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Break.The.Code

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey all!!!Its me again with another OS. Forgive me for my mistakes and do comment.

I WANT YOU TO BE MINE...

He was driving his car in the heavy traffic of Mumbai.He was sweating even in the high class cooling system of his sedan.He closed his eyes and all he could see was her face,her eyes,her smile...He snapped open.

He told himself I hate her.His heart said she wouldn't have done anything like that but his mind told She was a cheat,He wanted to yell out in pain,frustration,hurt,deceit.His thoughts were broken when he heard his mobile phone ring.He picked it up and the caller ID was Adi.

"haan Adi bolo"he said.

"Maan sir,galti hogayi!"he replied and continued"Sir that file was not given to Dev by Geet.It was given by her Sis Meera!"he finished.

Maan was shocked.No this can't be true.Yes,it was his mistake.Everything was his mistake..

...She was walking aimlessly along the road.She looked up at the above sky.It looked as if it was gonna rain.Rain.She remembered the first starting of their relationship in the rain.She mentally said."Geet tu bhi na!He hates the mere sight of you.Stop building castles in air"Another thought came to her mind.Was he punishing her?She knew it was not her mistake,but then why is God punishing her?He didn't even give her a chance to explain.She slowly made her way to the radio station and was greeted by her only frnd,Rohit.

"Thank God yaar,u came"he said rather cheerfully.He was not disappointed not to hear her reply.He sighed.She was like this for the past 1 week.She was not the bubbly,chirpy Geet who could make everyone around her smile.Rather she changed so much.She had become gloomy and depressed.It is all because of u Mr.Maan Singh Khurana,Rohit clenched his fingers into a fist.

He looked at Geet who seemed to be lost in some thoughts and gently called out her name.She looked up at him with moist eyes.Rohit instantly knew where this was heading towards.He gently took her towards her cabin and then locked the door.She went towards him and hugged him so tight"Please hold me tight Rohit,pls"she pleaded.

"It's okay baby,relax.it's okay"he said as he gently caressed her head.I Hate You Mr.MSK Rohit said in his mind.

...He was driving at full speed.He reached the outskirts of the city and stopped his car.He got down and went towards the edge of the cliff and shouted in pain.He got down on his knees and screamed,"I love u Geet,pls come back."

...

She was startled.Rohit asked "kya hua?"

She replied "maan".Rohit got angry."Maan Maan maan..Let me ask u something Geet.Tell me didn't I warn u not to trust him?Magar nahi humari madamji pyar mein paagal thi.nw tell me who is the one suffering?You or him?He would have now got another girl who could fulfil all his demands."Rohit stopped when he received a tight slap from her."Maan meri zindagi hai Rohit.Don't u dare talk anything bad about him.I'm leaving u since u r my best frnd.or else I could have killed u.Get out"she yelled.

Rohit knew if he stayed there for a little longer he would have been murdered by her.He slowly got out of the cabin leaving behind a sobbing Geet.

...

His mind travelled to the first time he met her,exactly before 6 months 18 days and 1 hour back..

6 MONTHS BACK

1^ST September 2010

It was yet another ordinary day for him.Nah.Score it out.He was meeting with some RJ at a radio station for a special interview.He was so angry with his PR manager for fixing his interview with a girl.He knew she was gonna be another flirty type.He reached the building and was shown the room where he was going to be interviewed.He made his seat next to the girl who was busy in adjusting some controls oblivious to his prescence.He cleared his throat causing the girl to jump.She looked up at him and gently smiled.

He was clean bowled by that smile.He found himself lost in her smileand came out of his trance when he heard her voice ask,"Ready?"He nodded his head.

"Hey all!It's me!your very own RJ Geet Handa speaking to you from the Mountain Cliff FM 87.6-Keep listening!As you all know today we all have a special gift with us.To be precise he is the only person who can match my IQ levels.I know boys just stay calm.Girls,Hold your breath I'm going to giv u some clues of who the person is.

1.He is just 30 yrs old.

2.He owns India's largest chain of Jewellery stores.

3.He is the Nation's most eligible bachelor

I know,by now you could've guessed who he is.before I give out his name,I have some interesting Cricket mania news for U all.MSD led Indian team are all set to rock the stadium for the WC matches.In a recent interview the captain said that he was sure of the team's victory in the WC final.Now coming back,Girls 1..2...3...we've Mr.Maan Singh Khurana in the house.So welcome Mr.Khurana."

"Thank you so much."

"Mr.Khurana,The latest news I heard was that u bought yet another Gold mine in SA.Is it true?"

"Yes,We bought a gold mine in SA as we wanted to open a chain of stores there too."

"What forced you into this business-was it family pressure or ur own interest?"

"Actually,when I was 17,I was filled with a desire to do something remarkable.I knew my family were Gold smiths for years together.So I thought why not study jewellery designing?I succeeded in my dream and what started as a small scale business by taking orders for Gold jewellery for major shops and celebrities has slowly transformed into a chain of stores recognised worldwide.Today I'm living my dream"

"We've the first caller on line.Hello..?"

For the next 1 hr he was stuck with stupid questions from girls and was timely saved by Geet who would ask witty questions.That was what inspired him the most.She was beauty with brains except for the fact she talked too much..

15 DAYS LATER..

It was beginning to drizzle and his damn car broke down.He thought hw much mom would be worried at home.He checked the time.It was past 10.Suddenly he heard the sound of a horn.He turned back and was surprised to find Geet.

"what are u doing here?"she asked.He replied thet his car had broken down and he wanted to go home ASAP."hop in Maan"she said.

"kya?MSK in a scooter that too behind a girl.No way"

"No probs.I just want to warn you that no one will be able to giv u a lift home and besides it's raining.If u want,u can come.otherwise no problem."

"Hey wait wait!Allright I'm coming"

"Nw that seems like a good boy."

He sat beside her and pressed her shoulder.Both felt an electric current run through.The ride to her home was a rather bumpy one.Once he reached there,he was amazed to find a simple yet amazing cottage.

"Come inside Maan.There are no terrorists inside."He smiled and entered inside.

"Hey y so late di!"A voice asked.

"Nothing Meer,Tht stupid Monster haina,asked me to give all the written updates of my Chat show.He wants me to take over 'The Diaries' instead of Rohit."She looked towards him and gestured him to come inside.

"Mom,Dad yeh Maan hain,meri..."

"Friend."he completed,"I'm her frnd."

...CONT ON PG 2!!...

Edited by SallyAmanda - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: simm28
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Posted: 13 years ago

another lovely part geet leaving the sentence he is my... but maan completing it as friend

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: smallville
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Break.The.Code

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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 2

Her mom and dad looked at them with suspicion but it was Meera who reacted."OMG!aap MSK haina!"she literally screamed.

"Yes I Am Indeed MSK"he said with his attitude.

"Beta,pls make yourself comfortable.And Geet,give him some dry clothes from the cupboard,beta"

"Ji papa.aaona maan"she said as they reached her room.

He quickly made a few calls to his dad and informed that he'd be staying with his friend that night as his car broke down.That was when he saw her.Droplets of water were scattered on her forehead which tempted him to remove them.She was dressed in a white with blue night suit and was drying her hair.

Gorgeous.

The first word that came to his mind when he saw her.He looked at her hazel brown eyes,her cute nose and her glossy lips.That was when he realised hw beautiful she looked.He was not the type of person to admire beauty but was forced this time.He was lost in her that he failed to answer her,"Suniye ji!U change and come down for dinner.I'm leaving"She said and left the room in a hurry.After she'd gone,he realised what he was thinking abt and shrugged it off.

Dinner at the Handa's was a family affair like his.There was a lot of masti with the Handa daughters.He felt the lack of bonding between him and the family even though he loved them so much.He needed to learn so much from them.

THE NEXT MORNING

He was offered the guest room in the house.After a long tiring sleep,not to mention the dreams of Geet,He was fresh.He got dressed in his own clothes and came down to see Geet hurrying up with her breakfast."Hai!Good morning"She said with food in her mouth.He smiled at her acknowledging her greetings.He was also served food and as usual it was delicious.He'd always longed for his mother to cook for him but back at home,It was always the cooks.He missed the joy of eating food prepared by his mom.

They completed their breakfast and he bid farewell to all of them and thanked them for their hospitality.She walked with him till the car of his which was recovered by some mechanics of her dad's.

"So..Friends?"He held out his hand."Friends!"she said.They exchanged their nos and before leaving,He said,"tum bahuth achi ho Geet"causing her to blush.

And that was the start of their beautiful relationship.The relationship of trust,love,care and concern.To him,She was still so innocent even though she was 25 and to her he was over protective and too matured.They were stark opposites and that was what completed each other.It took time for both of them to realise their love for each other.

5 MONTHS LATER..

"Okay baba,I'm coming.Ya I'll be there.Maan,kaha na.rakthi hoon."God he's impossible,she thought.

He was waiting for her to come."should I tell her that I love her or what should I do.I'm helpless now.God save me!"

He saw her coming towards him with her enchanting smile.He too involuntarily moved towards her.They embraced each other and went towards their usual place,the Maple tree in the park.He sat down leaning his back against the bark of the tree and she sat beside him leaning on his broad chest and entwining her fingers with his which were on her shoulder.

"Geet,I want to tell you something.wo...main ..tumse.."The beautiful moment was disturbed by his phone ringing.She frowned.He attended the call."okay,I'm coming.ya I'll be there.bye."He looked at her who seemed to understand everything."no problem Maan.I can wait."She said with a smile.He hugged her again and kissed her forehead and rushed towards the parking lot.

She made her way towards her radio station again.

...

Maan was shocked.He could never believe Geet did something like that."No way adi,She wouldn't do anything like that".

"But sir,she was the one who had that file."

"R u blaming me,Adi?"

"Absolutely not sir.She's the only one other than u and me to have access to that file."

"I know that she had a crush on Dev Singhania,but she could never do anything like that.I trust her with all my life.She would never deceive me,Adi"

"Okay sir.Why don't u ask her to get tht file which you entrusted to her.If she has it safe,then I'm wrong but if she doesn't have it then.."

"Okay Adi I'll go now."

He was upset.Exactly 15 days back,he had given a file to Geet saying that she was the only person who he trusted to give this file.It contained some important documents regarding some new designs name KALAKSHETHRAthey were going to unveil.He knew that their arch rivals,The Singhanias would be behind these designs.He saw tht she had kept the file in her secret cabinet which no one knew.

He reached the radio station and found that she'd just completed her Talk show.He yelled "GEET!"

She recognised his sound.The sound of her dream man,The man she loved the most.She gently smiled and came towards him.She was shocked to find him in anger.

"kya hua Maan,any problem?"

"Yes Geet,U r my problem.Do you know hw much I love you??hmm..Hw will a girl who cheated her bf understand the meaning of love?"

"Dekhiye maan,I can't understand what u r saying"

"Where's the file I gave u Geet?"

"Ithni choti problem aur aap.."

"Jawab do Geet!"

"It's in the same place where I Kept."

"Jhooth.I already checked it."

"kya??How dare u do that maan?It's wrong to see through a person's personal belongings."

"You r afraid of being caught Geet."he continued,"If you'd told me,I could have given u all the pleasures of the world.But tum.U cheated me Geet.For Just 50 thousand bucks,you sold the designs to ur love,Dev,which me and dad have been working on for more than a decade!How could u,Geet?"

pt 3 on pg 4!

Edited by SallyAmanda - 13 years ago