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Posted: 13 years ago
awww what an amazing twist...
moi loved it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
great job @maankigeet4ever( since i am not sure abt ur name😉) u have solved the confusion...
and yes Sameera's pregnancy too😆😆...
cant keep away😳...borrowed the PC from my son while he was working on his school project...let me handle it back or else that too will become my duty😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
to bangalores.can i update this part please..it will be my first ever attempt to write something & have written already the haif of it
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Oh my God, this is getting so interesting. We have now reached a stage where we cannot tell who is the writer without looking at the profile name. You are all so awesome.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome dear
lovely way to let vickey know abot their plan
looking forward how would maan grasp this info
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Posted: 13 years ago
@ Nazmaa
wonderful part 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Shilalipi

to bangalores.can i update this part please..it will be my first ever attempt to write something & have written already the haif of it



it's a fun post everyone can join in...in fact since the parts are small i thought many wud make an attempt...come on give us your contribution...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART-12

savitri devi was in karan's room it has been so many years that she had come in his room...after karan suicided...she locked this room..not even for once..she entered here...or let anyone enter..but today..seeing her beloved grandson so devastated only for that wicked girl geet..who was not better than her aunty..she also appeared innocent like her aunty..bt she should have known that all these handa girls are snake in disguise of angel...she still remembered that dreadful day of karan-kavita's marrige..when kavita..geet's aunty showed her actual "roop" & said that she didn't wanted to marry karan as she wanted to marry karan just for his money..now have found more wealthy one...so there is no need of him now...that day if nisha..who was surprisingly kavita's cousin had nt come to rescue their pride & izzat their name would have been tarnished..
all was going well after the marrige..even karan tried his best to accept nisha..bt for an unknown reason,,karan suicided after two years of marrige...then within another year..nisha was married again...this time it was a love marrige to the billionarie mr sham..though daadi thought he was too old(35 years) for a 19 year old nisha..bt she was nt against it as she thought she was too young to mourn over the husband for her whole life whom she married due to circumstances...
vicky came out silently from the Deekshit house...after having a chit chat with arjun..pretending that he did not heard anything.thinking what to do..he have to do something fast..as the marrige will be within 15 days..bt he knew he has to continue acting that he was with those dirty Deekshits...bt it was nt that easy..nt at all easy after knowing that arjun them who made him sensless by spiking his drink & took some pics with girls in objectionable positions & showed it to geet..& it was the reason that geet told meera to end the relation..ofcourse she was right in her position!!she did what did what a loving sister shold have done to protect her sister...all this arjun did only to take revenge for a mere slap!!!.his guilt pils up..now he will nt let the bro-sis sucess in thier plan..he has to do something.bt he knew..he could nt do anything alone.he was nt now afraid of punishment..all he knew that the first thing he would do is to tell daadima & maan bhai all of this...
daadima was devastated after reading the letter which she found in karan's secret drawer..oh god !!
dear mom,
i know that u hate kavita & i hated her too..for doing this to me..bt after knowing the truth i feel my self trapped in guilt..u know mom that day kavita did that only to protect our family honour..it was nisha who told her that i was drunk once & i accidenty ...she told kavita that she was pregnant with my chid & if i do nt marry her she will make sure that the whole delhi knows the pregnancy news..& actually she was nt all pregnant..bt when i discovered it & tried to talk to kavita she told me that i should forgive nisha..as she is my wife & loves me...i also tried that only for kavita & u..bt i could nt bear it nymore when i came to know that nisha..didnt love me..loved only my money..& was having numorous affairs...mom i know i would not be there when u will be reading the letter bt please do not hold any bad feelings about kavita..she is pure mom...
love
karan

she could nt stop her tears from flowing..does that mean geet is innocent too..no no that can not be,,,they had proves...
"dadi!" vicky's voice broke the chain of her thought..she was stil holding the letter..she quickly wipes her tears before vicky sees it & said.."yes beata...boliye..kuch kaam that apko??"

vicky took a long breath & stepped into the room..."I HAVE TO TELL YOU SOMETHING..."



okay this is my first attempt to write something ...so pls comment..criticism also welcomed...
Edited by Shilalipi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
@ reya

thanks for part 11 🤗


@ Shilalipi

you cleared all the confusion regarding kavit, dadi's accusations n all in part 12

good work dear 👍🏼
Edited by -memorable- - 13 years ago
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@ Bindu...me is Reya :) glad the confusion was worked out...


Reya <3
Edited by maankigeet4ever - 13 years ago

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