I CHANGED MY DESTINY - OS -MG LAST PART PG 9 - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
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HEY ... WHEN I WAS READING ALL UR COMMENTS I CAME TO KNOW THERE ARE SOOO MUCH SURIYA FANS . I M HAPPY ( BTW SURIYA VODA SMARTNESS KU IDELLAM ONNUM ILLA ...LOL)... SO THIS CHAPTER IS DEDICATED TO ALL SURIYA FANS...THIS PART IS NOT FROM THE MOVIE KHAK KHAKA
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I opened my eyes and found myself in a hospital . Itried to get up but was suddenly stopped by dev ." bro plzzz don't stress urself ..." he said but how could i not ...my girl was in danger ...
" dev ... i want to save geet ... i can't afford to lose her "
" i know bro but plzz don't worry everything will be alright ... i ve already spoke with police ... they are to send their best team "
That was a relief but still i couldn't rest until i see my geet ...i was waiting for a phone call or any ransom claim ... i know it was for money and i m ready to give anything ...

Then i saw a man on his early 30's in police uniform walk to my room surrounded by a few other men he was giving some orders to them i know it was regarding my geet ...He was looking perfect ( i say tat not maan ) he came to me and extende his hands ...
" hello Mr. maan ... i m A.C.P. ANBUCHELVAN ...i m handeling ur case "
I shook hands with him ...

" did u get any calls " he asked ... i nodde no
" ok ... don't worry we ll get them as soon as possible ... they are not professionals" he assured me

he then recieved a call and so he walked away ... after may be 5 mins he walked in ..." Mr Maan i think we r almost near them... a maruti van has been spotted near a old gudown ... we suspect it to be theirs "
I had a big hope in my heart ... i asked him immediately " may i come with u ? "
He looked at me confused ...but dev protested " no bro u r not well " ..." i want to go dev ..." i said...A.C.P. gave a brief look to both of us then said " sure Mr. Maan u can come with us ... who else can understand ur feelings better than me in this situation " there was some inner meaning to his words but i didn't pay attention ...

There was 5 of them from department including him ...i wondered if it was enough ... " trust us Mr.maan we r best in this business " he said as if knowing my plight ...We reached a old deserted place ... i can't even imagine my geet being there ...We slowly entered the place and found few men playing cards with alcohol in their hand so it was easy to attack them ... then as we entered into the place we were attacked by few more and in course of time almost all joined the fight ... i wasn't afraid my karate and kung fu classes from childhood were not a vain ... it did take much time for six of us to finish the whole gang but at end all was well ... we were about to move forward when we heard NT's voice...

" maan ... i didn't know u ll come so far for ur wife "

We turned to see her she was standing there as a epitome of evil ... my blood boiled

" NT where is my geet "
" ufff... its too late maan "
" what ? what do u mean " i fumed
" i thought of helping u but when i came to know that u took the help of police i burried her "
I was blank for a while ... i couldn't believe what she said...

" yes ... i burried her ... may be she is dead ... i wish "

I was engulfed with anger... i didn't know wat to do...i immediately grabbed the gun from anbuchelvan's hands and shot her ... yes i shot her to death ... i would have even killed her with bare hands if possible ...i fell on my knees crying ...i lost my life ... i m incapable of saving her ... she trusted me soo much ...I sensed Anbu walking towards NT but i didn't see what he was doing ...then i heard him say " the sand is fresh "
I was not sure why he said that but the expression change in the other men said that there was something fishy ... they immediaely ran to the back gate i followed them ... they were searching something in the ground ...i didn't know wat was that ...One of them signalled something from far and all ran towards him ...i followed them ... They began to dig there ... i was impatient ...

My heart almost stopped when i heard the sound of weep ... i know it was her ...i pushed them away and started to dig with my hands ... i found her soft hands ... then soon she herself ... instantly hugged her ... Her eyes were tired but still were having the same effect on me ... her mouth and hands were closed with a cloth i removed it ... she hugged me crying ... i caressed her back assuring that everything was fine ...

We went to the hospital but geet was not comfortable there ... i asked dev to clear the papers and decided to go to any hotel ... before that i wanted to see A.C.P. sir ...coz if it was not him i wouldn't have seen my geet again ...We went to meet him ...

" Thank u sir ... i can't tell u how much help it was for me..." i said
" its ok Mr.maan its my duty " then he asked turning to geet " are u fine Mrs. maan "
She nodded but didn't speek ... she was just clinging to my arms since we came back ... i didn't want to leave her way for even a single min...
" i hope she is not comfortable here ... why don't u come to my house ... she ll feel safe there " He asked ... i didn't know wat to say ... but he was right it would be good for geet to be in a family set up to assure that she is safe ... i looked at her and i understood that she was ok with that ...
" that will be great sir ... thank u "
" ok then ... "

We went to his house ... it was surrounded by garden flowers were welcoming us ... i could defenitely see the change in geet's face ... i know how much she loves flowers and such surroundings ... Anbuchelvan rang the bell and we were welcomed by a cute girl who was nevertheless than the flower ... " daddy ... today u came so early " the sweet girl said and hugged him ... Sure it was his daughter ... we went in ..." mamma dad is here " the girl shouted ... and we saw a well dressed women walk towards us ...Anbuchelvan shifted to her side and then introduce us

" This is Mr.Maan Khuranna and this his wife geet "
The women gave a warm smile seeing us...
" This is my wife MAYA and my sweet little daughter DIYA " he added
" u must be tired go freshen up and i ll call for dinner " maya said ...

We went to a room ... immediately as we entered i closed the door geet sat on the couch and i knelt before her ..." geet i m sorry geet ... i m sorry ... i didn't know that anything like this could happen ... i was stupid ... plzzz forgive me geet " i almost cried in her arms...
" maan plzzz don't tell anything ... i can understand ... it was not ur mistake ... and now it is because of u i m here alive ...i trust u maan ... i know u ll allow nothing to affect me " She said hugging me ...
" do u still trust me ? " i asked
" maan i ll trust i u till the end of my life ... and i know u ll never break the trust "
How could she be so nice to me ... she still loves me and trusts me ...I hugged her
" i ll never break ur trust ... i ll always protect u " that was the promise i ll never forget ... i ll not allow anything to affect my geet ... i ll protect her till my last breath...

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DO CHECK MY OTHER WORKS

AS I SAID THIS PART IS NOT FROM THE MOVIE KHAKA KHAKA COZ ITS FROM VETAIYADU VILAIYADU ...LOL BUT KI FARAK PADTA HAI YAAR RENDUME GOWTAM MENON DU DAANA ...🤣🤣🤣🤣
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PLZZZ TELL ME HOW DID U LIKE ANBUCHELVAN AND MAYA ' S ENTRY OF COURSE WITH DIYA

HOPE U ALL LIKE IT ...

PLZZZ COMMENT




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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
wow super update
hey surya jyothika daughtra indha osla use pannita😆

and that chudailtara deserved that

awesome dear

acp anbuchelvan is one of my fav characters of suriya and thank god maya is not dead here

vetaiyadu vilaiyadu part was really good!!!

ur a fantastuic writer🤗👏


Edited by sarkh26 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
loved the ending awesome os dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: sarkh26

wow super update

hey surya jyothika daughtra indha osla use pannita😆

and that chudailtara deserved that

awesome dear

acp anbuchelvan is one of my fav characters of suriya and thank god maya is not dead here

vetaiyadu vilaiyadu part was really good!!!

ur a fantastuic writer🤗👏



THANK U

chudailtara THAT WAS NICE ...

THIS IS WAT I WANTED TO SEE IN KHAKA KHAKA


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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
Hey super duper update da:)
before i cud read further down itself i found out u have mixed vetaiyadu vilayadu story in this wow awesome Os dear u r always rocking dear muuahhh😳 hmmm so dia also included in tis os 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg!combination of VV and KK...
omg!my surya and jo!
u r d bestest...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: poongs123

Hey super duper update da:)

before i cud read further down itself i found out u have mixed vetaiyadu vilayadu story in this wow awesome Os dear u r always rocking dear muuahhh😳 hmmm so dia also included in tis os 😊


THANK U

I LIKED VETAIYADU VILAIYADU ENDING SO I INCLUDED THAT
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved the update...
mix of both my fav movies...
enjoyed reading it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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GREAT UPDATE...NT BURRIED HER ALIVE...THAT WAS GROSS
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
Superb update Loved it dear.

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