FF|MG| Save the Last Dance For Me [C-3,Pg 8]

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Audiwalia

@Audiwalia

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#31

Awesome part... Dev seems to be a nice...
I really want to read maan pov...
His character is stiil to reveal in dis story... Though i read prouloge its abt him nd geet...
Watting 4r more...

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Kavya Naik

@KavyaNaik123

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#32

kkk,,nw u hv to gv us long update n more regular,,plzzz dear,,n this update was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

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Aussiebabe

@Aussiebabe

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: KavyaNaik123
kkk,,nw u hv to gv us long update n more regular,,plzzz dear,,n this update was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

I so agree with u !! It was something different than i expected ...but def loved it 👍🏼

@ Behind-Volto : Would appreciate if u could make your update quicker 😃

Awesome job anyways !! 👏 👏👏

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Tabinda Areeb

@t_areeb

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#34

so now sameera is also in picture,

and did maan wanted to meet sameera in dehli?

but then how will Geet cope with these things

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aanyakunat

@aanyakunat

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#35

hmmn... i don't know what to make of maan... he sleeps with his wife but still continues his affair(?) with sameera... 🤔 or maybe things aren't what they seem... anyways interesting update... i'm liking the geet-dev friendship... 😊

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dips_chim

@dips_chim

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#36

hey could you please pm me too..
its nice and different concept

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Behind-Volto

@Behind-Volto

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: ninand
hmm. you didn't give away much except for maybe Geet's trust issues (?).. complicated relationships ahead I think... very interested.

continue soon !

No, its not Geet who has trust issues, its I think Maan. This is my first real attempt to write and with no background in literature I think Im bound to give wrong impression.😕 In my mind the relationships are complicated, problem is in how am going to pen them down. Keep reading (no pressure😆) maybe I end up writing something good.😳 No promises though.😆 Thank You for comment.❤️

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ninand

@ninand

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Behind-Volto

No, its not Geet who has trust issues, its I think Maan. This is my first real attempt to write and with no background in literature I think Im bound to give wrong impression.😕 In my mind the relationships are complicated, problem is in how am going to pen them down. Keep reading (no pressure😆) maybe I end up writing something good.😳 No promises though.😆 Thank You for comment.❤️

Hey am no seasoned critic that you should translate my inability to grasp some bit to something amiss in your writing style. 😆.. looking forward to an update definitely.. and yeh.. keep em complicated.. its so much fun that way.. :)

Edited by ninand - 13 years ago

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Behind-Volto

@Behind-Volto

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: ninand

Hey am no seasoned critic that you should translate my inability to grasp some bit as something amiss in your writing style. 😆.. looking forward to an update definitely.. and yeh.. keep em complicated.. its so much fun that way.. :)

No you are not telling truth this time... *Shaking Head* I spent part of my evening going through some pages of REEL...😳 and I came back here to see if Ninand there and Ninand here are same...😲☺️ or am I seeing things.😲 And since Im formulating my response to your comment.😆 Just to tell you Girl lower your expectations to lowest level coz Im more filmy person than bookish plus my grammar is ahem ahem n vocabulary ends before it starts😆 . And I dont want you ending up wondering why I ever read this...😆😆😆