Creative Thrd2:U can only be Mine,Just mine 145/6 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
congrats for the new thread 😊
waiting 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
congo for new thread,
waiting for next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
CONGRATS TO ALL LOVELY PEEPS HERE

@shreya
me waiting badly baby
kab milegi update????

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yaar i am typing its 5 pages already and there is still more..aisa karti hoon wht i am done..i will post that by the time u finish i will be ready with next part also..wht say ya u wnat it togteher..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Shreya put up what u have typed..i need timepass during show ka ad..lol..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chalo chalo jo likha hai post karo
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Posted: 13 years ago
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posted..
ten more min i shall upadte the next part too..hehe
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nyc
wonder wat punishment bade papa gets
suhana is so sweet nd geet is melting
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 40

He stared at geet..she mumbled..sorry.

He smiled at her..haan suhana who…

Aapko punishment milni chahiye..haina aunty..

Geet looked at her perplexed..but she could do nothing except nodding her head.

Hmm haan bade papa aap ghoda baniye..

Kya..maan shouted..

Haan aap ghoda baniye..kitne din ho gaye..

Aaj nahi gudiya kisi aur din..

Nahi abhi..

Gudiya pls…

Maan kya aap bhi..ek bacchi ko toh uthana hai..chaliye ghoda baniye…

Maan had no other option but to go on his knees and hands and suhana scrambled on his back immediately.

Maan closed his eyes in pain but smiled and started crawling around the room.

Suhana kept shouting ghode chal, tez chal and even hit his back but he kept smiling and walking.

Geet was smiling at her antics.

It was about half an hour later when maan came near her bed that she saw blood stains on his white shirt at back, to which suhana was oblivious.

She was horrified at that.

Nakul..she called and both suhana and maan looked at her.

Nakul came rushing in.

Nakul suhana ko le jaaye aur nanny se kahiye isko tayaaar kare..

Par aunty..

Suhana tyaar ho kar aayegi phir hum khelenge..theek hai..

Suhana nodded and trotted off to her room.

Maan was standing listening was also proceeding out.

Maan rukiye..he stopped dead in his tracks and looked at her,.

She walked to the door and closed it.

Geet..yeh kya kar rahi ho..dr ne tumhe..

Main theek hoon..apni shirt utariye..

Kya..

Maine kaha apni shirt uthariye..

Par..

Aap utharenge ya main uthaaron..

He removed his shirt his hand paining with the pain in his back.

When he removed his shirt Geet was horrified at the sight she beheld.

His back seemed to be covered in belt marks and it was oozing blood.

Yeh kya hai maan..she said touching his back. He flinched at her touch for it pained him. She could feel these marks were recent.

Maan..yeh..her sight was now blurred due to the tears in her eyes.

Geet who..

Before he could complete the sentence she had walked into the washroom to get a towel soaked with water and she brought the first aid box too.

She made him sit on the bed and sat behind him. She cleaned the blood from the wounds while blowing gently.

The pain was excruciating but her care made him smile.

Once she had cleaned the wonds she got savlon to apply and gently touched his back with the cotton soaked in savlon.

He hissed..

Jal raha hai..she asked..

He nodded his head..

She kept blwoing and applying the medicine..

Ab aap mujhe batayenge yeh kaise hua…

Who..

Maan..

Who main..

She turned his face and looked at him.

Who main us dard ko mehsoos karna chahta tha jo tumne saha..

Kya..

Us raat ko maine tumhari back pe belt ke marks dekhe the..aur who the meri wajah se..main khud ko wohi dard dena chahta tha jis se tum guzri ho..main jaanta hoon maine jo kiya who main waapis nahi le sakta par us dard ko toh sehan kar sakta hoon..yeh dard tumhe mila sirf meri wajah se..agar main us din tumhe yahaan le aata apne ego kea age jhuk jaata apne man se suhaana ke liye dark o nikal paata toh shayad tumhe apne ghar waalon se itna kuch nahi sunna aur sehna padta..

She looked at him dumbstruck. He had given himself so much pain coz she was in pain at one time.

Maan..and she hugged his back soaking his back with her tears and kissing the wounds gently.

Maan..aapko lagta hai aapke dard dene se sab kuch theek ho jaayega..

She held his hand and sat in front of him.

She kept his hand on her tummy. Maan baby ko pyaar chahiye dard toh main use bahut di chuki hoon..aapko lagta hai ki aap kp dard mein dekh kar khush rahoongi..nahi main nahi rahoongi..aapko lagtha hai ki aap khud ko dard de kar mere ateet ko mita sakte hain..nahi maan..aapko agar aisa lagta hai toh aap mujhe yeh bhi bata dijiye ki yeh jab bada hoga toh main ise kya kahoongi..ki iske pita ne itna dard kyun diya khud ko…jawwab dijiye maaan..jawwab dijiye..

And she started sobbing..he embarced her in his arm and she cried in his chest.

He knew it was the pain of the past few months which was now coming out.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aila
wat a senti update
looks lyk its approaching its end

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