Devils Den: Vikram Ra.One Vs Maan G.One

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Samanalyse

@Samanalyse

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Posted: 13 years ago

#251

@Anu: I really liked your story, except I think Geet should meet Vikram to be able to confront him face to face, not to fulfill his demands, and should take a stand after one meeting. She shouldn't let Vikram blackmaill her into another one. I don't think she would stand for that.

But then maybe before she can tell Maan, because he was unconscious when it happened, about the meeting and confrontation, Vikram sends him pictures of Geet meeting him so Maan misunderstands and thinks Geet gave in to his demands when actually she was going to confront him and did.

Basically I REALLY want a good confrontation where Geet tells Vikram what's what and that he has messed with the wrong girl by hurting Maan. And then she should tell him, if you really loved me you would want me to be happy and Maan is what makes me happy. This will crush Vikram momentarily but then give him more adrenaline to fight back. I would love it if he now said, Geet, you rejected me and now you and your Maan will pay!

Hi everyone! 😊

@Shivi: Congratulations on being done with your report! Please don't pull your hair out with your long beautiful fingers. Allow yourself to slip into Maaneetland on youtube instead. It's very soothing.

Edited by skg267 - 13 years ago

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Richa zutshi

@-richierich-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#252

Oye anu Is sunmeera Msk's mom. Kya rangeen mizaz ka hai senior khurana ;P , i don't think she is maan's mother. I think she is some college friend who fakes love with maan for property .

Your 11th point No... Geet have been always pataka and I want to deal the matter in a patake style as she traped the UL Coming from his own way.similarly she should come face to face with vikram and have some powerful dialogues and confront him and say what he is thinking will never happen and if he want to take her by force then she prefers to die,she can never be happy without maan .itne me police pahunch jati hai tadaa... he escapes or he will be captured for the time being and he will bounce back as NT did with in no time she was out from PS with fake documents ,in the same way .He will come as the director or CEO Of the london project again try to seperate them introduces sameera as his secretary and that will disturb maan and so on...

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Meetu_Anu

@Meetu_Anu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#253

@Samy, Z

WEll.. I though of it becaues after seeing MSK in half dead state Geet will forget all her fears...

so the first thing i want her to do is

1. Tell Vikram that if something happens to MSK than she will also not survive and that is her promise to him..

2. Hearing this Vikram is taken aback but does not give up

3. He plans to trap geet in other way...where she will not plan of taking her life away for MSK

4. He mat put a condition to Geet that if she agrees to meet him and spend time he will do as per her wish

5. Now that meeting can be anything...she might confron him ..but than Vikram may blackmail and tell her that if she does not do as per his wish he will further more harm MSK..and she know he can go to any extent

6. Geet may agree for MSK's sake..not because she is scared but because she wants to get rid of Viky once and for all..

Now Vikram will play double game here...he may call MSK there and may try to creat MU between Maaneet...

MSK will not misunderstand Geet but may be super angry as she did all this putting her life to risk and without telling him

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Meetu_Anu

@Meetu_Anu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#254

@Richa

For the drama elemnt ... As of now showing vikram a bit strong is imp i guess...

See til now MSk has handled him alone and today he will fail

now Geet will try to handle him alone and will get traped

ultimately both Maaneet get together than and set a master trap for vikram..and than to succeed...

Geet though strong will be in vulnarable state after seeing MSK half dead...

she may confront Viky but in all this she may not see the trap which Vikram is laying...and just to get her man and her love safe she may go to any extent to kick out Vikram from their life

this may give rise to a small tiff between Maaneet first...but than they unit and kick out Vikram

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Samanalyse

@Samanalyse

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Posted: 13 years ago

#255

Originally posted by: Meetu_Anu
4. He mat put a condition to Geet that if she agrees to meet him and spend time he will do as per her wish

5. Now that meeting can be anything...she might confron him ..but than Vikram may blackmail and tell her that if she does not do as per his wish he will further more harm MSK..and she know he can go to any extent

See I just don't want her to be written dumb enough to fall for that. If your psycho stalker said that after one meeting he would stop harassing you, would you believe him? If he said he would do whatever you told him to, at any point, would you believe him? I know I wouldn't!

Geet agreeing to meet Vikram would automatically imply that she trusts him on some level to keep his word not to bother her again. I don't want to see her having even that much faith in him.

If she does plan to meet him, I would want it to be with a camera or a recorder, with a police van in the background so that she can finally identify him and know her enemy. But then Vikram can know that she has this plan to catch him and hide his face somehow in the shadows so the camera can't pick it up, or maybe be in a disguise. Or he can find out later about the camera and go from happy that Geet has come to torn and angry that she tried to have him caught when he trusted her.

I think that could be a great psycho moment. Then he could smash something which accidentally causes Geet a minor injury and breaks the camera she has on, start crying and apologising to her for hurting her and finally run away by the time the police run in.