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abinash079 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
upate the next part soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey guys,

I have a little bit of time right now...so I decided to write the next part..Sherya honey hoep you are okay and good luck on your studies!😳

Part 27

While thnking his grip loosened so Geet removed her face frm his hands n lied down on bed leaving Maan alone to fight the turmoil n closed her eyes

Maan watched Geet sleep. Life took a complete 180 degrees turn. He still couldn't grasp the idea of him becoming a father-a father soon. How will he be as a father? Many things replayed in his head. He was excited. He looked at Geet. He spent this past month, just thinking about her during the day and night.

When he wasn't busy playing with Suhana his mind occupied with Geet's memories. Her laughter, her talks, her smile and most importantly that night. It was the best night he had and he never felt that way before about any girl. Geet was the only special girl but yet he couldn't accept her. Now, when she really is here in front of him...she seemed different. She wasn't the same Geet anymore that he once knew. The smile that used to be on her face and always shown in her eyes was not there anymore, only anger.

Its his fault. She had to leave her house own because of him. Had he not slept with her and left her maybe this wouldn't have happened. His craziness, his ego, his obsession got the best of him. Now the real question arises what shall he do next? He got up and left the room to look for Suhana.

Geet slowly opened her eyes as soon as she heard him leaving. She wasn't really sleeping at all. Only she knows what she went though this past one month. Kicked out of the house with no support except for one friend, loosing everyone including her love left her dejected. Her only support her only means of living was the kid growing inside her womb. How could her own mother ask her to give up the baby when she, herself, is a mother? How can she give up the whole symbol of her love, even if it was one sided love.

During that month, she waited at her door, waiting for Maan to come. Waiting for him to sweep off her feet and bring her home with him but that day never came. Now, when she was finally trying to get her life back together here he was in front of her. She only feared one thing now. The baby. What will he do if he finds out that she is pregnant with his baby?

He has power, money, and name..he can do anything at the snap of his fingers, whereas, she only has this baby. What will she do? Maybe it is better if she leaves as soon as possible before he finds out. She looked out at the window, the sun was setting...meaning a new day tomorrow. Only her Babaji knows what her destiny and faith holds now.

Maan stood out of her room looking at her. He held Suhana in his arms as she slept on his shoulder. He could tell that she was awake by her slight movements and her head slightly turning to look toward the window. He now knew that he cannot loose Geet...he cannot let her leave this town in this state. Maybe his ego got the best of him but he will try anything to change for her, for them and most importantly for their baby. He smiled at the thought of that. His and Geet's baby. He walked down the hallway carrying Suhana as the new day awaits.

Okay how was it? Sad? Good? Bad?😆😆
Edited by mrs.msk - 13 years ago
abinash079 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part simi loved it
whoever write the next part dont let geet go to mumbai
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely part 26 & 27, hope geet does not go to mumbai pls
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Posted: 13 years ago
@simi..
gud one yaar...
u brought a new determination to b faced by maan!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
AARTHI,AFSHA &SIMI🤗🤗🤗AWESOME MINDBLOWING updates yar😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Fantastic updates by all the people who contnued after me...

Cant remember the names..

So Geet is actually pregnant...

think now Maan will go back to showing hispwer and money to make her stay..

Waiting for the next writer to update..

Please make it an intense one with Maan blackmailing her to stay with him and Geet having no choice..😉

Gosh, i'm so evil... I always want Maan to have his own way, no matter what...🤪
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Posted: 13 years ago
simi dear loved it to the ore waiting for Maan to take the a quick but safe step before Geet plan's her next move who is next me waiting eagerly...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Both part 26 &27 were amazing
now let see how Maan manages to stop Geet
Luv
TC
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome part simi...oh no geet is planning to go away from him😲 waiting for the next part

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