Maan ko..tumne medicine to de thi na...


Geet nodded her head n signaled her to bring slate.Rano rubbed slate n gav to Geet.


Geet: Jab Maan ko kabhi kush sochte hai...aur na keh paane ki wajah se woh aise he ho jaate hai...aap jayo main sambhal lungi...( Maan's head was on Geet's shoulder..his eyes was closed...Geet put words on slate wth difficulty)


Rano:Per Geet...Maan theek to hai...kahi hospital to nahi le jaana padega.?


Geet rolled her hand on Maan's back n asked Rano to calm down.


After Geet's assurance Rano left room closing door.Geet put her fingers in Maan's hair. He rubbed his on her neck...lik a small baby...His heart beats r running in good way now.Geet looked at him n put him on bed again.She kissed Maan..smiled...her child was safe now.But about Maan she always became worried...that some day He would leave her..or some one could snatch him from her...the coming day was the way toward her this thoughts


So I think not bed..u gonna lov..plz comment n hit lik.. critics r most welcomed..Updatin soon...New readers plz add me



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Jass

Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome mindblowing update yar loved geet a lot
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesum part..
so aadi s on his way to meet maan..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update!!! (15 nd 16)
luvd it...ohh wat will happen nxt???
will maan accept her nd their baby??? w8ing plzz cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsem yaar love this geet please make maan accept there child
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 17
OMG Geet is preggy indeed...
now its all in Maan's hands...
did he even realize the gesture?
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 17 and 18 awesome...geet is right on her place...she is very detremined girl yaar... thank god adi ko kuch toh pata chala maan k baare main... plzz maan thik hokar geet nd baby ko apna le cont soon
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part 18
so Adi has successfully got info about Maan...
was that Maan's reaction to the baby and the abortion discussion?
or is he still unawares?
plz no separation...
cont soon dear...

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