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Posted: 13 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: harshdb

Chapter-3

awesome part. i totally loved it. finally maan and geet met. geet is checking maan😆 do continue soon. thanks for the pm...
all the best for your exams.

yeah, they met. maneet are heart and soul of this ff. others are just fillers.
more maneet updates to come..
and thanks.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: renjini263

Heyya awesome update luvd it... geet ws checking maan 😊😆.plzzz continue soon nd ALL D BEST 4 ur xams..

thank you😊😊😊
yes geet was checking maan but we cant blame her na, maan hai hi itna hot.
and thanks for wishes and also for lovely comment.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
awesome story
loved all parts
plz con soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
where is the part? today is Wednesday. i m waiting for the part. pls update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
Amazing update.
Loved it.
But here geet scared maan by asking such questions.😆
Continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: siyana

awesome story
loved all parts
plz con soon

thanks dear😊SmileSmile
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: shristi1

Amazing update.
Loved it.
But here geet scared maan by asking such questions.😆
Continue soon.

thanks srishti.. geet is a bold girl.. not a seedhi saadhi from whom maan can easily escape..
i'll continue soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: harshdb

where is the part? today is Wednesday. i m waiting for the part. pls update soon.

oh sorry dear.. i should have mentioned next wednesday.. extremely sorry.
i'm updating now.😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79

hey geetians, I'm back with the update. Thanks to all who hit the like button and commented. I'm really grateful. From now onwards updates will be regular. All I need is likes and good comments that assure me that people are not bored and are still interested in this ff.

also if anyone here can make banner for this FF please send me a scrap.

Chapter-4

GETTING STARTED

I entered the classroom and waved a good morning to my friends.

-"hi guys wassup?" I hugged adi and pinky.

-"hieee geet!!" a familiar voice greeted me with enthusiasm. I turned back to find Manisha. "how was the trip??"

-"aww! Manu darling" I hugged him, "the trip was awesome, we enjoyed a lot in the safari"

Manisha is of different sexual orientation but as innocent as a child and a darling to our group. It is really difficult to hold a single diabolical thought about him.

-"hi geet, long time" Romeo, a certified flirt came to me with a huge smile. But he is just so cute and equally lovable as my Manu. Pinky, Adi, Manisha, Romeo and me had a chat while Yash and Meera were busy blushing at each other.

The professor was coming. We immediately rushed to our places.

Among the three rows of two seater benches, manisha and I took the last bench in the first row, Adi and Pinky sat on the last but one bench before them to make themselves comfortable for chatting during the class or use their mobiles so that the professor doesn't catch them for not concentrating on the class. Yash and Meera among the sincere students to the middle row centre bench, while Romeo who is in professor's bad books was in the first bench in the last row, close to the board and professor.

As the professor entered, all started to behave properly.

-"when I had taken up psychology, I never knew we would get psycho professors" Adi commented huskily making me, manisha and pinky grin.

-"dude, they are psycho, that's why they teach psycho?logy" pinky added.

This was what exactly they do at the last bench, commenting and not paying attention to the class.

The professor shouted at us keep the calm.

-"he started it again" manisha shook his head. "the time he wastes in giving lectures to us can be utilized in explaining the chapter"

-"please manisha" adi said adjusting his spectacles, "if I really wanted to study like a book worm I would have opted for science or commerce, not psychology"

*flash* I was introducing myself to maan and, "which group?" I asked, "commerce" maan replied. *flash ended*

I couldn't understand why I suddenly thought of maan. But ultimately I knew the answer. Maan is just too fascinating. 'I wish he was here' I thought.

And then the next moment it was like if I had asked for moon too then I would have got it. A strikingly handsome man entered the classroom in his light blue shirt. 'Maan' I moaned his name.

-"you are late Mister" the professor groaned angrily.

-"I know" he said with raising eyebrows shocking the everyone with his audacity.

-"oh well, then may I know the reason that" asked sarcastically.

-"I was at the principle room" Maan said looking deep into his eyes.

Unexpectedly the professor cooled down and didn't say a word further. He allowed him in. maan was looking at the full classroom for a seat.

-"hey you," the professor said, "you can sit here with Romeo"

-"it's Maan. Maan Kundra" he stated his name. and took his seat.

The female population already started going gaga over him. And then I was feeling terrible. I was in one end on the classroom in the last bench, while he was at the other end in the first bench.

-"geet," pinky whispered to me to come forward, "I had told you about a guy who gave vikram a run for his money yesterday right. It's him" she pointed out to maan.

-"but he is commerce right, why did he come here?" I told them.

-"what?" adi asked. "how did you know?"

-"yaar, I gave him lift to the college in the morning"

-"what???", pinky expressed her anger not looking back and pretending to hear the lecture. "geet, how did u hide this from us?"

Then we suddenly realized that only me, adi and pinky were chit chatting, is manisha concentrating on the class?

As I turned to look at him, I was dumbstruck. Manisha is gone into the world of daydreaming, putting his hands on his cheek. Definitely about Maan as his eyes weren't leaving him.

I wasn't really jealous, because we friends share our crushes too with each other. Best friends that we are.

-"manu," I waved my hand before him. No response.

"manisha!" I pushed him braking his reverie.

He looked at me disappointedly.

"dont look at him so much. He would become thin loosing his muscles" I joked.

-"oh geet, darling just look at him" manisha started. "doesn't he look more delicious than brad pit or Daniel craig?"

"maan!" he said with a gasp, "What a name. Maan Kundra!" I was lauging at his expressions. As we looked at Maan in the first bench he seemed to be totally engrossed in the lecture. "oh, how is Romeo resisting such a hotness, oops, sorry, hotmess" I laughed harder, "beside him" he continued.

Manisha's crush on Maan was hundred times deeper than mine. I wanted to describe Maan's sexy physique but decided against it as Manisha might feel bad.

"geet! Look at his abs and shoulders. And his sharp face features. Aaahhh! I feel like pulling his cheeks. I wish I could eat him raw man like a fresh apple. Or crush him under my lips and melt him to a juice and consume him fully" I feel a big pain in my stomach laughing at his comments. "I wish I could touch the feet of the great mother who had given birth to him and earned virtue"

Just then the bell rang and the class ended. The professor left. Manisha couldn't help but run to Maan.

-"hey handsome!" he said seductively. Yash and Meera saw this raise their eyebrows. Adi shook his head while me and pinky grinned.

Maan looked at him in a strange way, we all thought perhaps he was feeling weird being approached by a stranger.

-"let's go and have some coffee" he offered.

-"I don't like coffee" maan said bluntly and started moving.

-"then lets have some tea" manu stopped him.

-"not interested" he said.

-"then wanna join for drink?" he shuttled his eyelids, "beer, whisky, run, gin anything you like"

Maan now visibly got irritated.

-"what the hell is your problem?" maan scolded with a menacing voice. He slowly approached manisha while manisha was moving backwards..

-"what a filmy scene" pinky commented with a whispering making adi and yash giggle.

Back to manisha and maan, manisha was nervous.

"what the hell is your problem?? What did you say, that you'll eat me raw or crush me into juice? shameless fellow, how could you utter these words.

Are you a man or a man-eater????"

Maan hit the bench beside him making manu leave a breath in fear.

Then he left the class. As he passed beside me I looked at him with are-you-mad look. He left everyone dumfounded in the class. Yash and meera widened their eyes at his attitude while poor manu's mouth was wide opened.

-"what a rude dude geet" meera said.

-"manisha is so naive yaar, how can anyone be uncouth to him" yash added wih a sympathy to innocent manu.

-"exactly" meera said, "by the way geet, what exactly happened? What did manisha say which made that Kundra react like this?"

-"don't you know?" I asked, "manisha's comments yaar"

-"how would I know what you guys keep on commenting in the last bench? Me and yash sit away from you guys to concentrate on the class"

It striked something inside me.

Yash and meera who were just two benches away from us in next row couldn't hear us. Infact it's highly impossible for them since we talk in whispers. Then how did Maan, who sat at the other end of the class could hear our conversations?

-"doesn't it feel odd Adi? When yash and meera couldnt hear our chit chats then how did maan , in the first bench and that too far away from then knew what exactly we were discussing?" I expressed..

Adi thought for a while.

-"geet," he put hand on my shoulder, "I think they both were romancing with footsies and weren't concentrating on the lecture as we think," he assured, "relax you are thinking too much"

We headed towards the canteen after the long lecture.

I went to the counter and asked the boy John for a cappuccino and a club sandwich. He asked to wait for a minute.

Standing there I tried to justify my doubt which was making me feel weird. Romeo was sitting just beside maan and he didn't hear anything. Professor would have deffo kicked us out of the class if he had heard all this but he didn't. Maan is something else.

"here you go" the John handed me the tray with my cappuccino and club sandwich.

"thanks" I said and turned to go, then I found him, staring at me.

"one espresso please," Maan asked John.

I glanced at him. And he turned at me too. In a moment we were lost n each others eyes. His cyanide green eyes were making me drown in a river of green water surface getting started of something new and alien feeling.

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That would motivate me for a better and regular updates.

Next update on this Saturday if I'm satisfied with the feedback.

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Edited by ...Tich... - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
hmm...so Maan Kundra has made his entry in the classroom
Girls r going gaga over him and so is Manisha
well Geet ur doubt is right he is not what he appears he is someone else
I really love this story will wait for ur next update
love-Piya

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