MG-OS-A Wonderful Part of my life

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Hey friends, Thnx a lot for your encouragement ...I had a concept in my mind ,it was revolving in my mind from more than two weeks...so at last I penned down all those thoughts.So this is my new OS...hope you like it, waiting for your response😃😃

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He looked out of the window of his Train...It's been years that he travelled in a Train.

He always preferred flight journeys due to his busy schedule.

Now he looked out of the window and closed his eyes to feel the cool breeze

He was moving between the trains..Everything outside is just amazing ,wonderful and magical

Just like her...The very thoughts of her brought smile on his face..

Geet...Ahhh..such a lovely part of his life ...!!

He smiled.

How are you Geet?? It's been a long time...Our first meeting , your words , your glimpses...everything is still fresh in my mind.

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The first time I saw her near the the bus-stop.

We both were walking on the same road but parallel, she came to me..

Geet :Hi.. fresher???

Maan :Yeah...

Geet :Ohhh...dat's great same here..I'm Geeta.

Maan :I'm Maan

Geet : Nervous???

Maan :Yaa a little bit.

Geet :Me too..first day in the college, a lot of things revolving i mind...but can't help it.

Maan : Ya right...Jst can't help it..I am nervous as well as excited.

They both smiled and walked together.

Maan : Which course??

Geet : B.com Honrs.

Maan : Ohh..wow same here

Geet :How difficult was it to get the admissions ..Oh God..!!!

I always dreamt of joining Delhi University and now i'm here

She smiled.

Maan : Yeah , true It feels great.

Geet : So r u a Delhite?

Maan : Ya..and you

Geet : No i'm from Bangalore..

Maan : Ohh..so jst came to study here and that means you are completely new to Delhi

Geet : Yeah

She smiled.

He turned towards left...

Geet :But college is this side na!!

Maan : No this side.

Just then they realised that they both were of different colleges.

They realised their stupidity ,the just came together talking to each other, even without knowing the college.

They both said bye to each other and went towards their respective colleges.

*Present*

She had something in her , I just stood there watching her going towards her college..Only i know how desperately I wished she was in my college.

She was so graceful ,her eyes were glowing..The excitement and her dreams were purely visible in her eyes.

I don't know why..but i jst liked the way she talked to me..The confidence ,the warmth..so different and amazing.

It was just the first meeting.

I saw her many times, in inter college competetions and many other occasions but sometimes the time didn't allow to meet her and sometimes friends all around..I jst used to pass a smile whenever i saw her ,nd she used to do the same.

No conversations but a smile everytime i saw you, just a beaytiful smile on her face.

She was not m friend nor anything.

Just an adorable girl, .

"An intelligent girl , came to Delhi to fulfill her dreams , friendly girl ,and active as i always watched her with her friends enjoying and she was also a part of the Drama society, and always took active part in it and also in the quiz competitions.

*Present*

The train stopped at the next station , a young boy came and sat oppiste him, his parents came near the seat..to wish good luck for his new job.

And were giving instructions.

Maan looked at the boy and smiled.

New Job.

That's the place where he met again.

She was also his co-trainee in the same office he joined.

They both clarified that thing first and laughed after remembering their first meeting.

That evening...That started our friendship.

She sat on her chair with Pencil in her hand , eyes on the paper lying infront of her , her hair strands falling on her forehead..!!!

She looked funny.

He smiled.

Maan :Kya hua...any problem.

Geet : No ,nothing big. I'll handle it.

Maan: Areh , It's ok u can tell me if there's any problem..may be i can help you in some way.

She hesitated a bit but explained her problem regarding an accounts file.

He went near her , sat there..He looked into the file..They both discussed some things...Maan suggested her some changes , they both together solved her problem.

Geet : Thanx a lot , Maan...That's so good of you otherwise i would have got real headache.

Maan (smiled) : Anytime Yaar ,

That moening during the break hours.

She came near me...

Geet : Maan thanx a lot for your help ,you helped me yesterday...so ek coffee to banta hi hai.

Maan: Coffee?? Waise accha hua You asked for a coffee ,if you had thanked me once again , i would have recorded a tape saying "your welcome" and gifted you.

That's the first time i talked with her in a friendly manner.

That evening went to the coffe shop ..i sat there , may be I was a bit late.

She was already there.

She looked beautiful in a plain green saree

She was lookin beautiful in a saree.

I saw her first time when she came new here and now her...she completed her studies.

Her dreams were coming true.

I don't know why but i felt a sense if closeliness towards her...I met her first time , she was a bit nervous yet confident and graceful...and now she still has the charm in her but now she came a long way , now she is no more new to this city and people.

I saw the change in her .

That day the conversation over a cup of coffee was something amazing, she surely is something...she is intelligent , dedicated towards her work yet naughty not boring...so humble , her words can easily make someone feel as if they know her from years.

A lot of compassion in her.

Months passed and all the trainees became good friends among each other, but we both really became good friends ...teasing each other, pulling each other's leg ...caring ,really good friends.

She had extreme personalities ,immature ,innocent , childish at times and extremely sensible at times.

Al l my moments with her were , Amazing.

Geet : Thanx a lot for the wonderful surprise for my b'day Yesterday.waise tum sab logon ne milke aachi planning ki thi

Maan : You are most welcome "Insights"...wais Ms.Insights ka birthday ho aur grand na ho ...wo kaise ho sakta hai.

They both smiled and kept walking and after sometime when Geet was about to reach her home.

Geet stopped suddenly and started to watch a tree

Maan : Yeh tum kya kar rhi ho?

Geet : Areh , kuch nahi is ped ko observe kar rhi hoon..this is so classy!

Maan : Classy

Geet : Yeah. Is tree ko is angle se dekho , it's looking stylish and classy , You know Maan it must be the most stylish tree in the whole family and amongst it's friends.

Maan : Tum and your silly Insights...!!

Geet : Ohh...plss Maan why are you running away from such beautiful perspective

Maan :Haan haan Geet , Tum is dustbin ko bhi dekhlo..It's looking classy.

I think it's the most...most.. sacrificial one in it's family

Geet looked at him with hands on her waist Maan.

He smiled at her put his hand on her shoulder.

Waise Geet ek baat bataoon..aage jo tumhara boyfriend hoga wo ya to bahut patient hoga yeah baut unique.

*Present*

He got down the train , he saw the name on the yellow board

"Bangalore"

He smiled looking at the name...Of course why will he not smile afterall it's Geet home town!!

He came out of the station.

A girl came running towards him...Aap Maan ho na.

Maan :Haan

He smiled he understood that Geet has send her.

The girl made him sit in a car and after reaching his destination, he entere the hall..

He saw her ,

She is standing there in her bridal outfit ,in a south indian attire she is looking amazing , gorgeous ...just like an angel.. as usual ,her eyes were glowing , her excitement can purely be seen in her eyes

The way she was greeting her guests with compassion and was talking to them with a bright smile on her face brought a huge smile on his face.

He is seeing her after almost two years.

He only talked to her on the phone ...it's been more than an year and he didn't even see her among these years.

He stood there and thought about their two last meetings.

Maan : Kya hua Geet, smile yaar ...cummon.

Geet : I'll miss u a lot , kitne kam dno me hum itne acche dost ban gaye...and Maan i'll miss all our friends and you ofcourse...

She had tears in her eyes.

Maan : Jst stop crying crying insights , It's not that we'll never talk to each other again , we'll stay in touch. You are living Delhi and going back to Bangalore , you are not leaving the country, now smile.

She smiled ,

But Maan , marriage??

Maan : Not marriage , you are just gonna see him , that's it.

Geet : Yeah, Waise we both were friends in the childhood, i don't know how he will be now .

I am a bit nervous.

That night she was sad and so was I..of course she became an important part of my life.

Meri zindagi ko uski aadat pad gayi thi


He smiled and walked forward towards her

*Past*

I went to airport to drop her , she was sad..even I was but I had to control my feelings to make her smile ,that's the first time she hugged him and most probably the last time.

She hugged me , I hugged her back...I can never forget

He whispered...Tumhaari shaadi pe zaroor aaunga.

She hit him .

That moment ...The Girl who always had smile on her face and spread smiles in my Life was then leaving me.

I knew that i will not meet her everyday...and i knew that i am going to miss her ,her smile , her childish behaviour , her support , her confidence and her insights ofcourse...she carried such positive vibes around her ,It was the last day .

I knew that I'll not find her when i enter into the office , The cabin of hers was then going to be

Occupied by some one else...I have to walk alone from the metro to house...

*Present*

He moved towards her

She looked at him ,she had a huge smile on her face

"Damn"...I missed her like hell..!!!

She kept looking at me with a huge smile...I wanted to hug her tightly, may be she too wanted to do or may be not.

I went near her ,she was standing with her Husband , yes husband...She was blushing while standing with her better-half it was evident that she is very happy to be married with him.

They both were looking great together , They surely shared a good chemistry.

He met her on the first day of her college , when she was about to start a complete new life

And again when she started a new phase , her job

He knew about her very well , Her silliest of silliest things and words.

Now she stood ther e with the person with whom she is going to spend her entire life.

He went near her...her eyes were filled with happiness,she wanted to hug him..but she was between many people , so she couldn't do that.

Geet :How are you??

Maan :Great

Geet : How was the journey

Maan : Great!!

They both smiled .

She introduced him to her husband , Srikanth.

Srikanth :Hi Maan , Geeta told me about you...You both are really such good friends

Maan : I'm sorry , i wasn't able to attend the wedding

Srikanth :It's ok,I am glad you came to the reception.

Maan and Srikanth talked with each other in a very friendly manner .

Maan finaaly handed his gift to Geet and one of Srikanth's relatives came to wish him..

Maan then slowly whispered in her ears..."You are looking beautiful"

He never said that to her,it was the first time he said it. "And you are a wonderful friend...Insights"

She looked at him hearing the word

Maan smiled "Patient ya unique"??

That one sentence almost filled her eyes, all the memories of the wonderful moments flashed in thier eyes.


He looked back ...he saw her smiling and greeting people with a namaste

"Geet" A wonderful part of my life...

She is definitely more than just a friend .

She is an amazing , wonderful angel who made many parts of my life happy and cheerful.

I can never forget you Geet.

I preserved all you memories .

Forever .

He looked at her .

She smiled.


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow loved it
Amazing Os
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Originally posted by: Geetmaan1234

Wow loved it
Amazing Os

Thnk u dear... I'm glad you liked it😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lemme kill u...
why does ur OS never have maneet...u always either kill them or show them married to someone else...
i am gonna cry so so much...
namratha...tumhari maneet se kya dushmani hai😆😡
reva
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just answer my one question why in ur every os maaneet r not together
and geet is always wife of someone else


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique

lemme kill u...
why does ur OS never have maneet...u always either kill them or show them married to someone else...
i am gonna cry so so much...
namratha...tumhari maneet se kya dushmani hai😆😡
reva

Hehehe..Lemme think...Hmmm...I don't have any answer!!!
I was jst listenin' to a song...nd this concept clicked .
So i wrote it down...!!😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: abinash079

just answer my one question why in ur every os maaneet r not together
and geet is always wife of someone else


I have no idea😆
I jst write like that ,i have no answer for your question!!😆...but still I never leave them unhappy😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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u r sooo dead girl... eee... grrr...🤢😡
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ok okayyy... i admit, it was excellent indeed
but i would always prefer MAANEET togather... for ever...❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nono no...itna beautiful awesome OS and Geet marrying to someone else 😭😭😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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they both know they are wonderful part of each other's life
but never thought of spending life together?
yeh maan geet bhi na !!!

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