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Lena

@.Lina.

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#351

Originally posted by: basicquestion1

naaah u nvr irritate me. luv u loads.
school n sleep both come first so take u'r time but u have to make up for the unfinished business. How awfull how easily u spilled cold water on our lala land.
u r a bad kitty :(

ur always the sweetest. 😳
I hope I made up for it. 😆
Cold water...OOOHHH...that...oops. 😛
You have to admit, that was fun. lmao. 🤣

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Shruthe

@Shruthe

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#352

That was an awesome update...

i just cant wait for the next one

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#353

Amazing update Lena. May b Yash is Maan's real bro (whom he is searching). Both of them unaware of this fact. Is it so???
Nice one. Loved it.😊

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609931

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#354

The deed is done! 😆
But Maan stressing out the fact that Geet needs to find him makes me feel that he's going to leave her...

I don't like Yash 😆 even though he's logical in wanting to keep Maan & Geet away from each other, he still needs to back away & let them be... That makes no sense lolz. I guess I just want Maan & Geet together 😳

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Saams

@Saams

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#355

Its not the happiest update but still not the saddest...At first,I was a bit worried over Yash's stance but then somewhere I believe he would prefer his brother's safety over the Rano's order..Though I am not sure about this ..Its what my heart wants..hehe

Edited by Saams - 13 years ago

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Zubi

@misssmily

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#356

@Saba & Baby : I love all kind of maths ! 😛

Here in France the system isn't the same... Am in an engineering university, my subjects are programming, networks/networks security, algorithm, maths, database management system...things like that. 2 more years and will finish my study ( inshallah )! 😳

@Lena : just saw that u updted ! Love it ! It wasn't a sad or boring part at all ! very interesting specially concerning Yash personality ! Will comment this evening PROMISE paka wala 😉.

Oh and yeah we will try to have more intellectual discussion ! 😆

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#357

part 19
edited
wow that was awesome...
so its Geet who has to always find Maan in future...
hmmm...
cont soon...

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Zubi

@misssmily

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#358

So I am FINALLY commenting ! 😆 REALLY sorry but I was so busy these days...😕
But i see that am not the only one , it makes me feel a bit less guilty... 😉 😳

Bdw It reminds me, how was ur contest ? Is it over ?

Ok now comming to the updt : Awww... As you said, everyone thought that they did it at the end of chap 18, I was not an exception...I thought the same 😆. But you surprised me with your twist ! That night he just asked her and she said she is staying virgin. Nice twist !

Now the begining of chap 19, You again proved me wrong, you were so convincing through geet pov, I actually believed that maan had left her in the morning, but then hearing ( or rather readin it 😆 ) maan's voice I was like : Oh he is still here 😲 ! You are being better and better at keeping suspense ! 👏 Maan was so UNDERSTANDING in this chap wow... He knows how she feels... If he didn't know her from past 10 years i would have found his behavior a bit weird... But here it fitted the situation so well ! 👍🏼

I really liked maan's behavior ! He didn't do anything extra-special, nor he went too far in showing his emotions, also he didn't make fake promises, nor did he try to prove her wrong when she said she can expect him betraying her... "I cannot give you a reason, love." I so loved his behavior ! ❤️ It was his real self, 100% guardian maan's style !

Now comming to the mystery man Yash ! Lena sweety I had asked you to clear the mystery around him... not add more confusion 🤣. Well well well, he is hmmm as complicated as a jalebi !🤣 Youo are turning him into a psycho ! I dnt know if you are doing it on purpose or not but that is what comes out... a psycho...yaar jab b geet Yash k saath akeli hoti hai, i feel scared for her... In this part i thought he was about to kill her... if that was what you wanted to show then well done. His motives are so confusing...i mean if he goes to the extent to kill his bro maan to find his lost bro... then what's the logic 😕... BUT if we read under the lines...😆 it seems like he is just jealous ... i know that it's a bit early to say that... but his little speech contained some kind of sadness... He seems to be jealous that geet is gaining that much intention from maan... OR may b am totally wrong ! 😆 Anyway their convo was superb ! Yash didn't bother to know if maan had told her about him... he just knew he woud have done it... so didn't bother to go slowly with her, he went straight to the point. In the same way geet didn't bother to accuse him of betraying her. It was so natural, as if both new why they were here... Well done !

So they did it at the end of the chap ! ok i won't ask you to elaborate don't worry 😆 It was satisfiying enough ! 😉 Love maan's behavior once again ! But me ( and geet ) wondering what did maan actually mean by u must always find me...

Anyway it was a great part ! But from now their relation will change as we can expect either M.Rano takin a step or Yash finding out that they did it... But yaar i dnt remember but wasn't Geet M.Rano's daughter or something like that... Seems like abi to bohot kuch baki hai...

My piece of critic : Well nothing special for this part... as from now on story koi b direction le sakti hai... Just the point about Yash : As I said previously, is he ready to go to the extent to kill maan ( in case maan decides not to leave geet ) for the sake of his lost bro... this is weird... Kill one to find the other... well...i dnt know 😕

Kher will b patiently waiting ! ( me and patient 🤣 )

With Lots of LoVe ❤️

Zubi 😊

Edited by misssmily - 13 years ago