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Posted: 13 years ago
hi shreya thanks for the pm. that was really...hot. o my god where did u find that dress?


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: wiskhan

hi shreya thanks for the pm. that was really...hot. o my god where did u find that dress?



searched for something special..found this..😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Heyy !!
please Pm me too 😃
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They spent up the 14 days in each other's arms and discovering not only each other bodies but also each other's traits that they had not known.

Like maan never knew geet loved the rides and she never knew maan loved to go sight seeing.

He showed her all major famous spots in paris.

It was the day before they left..

Geet hum parso nikal rahein hain..kal main kuch khaas chahta hoon..karogi..

Jo aap kahein maan..

Theek hai kal sham ko tayaaar rehna..

She had strong faith in him and she knew he would not do anything which she wont like.

Part 68

It was around 5 in the evening when maan told her to get ready to move to the place.

She got ready and by the time they left it was around 6.

Hum late toh nahin hue na..

Nahi jaan..by 7 they had reached the place.

To geet it looked like a theatre she was confused.

Chalo toh sahe..

It was an old theatre where ballet was performed. She loved dancing he knew it and she was choked with emotion for him.

The man who had once kidnapped and made her submit to him today made her happy in every way he could.

They walked in and he saw that he had reserved a box for them at the top so that she could see everything from them.

In a few minutes the ballet started the girls though wore short dresses she didn't shy away but she loved it and the story that was being potrayed.

It was a love story, a tear jerker for the circumstances didn't let them meet and the girl had killed herself coz she couldn't stay away from him.

She was choked with emotion and had tears in her eyes when the curtains fell.

Everyone broke into an applause and she too clapped through her taers.

Maan saw her and he rested her head on his shoulder.

They walked out hand in hand.

She was still silent and he knew she would take time. She had always been emotional and the story had moved him too.

Once in the car she rested her head on his chest. He could feel her tears soaking his shirt.

Maan..

Mmm he said caressing her head.

Jaante hain jab aap mujse door the tab maine bhi nahut baar socha tha ki khud ko maar doon..aapke bina eke k pal kaatna mushkil ho gaya tha…main sirf zinda thi pehle toh ki aap waapis aayenge aur phir yeh soch kar ke aapka ansh mere saath hai..

Geet..

Sach keh rahi hoon maan..ek baar toh main kisi tarah aapke bin zinda reh gayi..agar dubara kaisa abhi hua toh main khud ko maar daalongi..nahi reh sakti main aapki bina..mar jaaongi..

She had wrapped her arms around him and he embraced her encompassing her into a tight hug.

Geet..tumhe kya lagta hai main tumhare bina jee sakta hoon..i am sorry geet.i really am..jo bhi hua usme galti merit hi..i am sorry..he sobbed while burying his head into her shoulder.

She heard him but she was scared and she put her own thoughts forward.

Maan..aap dubara kabhi mat jaana..mujse gussa ho lene..daant lena..par mujhe akela mat chodna..aapke bina toh ghar bhi kaatne ko dudta hai..maine aapse us din se pyaar kiya jis din maine aapko khud ko saunp diya tha..main..

Shhh she was sobbing…Main jaanta hoon..sab jaanta hoon par main dar gaya tha ki tum mujh jaise insaan se kaise..tum toh sab jaanti hoon na..maine kis se tumahre siva pyaar nahi kiya..tumhare bina eke k din maine ghu ghut kar kata hai..suhana mere paas thi par main usme bhi tumhe dhoondta tha..tumse ek baar door reh kar dekh chukka hoon..ab toh sirf maut he mujhe tumse..

Maan..she kept her hand on his mouth…

Sach keh raha hoon..agar maut bhi aa jaaye na ab toh koi dukh nahi hai..jaanta hoon ki koi mujse itna pyaar karta hai ki mujhe zinda rakhega..

Maan..aisa mat boliye..pls..she burst into tears once again..

Aapke bina jina..nahi jeen mujhe..agar maut aa gayi toh use pehle mujhe apne saath le jaana hoga..nahi rahoongi main aapke bin..nahi..

Geet..

Maan I love you..maine pehle kabhi nahi kaha..aaj kehti hoon..i love u..jaan basti hai aap mein meri..jeevan ka ek pal bhi aapke bin nahi guzaar sakti..

He kissed her face and kept murmuring I love you, till he could not breathe..

Ji nahi sakta tumhare bin and he laid his head on her chest crying.

The two souls finally let out their biggest fears to each other and all that surrounded them was love.

It was few minutes before they broke the hug but she still held on to his hand.

She wanted to make him happy the way he had. She still had something he hadn't seen and she knew he would love it.

The thought made her blush but she wanted him to feel her again and this time it would be special she knew it for today she would love him without any fears and he would love her without the guilt of the past burdening him.

They reached back to the hotel and she slumped on the bed.

Geet..utho khana kha lete hain..

Mmm aap mangvaiye..

He ordered the food and sat on the bed while she lay down on his lap.

Maan..

Mmm kaho..

Main aapko aaj kuch dena chahti hoon…

Par..

Main aapko surprise toh nahi de sakti par aaj main ek baar phir khud ko saunpana chahti hoon..

Par..

Aaj main aap ke liye kuch karoongi..mujhe sharm bhi aayegi par aap waada kijiye aap hasenge nahi..

Par..

Waada…

Theek hai..

He didn't know what she had in her mind but he knew he will have to help her.

After the dinner she picked up something from the closet and went in.

She came out ten minutes later.

She was wearing nothing on her upper body except numerous beaded chains which covered her modesty little, and in the lower half she wore a thong and matching stockings.

Maan couldn't take his eyes off her. She looked sexy and her curves were just accentuated from the various chains which only peeked from behind.

Geet..tum..

Main..

Shhh tum karna kya chahti ho..

She sat him on the sofa and put on some music..

Maine yeh kahin dekha tha..she said blushing.

She moved her hips and neck and with that moved the chains. She kept her upper body stiff moving her hands.

The moving chains not only created a wonderful music but heightened his desire for her.

Geet he got up and covered her body with his and looked into her eyes.

Aaj main jaan gaya hoon ki ab humare beech koi parda nahi hai..

And with that he sucked on a bead that was on her breast.

He pulled the chain and it broke. All the chains that adorned her met the same treatment while he carried her throwing the beads on the floor.

By the time he lay her on bed he could see the boquet that was open for him to feast upon.

He kissed her on her lips and she moved her hands to remove his shirt.

And then he removd the last barrier of clothing between them and not only made love to her but with outmost care and dedication taking time to explore every part of her body with his hands tongue and lips.

He bit her spine, sucked on her nipples, bit her shoulder kissed the valley prodded his tongue in her core and then filled her with himself till she was crying out his name.

That night he made love to her numerous times but each time she would not only feel the pleasure but also the heat which he filled her with and the fluid that flowed in her.

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Posted: 13 years ago
yippi yippi..
me 1st...
awesome updt..
loved it 😳
Edited by dreamyp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Arre wah
ek aur update mujhe to last pm bhi nai mili
but omg geet mein itni himmat kaise aayi nd f9ly dey talked their heart out it was very well needed
beautifully written saare emotions bata diye unke
very nyc part
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Posted: 13 years ago
amita: I Pmed u..didnt u read it..
next part is alos coming..i wanna finsih it now..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanx for the pm
Loved the part
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mchopra

amita: I Pmed u..didnt u read it..

next part is alos coming..i wanna finsih it now..



Just read it nd replied
kya dhasu update tha yaar
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 69.

They reched back home next night and were greeted by suhana and dadi.

Suahana was way too happy to have her mamma back and that too the smile that adorned her mamma's face was just too much for her.

She hugged her tight and told her all about what she had done and everything. Dadi sat there listening to her and atlast when she was about to go to her room dadi asked her to sit dow for two min.

She happily sat back and sent suhana back to her room.

Beta aapko mazza toh aaya na..

Ji dadi paris bahut sundar hai..

Aur baaki sab..

Geet blushed understanding wht dadi meant.

Ji dadi..

Waise aapki garden pe nishan sab keh rahe hain..lagta hai maan ne aapko choda he nahi hai..

Geet blushed crimson red thinking about the love bites that could be seen.

Main chalti hoon dadi.. good night..and she hurried off.

Maan was working on the laptop when she entered.

Suhana ne tumhe chod diya..

Ji..

Main kapde badal ke aayi..

Kyun..

Kya..

Aaj raat ek baar phir Geet..he said making a puppy face.

She sat in his lap and lowered her eyelashes.

That was all the encouragement he needed. He kissed her mouth while his hands moved to her chest fondling her breasts and nipples.

When he left her mouth he planted kisses on her neck and opening the zip of her suit.

It was half undone but he didn't wait to remove it for his mouth was hungry to devour her again and latched on to her nipples through her suit itself.

Maan she moaned while she bent back pushing her breast into his mouth his hands supporting her.

He lifted her up his mouth moving her other nipple through the cloth. He then removed her suit and latched on through the cloth of her braissrie. He was too impatient. He just pulled the cup down and devoured her. Her breasts were sore but his attention just made her moan in pleasure.

He made love to her again that night.

Tw months later.

She was in the kitchen when she felt dizzy. It had been happening for the past few days but she was not able to get to know why.

She tried to control but her head would not stop pounding in a few minutes she lost control and she slumped on the floor.

Maan came looking for her and saw her lying on the floor.

Geet..he tried to call her but she wouldn't respond.

He carried her to drawing room and laid her on the sofa..

Geeet..dadi shouted..

Dadi yeh aankhein bhi nahi khol rahi hai..

Aap dr ko bulaye aur inhe upar lekar jaaiye.

The dr came in and checked her.

He told them that she was a month pregnant.

Maan was happy beyond limits and dadi had tears in her eyes.

Geet was too happy to know it and she hugged him in front of dadi and suhana.

Hum bahut khush hai bte..is baar aap yahaan se uthenge bhi nahi aaj se jab tak delivery nahi ho jaati..

Dadi pehle kuch maheene..

Nahi..

Dadi who theek keh rahi hai..thoda bahut toh chalna zaroori hai..

She looked at both of them.. theek hai par sirf jab maan aapke saath honge tab..

They both nodded their heads.

Dadi kissed geet's forehead and left.

6 months later

Geet is 7 months pregnant. She had put on lot of weight and was huge.

It was 3 in the night.

Maan..

Mmm

Maan bhook lagi hai..she said pointing to her tummy.

He got up and sat beside her. He was now used to her weird craving at weird time of the day. He had been on his toes past 5 months fulfilling her crazy demands.

Kya chahiye…

Kissi..

Kya..

Baby ko kissi chahiye..aaj aapne use kissi nahi kari.. and she pouted.

He bent down his head and lifted her loosed shirt and kissed her belly.

Ab kya chahiye..

Mujhe na kuch khana hai..

Kya..

Babaji aaj bacha lena..pls aaj kuch aisa jo mil jaaye..warna mujhe subah tak yeh paagal kar degi..

Mujhe na haan ice cream uske upar ketchup phir namak and uske upar thoda sa aachar aur hai uspar mint sauce bhi..

Kya..

Layeiye na..

He went down and thanked babaji that atleast all these things were available at home.

He got it for her and gave it to her.

Aap bhi khayenge..

Nahi tum he khao..mujhe bhook nahi hai..

He felt like throwing up with the combination she was having atleast it was better than fruit salad, cheese and namkeen.

She finished it and handed the plate to him.

He kept the palte and helped her lie down.

She got up after ten minutes again.

Maan..

Kya hua geet…

Aapne kissi na mujhe kin a baby ko and she started crying.

Par..

Ab main moti ho gayi hoon isliye main aapko pasand nahi..

Babaji ab yeh baat kahan se aagayi..

Nahi geet and he hugged her..

Nahi dekho abhi bhi..

And before she could complete her sentence his mouth came down upon hers exploring the secrets of her mouth.

He lifted her shirt and felt her chest against his hand for she wore no bra.

Maan..she moaned..

She looked beautiful with her huge belly and her pregnancy just increased the fullness of her breasts. Her nipples looked so firm that he wanted to suck on her the entire night.

He knew he had to leave her.

He just kissed the top of her breasts and kissed her belly once again before making her lie down.

2 months later..

Maan..she screamed and increased the pressure of her push while holding his hand.

Maan..she screamd he kept rubbing her head and her hair..

Geet last time..one more as he wiped the sweat off her brow.

Yes Mrs khurana I can see the baby now..said the dr..

She nodded and pushed and finally the baby was out.

It's a boy.

Ahhh..

Mrs khurana..

I am still in pain.

The dr immediately placed a sethescope on her stomach.

Oh God its twins.

But how come we didn't know..

It happens mr. Khurana..

For now let me get the baby out I will explain later.

One and a Half hour later another baby was born and it was girl.

Geet had fainted with the last push. Dr had given her sedatives for he knew her delicate body needed rest and put the babies in incubator.

About 5 hrs later when geet woke up she was glad to see maan standing by her and also dadi sitting by her.

She tried getting up and maan helped her into sitting position.

She saw the babies placed in the crib beside her bed on the otherside.

She extended her arms and maan got both the sleeping babies and placed in her arms.

She put both on her lap and kissed them.

Inka naam..

She placed a kiss on the boy's forehead and named him ansh..

She looked up at him and he nodded.

She placed a kiss on the girls forehead and named her mansha.

Bahut sundar naam hai..dadi kissed geet.

As if on clue ansh got up and started crying geet could feel her chest getting heavy. Before she could do anything mansha too got up.

Dadi left the room and allowed her privacy to feed the kids.

She placed both the kids on each of nipple and fondled them.

Maan kissed her forehead and said..Thanku..

She thanked him and he took a pic of the family that the lord had bestowed him with.(two babies on her arms)

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