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Posted: 13 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: krati5

see. b4 ds dev- geet 's dinner track. i want to knw abt d reaction of maan of ds news. plz i beg u. okay. we got it tht maan is in relationship wd sameera. or was... but all i want is maan's reaction of news of becoming a father. nd plz no cliffhanger



First Thank you so much for your reply and comment...🤗 But you have to wait for Maan's reaction, and for Maan and Sam's relationship we dont believe on everything we read now do we? So wait and keep reading...😉



Originally posted by: sonnal_17

wow the story is really intresting...and you stop at the wron points...Geet is pregnant but then the article...i am confused...but i really love it...pls add me to you pm...thx a lot...



Thank you for your comment... You are in my Pm list.😊 and wait for how the story is going to unfold.😊


Originally posted by: Audiwalia

Awesome part... Dev seems to be a nice...
I really want to read maan pov...
His character is stiil to reveal in dis story... Though i read prouloge its abt him nd geet...
Watting 4r more...



Thank you so much for your comment. 😊 Maan is the hero of this story his pov will come but with flash back of their marriage.😊



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Posted: 13 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: t_areeb

so now sameera is also in picture,

and did maan wanted to meet sameera in dehli?
but then how will Geet cope with these things



Yes Sameera is very much is in picture and is here to stay...😉 Thank You for liking and for your comment.😳

Originally posted by: kunataanya

hmmn... i don't know what to make of maan... he sleeps with his wife but still continues his affair(?) with sameera... 🤔 or maybe things aren't what they seem... anyways interesting update... i'm liking the geet-dev friendship... 😊



I can say only one thing, dont believe whatever They publish.😉 And Im the person who hates dragging so all secrets will be revealed really soon...😳 Thank you for you comment dear...🤗



Thank you so much...😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Vidushi89

This is complicated...
I never thought the next part will be like this...
I'm confused...

Thanks for the pm.





Thank You for your comment...😉 🤗And Im here...😉

Originally posted by: Aussiebabe

I so agree with u !! It was something different than i expected ...but def loved it 👍🏼

@ Behind-Volto : Would appreciate if u could make your update quicker 😃
Awesome job anyways !! 👏 👏👏



Thank You Nitzzz...🤗


Originally posted by: dips_chim

hey could you please pm me too..
its nice and different concept


Thank You so much for your response. 😊




I will...😉 Thank you for your comment.😊


Thank you so much... and I will pm you...😊



Thank You...😳



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Posted: 13 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: KavyaNaik123

kkk,,nw u hv to gv us long update n more regular,,plzzz dear,,n this update was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1



I will update more often now...😉 And thank you so much for your comments... And @ your update comment, that was so sweet of you... 🤗 Thank youuu sooo much...🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
Volto! quit belittling your work , I wont stand for it, not at all. and Hey! am just a reader who reads whatever she likes, nothing grand there please. Period.

so get to work on that update I see coming😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: ninand

Volto! quit belittling your work , I wont stand for it, not at all. and Hey! am just a reader who reads whatever she likes, nothing grand there please. Period.


so get to work on that update I see coming😉



😆 No I was just telling the truth... 😆 Read at your own risk bud! 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
#47

Chapter Three

The same morning in Mumbai:

A woman, in her late twenties was lying on a couch in a cozy lounge of an exquisite apartment; wearing spectacle which doesn't lessen her good looks.

She was reading a booklet when she received a message on her cell phone.

'I'm coming at your place, see you in 5 minutes.' The text she received said.

And after exact five minutes, her door bell rung followed by click.

A man come in wearing black NYU tee with black trouser… cute stubble on his face and sleepy eyes made him even more handsome.

And every time someone praised him on his good looks and sharp business mind, it made her proud.

"You look like hell." She told him, "And NYU tee?" And how many years old this tee is?" She scrunched her nose.

"I know but Thanks for the compliment and a few years old and I need coffee."

"You know where Kitchen is, help yourself." She replied.

She heard him muttering something and she knew he must be calling her idiot.

She smiled at his annoyance, once she used to get irritated by his name calling.

A skinny teenage boy she saw some 15 years ago, in cold corridor of a private clinic with expressions that were, she was sure, not different from her own. Shock, pain and hatred. That skinny boy is now Prince Charming for the girls who turn blind when it comes to spotting a wedding band in a handsome rich man especially when he moves in society without his better half.

He came back with steamy mug of coffee, picked newspapers from centre table and made himself comfortable on couch in front of hers. And then she decided she should ask questions she is planning to ask for some days now.

"What are you still doing here Maan? You were suppose to leave for Delhi early morning?"

"Good Morning Sameera Mom" He replied while his gaze still fixed on newspaper.

Touch….

"Morning?" she scoffed. "It's almost noon."

"So?"

"You should have been in Delhi for an important meeting you were worrying about last night?"

"I overslept, missed my flight, called Aditya, asked him to ask client for more time, and when he called me back that meeting is rescheduled, I decided to sleep couple of hours more before leaving. Now please shut up." His monotone didn't bother her; she knows his escaping tactics a little too well.

"This is nth time you changed your original plan for going Delhi in last two months Maan."

"Hmm mmm"

"Are you running from someone?" This got his attention. He finally looked at her.

"Running? Making films, made you filmy too Sameera Irani, Why would I run from someone."

"Well you stopped running from Yash Khurrana a long time back, so my money is on Geet Khurrana."

"I've told you a thousand time that I don't want to talk about Geet." he threw the newspaper he was reading on table and stood up.

He was addressing his wife with her name instead of 'that girl'.... she noticed. And she has pushed him enough for this morning so she decided to change the topic.

"Read Page 3 of all newspapers. They tagged us boyfriend-girlfriend again." A she-devil she is. Who knows it better than her that this is one topic which brings out the worst in him.

"Bas****, *********."

"Eeeks Maan, stop this."

"That is why I told you not to study and join Films. I knew you will be under spot light all the time; they will rip your present and dug in your past."

"Our Past you mean; Our Parents has taken really good care while burying it. And trust me I don't give a damn about what they say but I do think about you. You are married, for God sake. What's her fault in all this, you should tell her truth Maan. She deserves truth."

"A girl who married me just because my UNCLE will invest in her brother's business, I don't think she deserve my trust. And Geet is not your headache Sameera, keep your concerns about her to yourself. And why do you think I will even care about what she thinks? It's not like we are Life-Partners for real."

She kept quiet in response just stared him while he left her apartment without saying Good Bye.

She hates to see him in denial; the girl has already crept under his skin but he was too stubborn to accept it. But she can't do anything about it but to push him enough that he realizes his real feelings towards Geet.

But one thing she herself was not sure about; sharing their dark past with Geet.

Her cell phone was ringing. It was her father. She ignored his call as usual. He is one reason she can't have a normal relationship with anyone. And she hates him. No, she hates them all. Mahesh Irani, Yash Singh Khurrana and Vidya Kapoor Irani.

Sameera and Maan are cursed to stay haunted by these three ghosts in their lives, two living and a dead Vidya.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
So Maan Geet share a virtually non existent relationship, :(.. wonder how hes going to handle the pregnancy news, or even if shes going to divulge that to him..?

Intrigued about Sam and Maans past.

eager for more. update soon !


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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
So maan nd sameera are only frenz now nd offcourse maan never need to clarify wid geet... Nd plz try to update more offen...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
it comes as a solace that there is nothing brewing between maan and sameera...
loved the update...
just wondering what is their haunted past

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