MG OS Tera Saath Hai to~ EPILOGUE - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Geet and her mom were preparing the dinner and geet looked lost'.

Mr h:- Geet!!! What happen puttar?? Is there any problem b/w you and Maan'.

Geet came out of the trance and spoke'

Geet:- nahi mamma there can never be any problem b/w us'. Humari Jodi babaji ne banayi hai aur pata hai I never imagined myself to be lucky this much to have a husband like him' he cannot be described in words' I was thinking if there would be any other husband who loves his wife and who took a little time to spend with her and that too very difficultly would have taken her somewhere alone but mamma my Maan thinks about me first.. he always come to know about my wishes without even asking him' I get everything mamma without demanding mamma' tell me who is luckier person than me in this entire universe??? I am blessed to have him mamma' I am really blessed to have him'.

Mrs Handa had tears of joy in her eyes' she kissed her forehead''

Mrs H:- I know my princess' he is a perfect prince for my angel'.

Geet:- mum but I wanted to talk to him alone' kucch karo na'.

Mrs H:- kyaaa??? Besharam'.

Geet pouted:- he is my husband mamma' mere pati parmeshwar jo aapke pati parmeshwar se chipke hain'

Mrs H:- haa baba dekhti hu' but what do you wanna talk to him???

Geet:- Shhh!!!! Secret''

Mrs H:- accha bacchu'

Geet winked and she smiled'

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Mr H:- Maan beta congrats for the new heights you are achieving in your business' I am really proud of you'

Maan:- thanks a lot Dad !!! its all because of my elders blessings and my wife's love and support'

Mr H:- hmm you must accept that my angel played a great role in your success'

Maan:- I do accept dad' and she is my angel too and my success is a gift of my angel for me'.

Mr H:- Maan beta !!!! you were suppose to talk to me for something'..

Maan:- Yes dad!!! I have planned a surprise for Geet!!! I just wanna talk to her regarding that'.

Mr H:- go ahead son'.

Meanwhile Mrs Handa came'..

Mr H:- Rano ji !!! Maan wants to talk to Geet regarding something'

Mrs H:- (st) perfect for each other'(smiled to maan) she is in her room oops I mean ex-room'

Maan smiled:- thanks mom'

Mrs H:- both are husband wife and still asking our permission to talk to each other' weird na'

Mr H:- they could have talked but it was their respect for us as we were present here na so ' maan is very busy '. They both might not get enough time to talk but their love is great' we can see that'..

Mrs H:- ji you are absolutely right'. I can see how much our princess love him and how much loving and caring he is towards her'.

Meanwhile Geet was looking at some paper in her hand Maan came from behind and hugged her' she suddenly hid the paper she was holding not going unnoticed by Maan' he turned her around and narrowed his eyebrows'. She kept quite the Maan suddenly snatched the paper from her hand and looked at it' it was the same paper which he gave to her when she told him her whole truth'. Maan looked at her blankly'.

Geet:- aise kya dekh rahe hain'.woh maine cupboard kholi aur ye mil gaya to bas aise hi dekh rahi thi kya hai'

She said like a caught kid'.

Maan:- jab meri mishty ko jhooth bolna hi nahi aata to who koshish kyun karti hai' I know geet you were cherishing the moment we had here'..

Geet:- I am so happy maan ki I got this place to share all my love with you' and here only I am going to give you the happiest news of our life'

Maan:- even I want to share a happy news with you' what a coincidence!!! So what do you wanna say???

Geet:- nahi pehle aap???

Maan:- pehle tumne kaha na'. to pehle tum'.

Geet:- offo Maan mai kucch nahi jaanti pehle aap'

Maan:- Geet!!! Ladies first!!!

Geet :- kahin is pehle aap pehle aap ke chaakar me train na chhut jaaye'. Is liye okay mai hi pehle batati hu' aur dekhte hain kiski khushkhabri badi hai???

Maan nodded and stopped for her to speak' she came closer to Maan and hugged him' his heartbeat was clearly audible to her'

Maan:- Geet bolo na what is the matter???

Geet looked at him and blushed hard and then closes herself more and spoke in is ear'

Geet:- Mr Maan Singh Khurana you are promoted'.

Maan looked suspiciously at Geet and she continued'

Geet:- Yes !!! from now onwards you are not only a son and my jaan, u are going to be Daddy dear soon'

Maan was stationary for a moment' it took him few minutes to digest the news and when he came back to his senses he lifted Geet and twirled her around'.. he was shouting like a small kid winning a competition'..

Maan:- Oh My God!!! Geet Mishty jaan I love you so much' you have given me the world's best news' OMG I can't believe it'. I didn't expected it really Geet I am so happy'

Geet who was looking at him with tearful eyes smiled at him'. she gestured him to put her down' he did that realizing to be more careful now'.

Geet:- Maan ab meri news???

Maan:- Geet it is nothing in front of what you gave to me' seriously your news is not the happier but the happiest' but still as I wanted to do something for you so I planned our holiday to Austria for about a month'

Geet:- but Maan that was your official trip na???

Maan:- yeah I am going for Office work but that will last long for At most 3 days then the rest 27 days are yours madam'. And now we three will enjoy together as its being long I spent time with you so I want to spend some quality time with you and of course our coming sweetheart'.

Geet simply hugged him and said

Geet:- Maan I was waiting for long to spend time with you.. aap mere mann ki baat humesha kaise jaan lete hain???

Maan:- geet tumhare mann me hi to rehta hu mai'.to wahan ki baatein na jaanu kaise ho sakta hai and more over I myself wanted to be with you kyunki mai tumhe time hi nahi de paa raha tha isliye I planned this vacation 4 months ago and was just checking to complete my work and nothing would be left pending then and see your love made it successful'.

Both smiled and made their way out' They both gave the good news to Mr and Mrs Handa and they were extremely happy'

Maaneet enjoyed their vacations on full swing and the unknown void that was unintentionally created b/w them got filled up'..

Later Maaneet were blessed with twins'. A girl and a boy'. They named them Maanvi and Geetansh'.

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Edited by sakshi.ekansh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
loved itawesomethank u so muchfor the pmi loved itluv u n ur ffs
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
A super sweet ending to a wonderful OS. Do write more...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
Wow sakshi..it was just awesme..maan is so sweet..bina kuch kahe hi sab karlethe hai..i just lovd the names of their babies maanvi and geetansh whch indirectly reflects their names...
Love u..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
faboulous yaar love it

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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
sorry dear..
like button not working..!
awesum epilogue..
luvd the understanding b/w maneet..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome epi...loved it..like button not working..sobs..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
wow dear it was amazing
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
absolutely wonderful dear
I loved so many things about this epilogus...just wonderful
Maan-Geet understanding...they know each other so well. Not only thier love is about passion but about understanding, support and making each other happy and contended in day to day life
Loved how they understand each other's wishes and aspirations. Geet supports him in is work and he loves her and takes out time for her.
I also loved the fact that he got her to meet her parents. And offcourse the news of babies and vacation...wow how special
Loved the epilogue totally...in just two parts you managed to convey a beautiful relationship of husband-wife
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Heyy dear awesome update loved d OS dear!!!!! loved d ending...
plzzz do write another OS..:)

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