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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
loved it...
r u gonna cont it...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice os whn r u updating me waiting pls cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: nonabebu

nice os whn r u updating me waiting pls cont soon


yeah I am about to write the last part😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Guys thank you so much for your lovely comments! I didn't think that I was going to get such a huge demand to write another part.and you guys know I can't disapoint you guys so I wrote the last part..enjoy! and no I don't think I can turn this into a SS I don't think I can handle another story 😆😆

LOVE YOU GUYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!😳😳


OS: WATERWORKS
Last Part


The doorbell rang...she opened the door with frustration and looked at him...she let him in and walked straight to the bathroom. He shook his head and followed her in quietly.

Geet: Look is this how you fix things?

Maan: I thought I fixed it

Geet: Well you didn't

Maan: Okay let me see

Geet: No forget it..I am gonna call someone else (She goes out...before she could get her hands on the phone...she was in the air in his arms...) Maan put me down I am mad at you.

Maan: No...I am not going to let anyone come here..I am the only plumber in your life...(He kisses her cheek)

Geet: A no good one either...now put me down

Maan: Its your fault anyway

Geet (gasps and looks at him) What do you mean?

Maan (he sits on the sofa with her on top of his lap) you were the one that was distracting me while I tried to fix the pipes

Geet: in what way?

Maan: come on...okay you wearing that sari all wet by the way making it hard for me to resist you, and then you wearing those tight work clothes making it even harder for me to do what I have to do.

Geet: Well I didn't do it on purpose.

Maan: ohh and don't forget the fact that you purposely placed your hand on top of my chest knowing how I would react while I was under the kitchen sink.

Geet (bits her lips...) No i didn't

Maan: I know...you are lieing..come on who could resist me right?

Geet (gets up from his lap) I could...(she walks away from him)

Maan (gets up) come on Geet I was joking

Geet: By the way its all your fault...who's idea was it to "pretend" that we are strangers? hmm?

Maan: Well I just wanted to do reenactment you know relive the moments when I met you two months ago..(he places his arms around her waist...pulling her closer..he kisses her lips but Geet pushes him away)

Geet: yeah yeah...how about we make this a memorable moment so that we can reenact this some other day? (she says while looking into his eyes running her fingers down his chest...) what do you say? (she whispers)

Maan: Okay...I am in...(he begins taking his shirt off)

Geet: not so fast...I have an idea..(she smirks and goes in the kitchen...she opens the fridge...and hides something behind her as soon as Maan comes and stands next to her...)

Maan: So what do you have in mind?

Geet: How about this..(she sprinkles cold water on him making him jump back...) how about you fix the damn pipes Mr. Plumber because next time I will make it more memorable for you that you won't forget..(she walks off in anger. Maan sighs and goes to the bathroom.. She lies on the bed going through the magazine until she heard Maan calling her name. Sighing she goes to the bathroom and saw everything was in mess..) What the...

Maan: I need your help come here

Geet (roles her eyes) okay what...

Maan (he holds her hand making her sit on the floor next to him while he sits behind her...he brings her hands to the pipe) okay hold over there..(he kisses her shoulder)

Geet: Maan...stop that

Maan: What am I doing? let me get out my tools...(He takes out his ranch...and brings it toward the pipe...he tightens the pipe while she still held onto it)

Geet: can I let go now? I am getting wet

Maan: No keep it held...(he removes her hair to the other side...putting his chin on her shoulder...he kisses her cheek while his eyes move to the pipe fixing it..Geet closed her eyes when Maan kissed her...he does the same thing again to the other side...

Geet: Maan (she screams when she felt herself being wet from top to bottom. She stands up mad)

Maan (was laughing) okay now we are even!

Geet: You better run...

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k98jmMbxBn8[/YOUTUBE]

She chased him around the house..throwing whatever that came in her way..while Maan laughed and ran around the house. He went behind the dining table...while she grabbed a pan.."Geet no..put it down...Geet!" He yells before ducking out of the way as fry pan came towards him. "I won't spare you Maan..." He sticks out his tongue and goes to the backyard...he quickly opens up a water hose...making her more wet...she comes running after him but he again escapes laughing...he runs inside the house...hiding behind a sofa...Geet comes inside the house going from one room to another looking for him...she stands in the hallway with her arms on her hips...she smirks and yells.."aahh...my ankle" Maan comes out from behind the sofa to look at her...she holds a big spatula in her hand standing in front of Maan...he backs up a little...

Maan: "Geet I said am sorry.." She shakes her head no...she was about to hit him when he held her hand and twists it behind her back...while she screamed to let go...

Geet: "Maan let go"

Maan: "No ways! Now say Maan is the best plumber in this world.."

Geet: "No never!" He squeezes her wrist tighter...

Maan: "what was that?"

Geet: "Okay okay okay I will say it...Maan...is...the...(Maan loosens his hold...)...best...(she pushes him and runs off to the bedroom..) Maan is the worse plumber ever! (she yells as she runs...)

Maan: Geet you will pay for this...(right before she could close the door..he barges in...Geet goes the corner of the room...) What did you say?

Geet: nothing..(she runs around the room before finally Maan catches her hand and both fall on the bed...) let go..

Maan: No..not until you apologize

Geet: never! (He brings her underneath him...)

Maan: ohh I think you will! (he kisses her shoulder...Geet closes her eyes) you know how good you look when you are wet? When we first met I tried so hard not to look at you...I really had to control myself...(he bites her shoulder)

Geet: Maan...(she whispers...as his hands roamed all over her body...he stops his hand at her stomach...his fingers inside her shirt...slowly going up...)

Maan (looks at Geet...) Geet...we have to fix the bathroom...

Geet: what? (she comes back to her senses) ohh yeah (both get up) this time fix it properly

Maan: I will...lets go..help me...(both go to the bathroom...the water was everywhere..both looked at each other and smiles...Maan goes to the pipe and puts his hand in...) Geet I think I found the problem...but I can't reach it...can you reach it for me?

Geet: okay move over...

Maan: okay here...and while you do this...let me get something else...

Geet: okay...(she puts her hand inside and pulls out something...) what is this? (it was a box of some sort..she opens it and finds a ring inside..she looks back with tears at Maan..he was standing there with a smile...) what is this?

Maan: We met through this so I thought why not propose you that way too...

Geet: Is that why you wanted to reenact our meeting?

Maan: yeah to give it some extra effect...so Ms. Handa what is your answer...

Geet (hugs him) Yes...(Maan kisses her on her lips...picking her up a little putting her feet on top of his feet...) I love you Mr.Plumber and I can't wait to become Mrs.Plumber

Maan: Well there is one thing you don't know

Geet: what?

Maan: first I have to get a divorce from my first wife

Geet (looks at him shocked) what?

Maan (laughs and runs) GOT YA! (he runs while Geet chases him again)


Okay what do you think? if it was stupid tell me😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
great update!
loved it😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
one more part simi pls pls..just one something happy and cute kinds wala..yahaan toh yeh haste he jaa rahe hain..pls..it can be a epi too..pls pls..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: mchopra

one more part simi pls pls..just one something happy and cute kinds wala..yahaan toh yeh haste he jaa rahe hain..pls..it can be a epi too..pls pls..


😆😆 ek ek karke puri short story ban jayegi😆😆😆
I thought this was cute😆
okay how bout I will see depending on what everyone else says?😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
Hey dear,tht was sweet one yaar...
Ek to Maan bana plumber n GEET wants to be mrs.Plumber...
LolZzz...awesome yaar...
Thnkx a lot for an OS...
Keep writing...!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
Maaneet are such a tease! 😆

Cute story...especially the little joke that Maan said at the end...almost

gave me a heart attack 😆

😍




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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: XXaquafireXX

Maaneet are such a tease! 😆


Cute story...especially the little joke that Maan said at the end...almost

gave me a heart attack 😆

😍

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they are a tease aren't they Ruhi? 😆 By the way I love your name so am gonna say Ruhi two more time Ruhi Ruhi hehehehehe

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