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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sarkh26

update the next part soon dear eagerly waiting

updated dear😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: abinash079

awesome dear read all parts eagerly waiting for next part

updated next pt😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow amzing waiting for their meeting
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PART 4

Geet choked while reading the last part of the letter.I was like her love story except the fact that Maan was not married.The song 'Tu jaane na..'from 'ajab prem ki ghazab kahani' was playing in the background..

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Kaise batayein
Kyun tujhko chahe
Yaara batha na paayein
Baatein dil o ki
Dekho jo baki
Aake tujhe samjhaein
Tu jaane na aaa..
Tu jaane na
Tu jaane na aaa..
Tu jaane na

Maan started his car and drove to the beach which was their second fav place.He was determined,No matter What,He'll get her back in his life today.

Hmm milke bhi, hum na mile
Tumse na jaane kyun, milo ke,
Hai phasle tumse na jaane kyun
Anjaane, hai silsile
Tum se na jaane kyun, sapne hai
Palko tale tum se na jaane kyunnn

She started walking towards the beach correctiontheir beach.She didn't know why but her heart told her to go there.she decided to walk to the beach as it was just 15 mts away.

Aaa aaa aaa
Nigahon mein dehko
Meri jo hai bas gaya aa
Woh hai milta tumse hubahoo
Ooohhooo..
Jaane teri aankhein
Kiya baatein ki vajah'
Huye tum jo dil ki aarzoo
Tum paas ho ke bhi
Tum aas ho ke bhi
Ehsaas ho ke bhi
Apne nahin aise hai
Hum ko gile
Tumse na jaane kyun, milo ke
Hai phasle tumse na jaane kyun ooonnn'.
Tu jaane na aaa..
Tu jaane na
Tu jaane na aaa..
Tu jaane na

She reached the beach and so did he.She went towards a rock.The most secluded place in the beach.He sensed that she'd be coming there and moment.So he called his bodyguards and gave them a photo of her and asked them to find her.He went towards the rock which Geet considered her fav spot on the beach..

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He slowly moved towards the rock.He saw a girl draped in a salwar sitting with her back leaning on the rock.As he neared the girl,his joy knew no bounds.Finally he found her,his angel,his love,his sweetheart,Geet.

He slowly bent towards her to see that she was crying.He hated himself for bringing tears to her beautiful eyes.When the tear drop was about to fall down,there was a hand stopping it.She looked up at the person and was shocked to find him."Maan!?"she whispered as she stood up.

He gently touched her shoulders and asked,"kaisi ho geet?"He could tell by the look in her face that she didn't believe that he was here.She gently caressed his cheek to see whether he was really there.

"R u here really Maan?"she asked.He nodded smiling at her innocence.She gave him the most beautiful smile ever.He cupped her face and said,"I am sorry geet.Will u ever be able to forgive me?"

"Maan,what r u talking about?"

"How can u be so good to me Geet?First I didn't trust u next I hurt you,still y do u love me so much Geet?"

"Maan,every man in ur position would have done the same thing.Ya,I felt bad,but I knew the reality of ur words.I knw hw u could work 20 hrs nonstop.Everyperson would have felt the same at that time Maan."

"I LOVE YOU GEET!"he said.She looked as if it was unbelievable.He bent down and then,

"I *kiss* love* kiss*u*kiss* so *kiss* much*kiss*"he completed by placing a deep kiss on her lips.

After they broke off,She looked up at him who still had that same naughty romantic glint in his eyes and turned red.

She looked up at him but instead found him kneeling before her with one knee.He fished into his pocket and took out a ring,

"This ring is so special to me Geet.This was the first piece of jewel I ever designed.At that moment I promised myself that it'd adorn the finger of the girl with whom I fell Head-over-heels in love with.

I am not that much romantic bt all I want to say is,Ms.Geet Handa will you do me the honor of becoming Mrs.Geet Maan Singh Khurana for the rest of ur lives?"

She was initially surprised at his public display of love,but then accepted his proposal "Yes,I Will.But only under 1 condition-I WANT YOU TO BE MINE ALWAYS.Will u?"

"Yes Your honour anything as u wish"and slowly slipped the ring into her finger.

That day both realized,LOVE MAKES LIFE BEAUTIFUL..

THE END..

THT'S ALL GUYS!!Thanks for the lovely comments!!lov u all!!

I'll be back soon with another OS..

love,

AMANDA..

Edited by SallyAmanda - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: sarkh26

wow amzing waiting for their meeting

UPDATED NEXT PART..😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome os dear
i wish we could get an epilogue also
do write more
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sarkh26

awesome os dear

i wish we could get an epilogue also
do write more

I'll try to update epilogue dr..😊glad u liked it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gurmina-rks

I'll try to update epilogue dr..😊glad u liked it


eagerly waiting for the epilogue
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesum writting dear. loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks dear 😊

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