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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey Lena,

Poetry was (correct me if I am wrong... U used part or whole of it somewhere in MOE) It gave deja-vu sense.

Hmmm, so Geet broke down because she had decided to let go of Maan for time being for his own good & It seems that Maan feared separation from Geet so he decided in his own way to instill some memories to keep them going during the time.

Rano can't possibly be there in campus itself? can she? & even if she was then all that conversation geet overheard is indigestible because sharp woman like her can't be so cavalier to let anyone to tread on such sensitively secret path.

Geet was so preoccupied after taking in the new information that she could not think on the finer points of Truth she just heard & her changed behavior once again left Maan frustrated.

Maan must be joining the dots to complete the picture with new information that Geet provided that's why he once again was composed but Yes..., Geet is just unpredictable at times. She thought that there are various puzzle pieces that does not add up but I felt that it is "circle within a circle" only the person knowing every fact can work the way out of it.

Maan sensed something fishy with successor thing but it was discarded between all the emotional cry out.

Now can't wait to see how the twist changes the situation & who the shady convict is going to be... (Vikram the Psycho maybe 😉 but in different light😆 )


P.S, It's good to see u back but I am SAD... about everyone stopping to write & leave forum. Please Don't do that, PLEASEEE...

SAY THAT U WON'T STOP WRITING...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE

Edited by serenelove - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Lena ! Missed you sooo much ! 🤗

On a first place i was going to complain about the delay but then a little voice in my head said : "Zubi you don't have yourself time to leave a comment on each ff you read, and here you are complaining to someone who has to write a long and entertaining ff chapter... that's not right,isn't it ?"

Seems like the inner me is right...*zubi pouted* 😉

Chal, if i can't complain abt the chap, let me try this one : *Zubi switches into her "mother's" mode* Lena, where were you han ??? Me and Saba were worried abt you ! Kitni dafa kaha hai, bata k jaya karo !!!! 😆 😉



*res for the chap analyse* 😛


bdw i feel at my place...here after Saba's comment 😉

Edited by misssmily - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 20
Lena why this late?
sigh was missing so much...
nice part...
OMG Geet is Rano's daughter and Vicky is her brother?
poor Maan...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: misssmily

Hi Lena ! Missed you sooo much ! 🤗

On a first place i was going to complain about the delay but then a little voice in my head said : "Zubi you don't have yourself time to leave a comment on each ff you read, and here you are complaining to someone who has to write a long and entertaining ff chapter... that's not right,isn't it ?"

Seems like the inner me is right...*zubi pouted*
😉

Chal, if i can't complain abt the chap, let me try this one : *Zubi switches into her "mother's" mode* Lena, where were you han ??? Me and Saba were worried abt you ! Kitni dafa kaha hai, bata k jaya karo !!!! 😆 😉



*res for the chap analyse* 😛

bdw i feel at my place...here after Saba's comment 😉

Hey Zubi, 😊

@Green, I also feel the same time to time but can't help pestering the writers as many have left & mostly others intend to do the same. We r really busy but all of us need some time to get fresh & rid of the problems & what's more best than in reading a good novel (even if it's in installments) *though hate waiting for parts*

@Red, I quite enjoyed this mother mode of urs but agree, I was getting worried for her.

@Pink, I need to read ur views so hurry up.

ROFL, U r always stalking me but I guess, I like this stalker 😉 because such nice stalker😆 is hard to find.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Update after long time,Lena. But nice one.. Feeling bad for Maneet. Always happen in Ur FF Maneet get close to each other & then drift away...(for some time😉).
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww u updated after ages but on my birthday. yay

felt awful for maan n geet. poor maan, seems like he was oblivious to the plot. geet on the other hand thinks he is the culprit. how dreadful :(
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Posted: 13 years ago
ohhh rano geet and vicky are one family

then why rano left them with such people

and geet seems shattered...did she looked at rano's face?
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lena! 🤗 you finally updated!

Apologies for the late comment, I had net issues & I couldn't come online

What a heart wrenching update! So full of emotion & pain, as predicted Geet is related to Rano & Vicky, but Rano's now inside the university?
And now instead of Maan walking away from Geet, it's the other way around. He lives for Geet, our Maan is so heartbroken - not forgetting of course, the emotional turmoil Geet is also suffering. Both of them are so distraught! I hope her misunderstanding is cleared soon but I can't see how they'll both get out of this together...

t_areeb thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
really intresting update
esp the coded message part
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Posted: 13 years ago
Is it too far fetched to assume that Yash is the estranged brother of Maan?🤔

On the face value, things do look simplified, but of course there is much more than meets the eye.😕

Awww poor Geet, where is she?😭

Can she ignore Maan for a little while? MSK is at his hottest when Geet plays hard to get isn't it?😉

Madam Rano is sooo complex.

Loved it Lena.🤗

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