MG OS Tera Saath Hai to~ EPILOGUE

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Posted: 13 years ago
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New MG OS

Hey people!!!! i am here with one more upaj of my Maaneet filled brain... this Os is based on how any one desperately needs someone to be with you.. who consoles you... who loves you, who cares for you who scolds you and most importantly with whom you feel blessed and secure...
let us see an example...






Tera Saath Hai to

Some misunderstandings usually make life take a long U turn which is unexpected and even unpredictable'. We kept on thinking now what???? But only time is the one which answers our questions'. Sometimes innocent people become pray of it and they pay for nothing they did'. Life becomes unfair to them'. And the irony is they cant help out'. But God sees everything'. If the person is innocent he doesn't pay for long and in return gets justice in the form of a God gift''

Same thing happened with Geet'.. She can never in her dreams think to ditch her parents but after listening to something her parents lost trust in her'.

One day Mrs Handa was passing by geet's room when she heard her talking'

Geet:- listen Dhaval !!!! I know your love is true but running away is not the solution' have patience'. Pehle hi abortion karne ki galti ho chuki hai'ab aur koi galti nahi'. Babaji doesnt take exam of true lovers and we will surely succeed in our mission'. But first we'll try to convince Ma Papa and then we'll think further' trust your mom Dad as I do on mine'.

Mrs Handa was stunned listening to all those words'. She felt as if someone has slapped her hard'. She couldn't think of anything and went straight to Mr. Handa'. He was a strict person but always gave sufficient freedom to his one and only daughter and trusts her to the extent' By hearing those words from his wife he was stunned' he couldn't believe his ears' more than getting angry he was upset and hurt that he could not be able to give proper parvarish to his daughter and this lead to a decision that changed her life' Shattered her dreams'. And most importantly for no reason she lost the unending trust of her parents'. She cried in front of them to trust her coz she couldn't disclose the actual reason of that talk but they refused to listen to her'. They thought their daughter doesn't know the actual world and will end up getting cheated by someone'.. They snatched her phone' discarded her to go to college and refused anyone to meet her and most importantly they fixed her wedding with someone she merely knew'.

She was given everything she desired for since birth but to her the actual treasure was her parents who loved her that much that she cannot pay back but after that incident both of them merely talk to her and were not at all ready to listen to her'

She kept on crying in her room for hours and sleep in that condition only' It was two months after that incident and she was in same condition looking more pale and weak'. One day her mom came to her and spoke

Mrs.Handa:- Geet!!!! Today you have to go out with the person you are getting married to' he wants to meet you' and we expect you not to create more problems for us'.plz be nice to him and save our pride this time' we haven't told them about your past affair or may be affairs so plz atleast this time think of your family once''

She went saying those words which hurt Geet a lot and so hurt her mom too' she had never ever thought she'll have to speak to her daughter in that way but she cant help out' she knew the person she was getting married to was a great guy and will keep her happy forever but she never wanted to impose her marriage to her'. She didn't have any other choice'.

Geet thought that she cant stay like this and even cant leave her home like this' she sincerely needs to talk to Avantika whose boyfriend she was talking to' who was her best friend but hasn't shown her face since that incident '. She didn't know has she ran away with Dhaval or what happened with them as she herself was house arrested for these whole 2 months'.

Today she was stepping out of her house after whole 2 months but to meet a person whom she has never met before and has only heard his name and is going to spend her entire life with him'.

He came to pick her up' Mrs handa came inside to find her ready with simple white dress and no make up'

She frowned as she wanted her to look good enough in front of him so as he doesn't find any reason to give further... She was about to shout at her but held herself back and looked at her in disbelief' she couldn't get what she did now but because they were getting late'.

She stepped out of her room and saw him sitting with her father' although she has seen him many times before but there was an awkward feeling arising in her coz mere thought of being getting married to him was making her more nervous'

On the other hand he was lost in her beauty' even in her no make-up mode she was looking no less than an white angel walking towards him'. the thought that this angel is going to be his forever made a small smile crept on his lips but he hold himself back feeling the presence of elders in the room...

After a while both left'. It was awkward for both of them to go out with each other when they have merely talk to each other'. There was a weird silence in the car as Maan was thinking how to start and Geet was confused at her that state' Maan was driving but was stealing glances at lost geet' he felt as if something is bothering her' finally he took initiative to break the silence'

Maan:- Ummm kahan chalna hai???

Geet came out of her trance'. She looked at him and found him staring at her for reply

Geet:- ji woh !!! kahin bhi'.

Maan:- hmm aise nahi to aise hi bata do'.. what is your favourite place to hangout with frnds'

Geet was feeling awkward but she had to reply coz she had promised her mom to be gentle so she replied'

Geet:- any place where we can sit and talk'..

Maan:- so you talk also'..

Geet:- ji????

Maan:- nahi who actually you are sitting quite na since we left home'..

Geet:- nahi bas aise hi'.

Maan:- okay let us go to KFC we'll sit their for a while and can also talk only if you break ur silence'..

She smiles at his generous behavior'. Nice guy she thought'. But something else was running in her mind'. She couldn't leave her parents like that'. In few minutes they reached KFC '.. both headed towards the restaurant area and sat'. Maan was acting like a gentle man and was taking care of her'. Geet was lot in her own thoughts not unnoticed by Maan'.

Although Maan wanted her to talk to him but felt as if she must be feeling shy because of their first meeting but he took no time to get that something serious is bothering her'. He thought he might feel light so he spoke'

Maan:- BTW Geet our wedding is planned to be as soon as possible' its weird na' we are getting married for whole of our life and we don't even know each other'

Still she merely smiled and no response was there' Maan noticed her smile is not reaching her eyes' he now became restless'. He wanted her to be frank enough to him to share her worries and happiness but she was silent so by taking no time he said

Maan:- look Geet!!! We are becoming Husband-Wife but before that relation I want you to treat me as a friend of yours'. You can share with me anything that is bothering you'.

Geet looked at him stunned'

Geet:- (to herself)Hw come he knew my worry'. (to him) No there is nothing sort of'.

Maan smiled'

Maan:- I guess you need time to make me your friend' don't worry take your time'. Let us order something'

Geet was pleased with his nature' she found him to be really sweet and caring guy'.

After their meal they went to have a road side ice-cream' Geet unknowingly enjoyed his company'.

When he dropped her back there was a different smile on her face' she looked a little relieved'

Their engagement was planned to be on the very next weekend'. She was a little worried coz she met him just once and he is going to be her fianc'. But she was not left with enough guts to deny to her parents coz in their eyes she was a cheat'.

Although Geet was not mentally ready for this engagement but one thought to give her fate a chance made her stronger'..

They got engaged just formally'

They started to meet often' her parents couldn't deny him coz he was their future son-in-law and Geet also enjoyed his company'. They demanded more time from their parents to know each other properly before getting married ' Geet met his parents too and found them to be sweeter than him'.

They very soon became very good friends and Geet started to smile'. The same smile she lost'.. they began to shop for each other order each other tease each other and even sometimes getting angry from each other' Maan came to know her likes and dislikes and so was Geet'

But the accusation was somewhere still killing her from inside '.. She wanted everything to be sort out before her wedding' her restlessness couldn't be unnoticed by Maan' he knew whenever she smiled her smile never reached her eyes and he wanted to know the reason eagerly coz he did want to help her in coming out of that problem''''.

It was sure from Maan's behavior and concern that he loves her madly but she still was not sure''

Maan took that matter seriously and decided to talk to her'. One day he went to her home unexpectedly and was about to enter when he heard the voice of Mrs. Handa'

Mrs. Handa:- Geet !!! Enough is enough!!! Do as I say' just talk to Maan today and decide to get married asap'.. we can't bear your childish behavior anymore' you have already betrayed us a lot' plz for babaji's sake do as I say'.

Geet:- mamma!!! Plz listen to me once' just give me one chance to explain'

Mrs. Handa:- there is nothing left to explain'. Don't you get that'.. now just leave'.

Geet left from there crying'. And Maan saw Mrs. Handa weeping at her own behavior'' maan was shocked at whatever he saw' he couldn't came to any conclusion'. He being more confused found it better to leave from there right then coz he didn't want to embarrass them'. But he got more tensed at the situation'..

He went to home and silently went to his room'. He kept on thinking what the matter could be coz as far as he know Geet she can never ever betray or cheat her parents but why was her mother talking to her like that'. Suddenly his phone rang'. He saw the landline no. of Geet's home'. His mind strike at the point why was he not given a mobile phone'. But the ring became louder and he came out of his thoughts and picked up the phone'.

Geet:- hello !!!

Maan:- (trying to act normally realizing her voice due to constant crying) Hey !!! Geet mai abhi tumhare bare me hi soch raha tha'. Hw r u????

Geet:- Maan woh I want to talk about our marriage date' I mean cant it be sooner'

Maan:- that's my pleasure beautiful lady' but before that I want to meet you'

Geet:- but Maan I'''.

Maan:- Shhh !!! I want to meet you and that's final' we are meeting at XYZ park tomorrow 4 pm'. Accha bye Geet'.

He was about to hang up when he heard Mrs. Handa's voice

Mrs Handa:- Kya kaha usne???

Geet:- he wants to meet me'.


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Mrs. Handa:- jaroor tune hi kucch kiya hoga' hey babaji ye ladki hume kahin ka nahi chhodegi'

Geet:- but mamma!!!!

Mrs. Handa :- shut up Geet'.

She kept the receiver down and went to her room'.

Mrs Handa:- I am sorry babaji' I need to be strict to her' I don't want her to hold the wrong path before her wedding'.

Maan was shaken by the behavior Geet was going through' he wanted to hug her and soothe her' he wanted to wipe away her each tear and stand by her side to solve her each and every problem'

He couldn't be able to even blink whole night'.. All he was thinking was his love was in pain and he can't do anything' Next day Maan couldn't concentrate on his office work and was seated with her snap in his hand and was thinking how to talk to her' what if she doesn't tell him' what if she doesn't find him that much trustworthy'. He shrugged off his thought and looked at the clock

Maan:- Oh freak!!!! Its 3:50' I might get late'.

He rushed out of his office and drove towards the park' he reached there in 20 mins and found her sitting quietly on the bench lost in her own thoughts'. He was broken to see her in pain' but today he couldn't let that be' he has to find the reason and the solution too' he went near her and patted her shoulder' she realized his presence and quickly wiped the tears forming in her eyes in spite of endless effort to hide them ,noticed by Maan ' she turned towards him and gave the same fake smile'. Now he understood why her smile never reached her eyes coz it was all fake'. He came nearer and sat by her side'

Geet:- maan' you wanna talk about something' have I done any mistake' I mean is ''.

He cut her in between by keeping his finger on her lips and said

Maan:- Shhh !!! Geet let me speak'. Geet I just want to confess today that I Love you and have loved you since I saw you in a party 6 months ago' but being with you since two months I realized I saw another Geet in the party' who was jovial.. who made everyone smile and smiled herself too' whose smile always spoke her pure heart out.. who talk this much that other people had to shut her up'' but this Geet is someone else' this geet smiles but fakely.. this geet speaks but limited' I just wanna ask Geet where is my that Geet gone??? Where has your smile disappeared???? Wher has your sweet voice gone??? Where have you hidden your non stop talks??? Why Geet??? Why you changed yourself to a lifeless creature ??? why Geet why???

Tears were flowing nonstop from her eyes' She looked at him with utter shock as how deeply he realized her pain' No one was there for her to share her pain but he was giving his hand himself but she can't betray her parents again'. Wait again???? When did she betray them?? But she cant take risk now'. So she gathered the courage to lie and spoke

Geet:- there is nothing Maan' I am like this only' I think you misunderstood.. i'

Maan:- (cutting her in between) I expected this from you Geet' I know you don't want to break your parent's trust'

She looked at him stunned'. How could he find what was running in her mind' she kept on staring at his brown eyes' she saw a lot of concern and love for her in those eyes'

Maan came forward and held her hands in his and looked in her eyes'

Maan:- Geet!!! Before being each other's fianc we are friends haina'. Cant you share ur pain with your friend' plz Geet trust me once and tell me what the problem is '. I promise you Geet I shall stand by your side forever' all thing is I can't see my Geet in immense pain'

She was lost in his words, in his friendship, in his concern and in his immense love'. She was lost to such extend that she instantly hugged him and started crying bitterly'. She kept on crying for don't know how long and he was just rubbing her back'..She was feeling secure in his arms'. She was feeling light crying on his shoulders'. When she realized the reality she found herself hugging him tight and his shirt wet with her tears and his eyes filled with tears'.

Geet:- I am sorry Maan!!!!

Maan:- I was waiting for it for so long Geet' plz don't be sorry!!! Tell me Geet what is bothering you for so long' plz tell me'

Geet couldn't control herself now'.. she told him everything'. Everything how her parents misunderstood her when she was talking to her friend's boyfriend and when she was just advising him not to go against his parents'. She told him she wanted to clear every misunderstanding but her parents weren't listening to her since then'.

Geet:- Maan my parents are my life and sincerely I feel disgusted hurting them unknowingly'. They love me a lot Maan and I know they are doing this for my betterment but I don't want to see them hurt more maan and I cant help out Maan' I cant help out'

She started to cry again'. Maan hugged her ight and was wondering what sort of girl she is'.. how well she understands her parents as he saw Mrs. Handa weeping yesterday'. How much she loves her parents??? That being in such state from months she didn't get frustrated with her parents for such behaviour but she wants to lessen their pain'.. How could a girl who loves her parents a lot can betray them'. He needs to do something coz he knew only one thing he has to bring smile back on his love's face'. He finally spoke

Maan:- Geet!!!! You are not alone anymore'.. I am with you' don't worry'. I'll bring the truth in front of them'. I am always with you Geet'. Always'.go and tell mom dad we are getting married soon'. But Geet I need your help'. Just tell me the whereabouts of that Dhaval or Avantika'.

Geet was overjoyed with his apprehension and was about to hug him back when she blushed and held herself back..Maan smiled' she told him their address and then he dropped her back home'..

Geet told her parents as Maan told her say' her parents were delighted and called maan's parents and told them and asked them to join in next day to find the appropriate date for wedding while Maan was busy somewhere else'he went to Dhaval's home and found a huge lock' he inquired with neighbors and they told them that he shifted from there before months with his wife'

Maan thought "wife"' have they gone mad they got married without their parents' permission' how could they'

Maan was thinking to go to Avantika's home but he was scared as if she ran away from her home then her parents might not like him asking or talking about her but it was the question of his Geet and her smile' he without thinking for second time went to Avantika's home'.

On the other hand Geet was not at all herself'. She was lost in the dreams of ofcourse her fianc and was just wondering how can somebody be so understanding and loving' she found herself to be the luckiest person to have him'. she went to keep her bag in her cupboard when she found a note in her bag

Remember I love you more than anything'. Apni saari tensions mujhpe chodd do'.

Love you

Urs Maan

She was aww at his gesture'. She blushed at his action of love and she remembered he confessed his love today which was gone unnoticed because of her pain'. She was falling for his concern' this is not she was expecting him to do anything for her but his mere words that he is with her always were an ointment on her wounds'.. She was although unaware of his tries''. But he has occupied a special place in her heart' and she realized it'.

Maan went to Avantika's place'. Her father opened the door'. He told him that he is Avantika's friend's fianc' and was waiting for an abusive reaction but to his shock her father welcomed him' when he went inside he saw a huge photo frame hanging on the wall with engraved Avantika Weds Dhaval'..

He was shocked'. He looked at her father with questioning eyes and he understood so he continued his phase of story'.

Mr. Sharma:- beta we are blessed to have Geet as our daughter's friend'. She showed her the right path'. She told her not to run away and talk to us and she did same'. We opposed earlier but there is nothing more important for us than our daughter's happiness' there fore we and Dhaval's parents agreed to this marriage'. We went to meet Geet many times but we never were able to meet her'. How is she??? Why she hadn't come with you???

Maan who was still in shock that how life could be so unfair with his Geet was a god gift an angel who thinks for others first' who kept her mouth shut just because she didn't want her friend's image to go down' love and respect for her increased 100 times in his eyes'. He came back to reality by mrs Sharma offering juice to him'

Maan didn't wasted time' he instantly told them her side of story after which they had tears of guilt and sympathy in their eyes'.

Maan asked them to accompany him to Geet's parents to tell them the whole truth' they all agreed gladly'.

Next day early morning Maan along with Avantika Dhaval and their parents went to Geet's home'. Everybody told them the real incident and apologized to them'

Geet's parents were crying bitterly' what they did to their angel' their doll who loved and respected them with no bounds'.

Geet who went to mandir came back and found everybody standing in her home was stunned' she didn't know what was happening''.

But her parents eyes with same love told her everything'. Her mom went straight to her and hugged her tightly'.

Mrs. Handa:- Geet I am so sorry beta '. I being a mother misunderstood you'. I am so sorry'.

Geet hugged her back and told her she was not at fault coz it was the situation which was adverse'.

Her father kissed her forehead and apologized' Geet nodded a no'..

Her father went to Maan and hugged him tight and spoke

Mr. Handa:- we are blessed to have a son-in-law like you'.thank you so much beta'.

Maan:- no not at all!!! I did all this just to bring smile back on the faces of people in this house and Geet is my friend first'. I am a selfish person I did this for my people and my frnd'. And plz don't give any kind of credit coz credit should go to your daughter who loves you more than anything' I haven't seen such a selfless person ever'.. you are very lucky'.

All smiled at his gesture but Geet was blown away coz she never cud think the day which was she dreaming from months would come so soon'.and he brought this day in her life ' she was completely lost to him' she couldn't be able to think anything beyond him and kept on staring at him when his parents arrived'..

They told them that they are there to find a muhrat for their wedding' pandit too arrived'

Maan seeked their permission to talk to Geet alone' Geet was waiting for the moment'.

Maaneet came to Geet's room.. Geet was about to start when Maan spoke

Maan:- Geet !!!! you were doing this wedding because your parents distrusted you' Geet I don't want you to get forced in any type of relationship'.

Geet was shocked at his words' she knew he loves her a lot'.. and she understood he was saying all that for her happiness'. She again fell for him for such an selfless statement'..

She was looking at him with the newly developed love' he couldn't understand her expression so he continued

Maan:- I mean if you want to cancel this wedding you can''.

Geet didn't let him complete his sentence'. She pecked his lips' he was taken aback by her action and she turned around in shyness'. Maan got her answer but he still want her to speak'.

He turned her around and found her blushing hard' her cheeks were tomato red because of blush'.

Maan:- to ise mai kya samjhu Angel??? Welcome ya Goodbye'.

Geet looked at him and found his eyes staring at her'.

She non hesitatingly said

Geet:- Mr. Khurana I want to be Mrs. Khurana as soon as possible coz I couldn't stay away from my love for long'

Maan was again stunned at geet's answer but one thing he knew was her Geet has returned'. The same bubbly chirpy smiling Geet'

Maan hugged her and they shared a passionate kiss'. They both stood there in each others embrace for countless time'.

Geet:- I love you Maan !!!! thanks for coming in my life my savior'.i dont love you coz you cleared the misunderstandings but i love you for being with me when there was no one for me... i am blessed to have you...

Maan:- love you too Geet!!! Thanks for coming in my life as an Angel'. My Angel' i am blessed too to have such a selfless person in my life and who loves me too... isnt it...


she nodded...

Their wedding date got finalized next weekend'. Everybody was finally happy''..





so that was it hope yo all enjoyed it... plz dont forget to press like and do comment...




EPILOGUE

Edited by sakshi.ekansh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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great one Saakshi...oh i absolutely loved it
husband wife relationship is all about trust and support...there is nothing to hide and you let your vulenrable self in another person's hand
But does this relationship just start in a moment when you get married or it is a state of mind which you reach gradually over a period of time
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats !!!!!!!!! 4 d new os ...

awesome ... superb ... loved it ...

thnx 4 d pm ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome story awesome loved maan as always he suppoerts geet in every ups and down love it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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...dear
...4 Pm me dear..😳..
this updates r just
as...😃
...,
i just
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...⭐️⭐️⭐️👏👏👏
just ..really
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tons of 4 u dear...🤗🤗🤗
lov,❤️
Tama
P.S.: plz donn't copy paste my comments...i only made it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but donn't coppied it whole as my post...😡
P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...i tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...😲😕.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome os
luvd it
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awasome os dear
Loved it
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Awesome os sakshi..loved it..loved maan ka dialogue i am selfish..even in the show i loved the dialogue..it shows the true character of maan..pls write more of such stories but not while sacrifising ur sleep..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome os 😛.
loved it...

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