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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Emotional part...geets pain...doesn't maan remember being with Geet

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ramahesh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

wow so nice os
loved it ...for geet feeling so sad😔

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Hetal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

WOW!!! This was so good...what a twist to the story!!! I hope you believe in happy endings!!!😳

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Huny

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

hey soumi

i liked ur concept

do pm me 4 ur next updates...

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namita25

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

waiting for the next part dear...

plz plz give us an update...

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ramahesh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

waiting ...dear pls update soon...

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soumi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

sorry for the late guys...😭😭

am typing the next part...😊will update it today within evening...

thnx for liking it...😳

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soumi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

last part...

after 1 month...

today KM is decorated with full of lights and flowers...whole mansion is glowing...each and every high class businessman of delhi are coming here today...

today...its a very special dat for both geet and maan's life...its..maan's marriage today...withhis love...his sameera...he is on cloud nine today...he couldnt be more happy...

he is very thankfull to geet...just because of her...today its possible..the way..she managed everything...sprcially the way she took daadima's consent...daadi was not at all ready for this...she was very shocked and hurt at first...he doesnt know how to thank her...he is realy greatfull to her...

in maan's room...

he was getting ready...in a dark red serwani...looking dashing as usual...suddenly he found geet is standing near the door...wearing a light pink saree...

'are geet...where r u standing there?...please come in...'he said to her...

geet plastered a false smile on her face and enters... but maan was too busy inhis happines that he was not able to see the sadness...the sorrow behind her face...

'u know geet...today is the happiest day of my life...and i dont know to thank you for this...its all because of you...thnx a lot geet...'he was genuinely thankful to her...

geet stopped her in midway...'nhi maan...aap thanx kiyu keh rhe hai?...aap khush hai na...to me bhi khush hu...or ye to meri khush naseebi hai ke mein aap ko yeh khushi de payi...'she said tried to holding her tears...

maan smiled and tunrs his back...'u know geet...tumne shaadi tak yaha rehne ka faisla karke bohot acha kia...muje bohot khushi hogi ke tum mere is special dinme samil ho...'

'my plesure maan...'she assured him...

after sometime...

the mundap was all set...pundit ji was waiting for the dulha dulhan to come down...geet and daadima brings maan there...daadima was still looking upset...not fully convinced...still...geet made her promised that this will wil right hting for boht of them...so daadi was a bit quite...

after that all the girls bring sameera on the mandap...it was geet reqst to do the marriage ceremony at KM...and maan and sameera agreed happily to it...

sameera was dressed in a red lehenga choli..looking stunning and gorgious...she sits beside maan...

they reminded geet of her own marriage...she smiled sadly...the turn of the evants made her tired...but yet she wanted to be present her today...thogh it will tear her within but she just wanted to witness the happiness on maan's eyes...its her...may be its her last wish...she smiled sadly...

sameera whispers to maan-u r looking dashing...she smiles...

'thnx...u too...'he smiled back...

'maan...why geet is looking so exhusted?...i mean is she ok?...'she sounded worried...

'yes sam...i also saw that...i think she is tired...the is working the whole day for the preparetion...she doesnt takes care of herlself...'

'u r right...but am realy thankful to her...if she was not there...we can never be united...she is such a nice girl..we should try to find her mr' right...hai na?...use bhi apni khusi milni chaiye...'

'hmm...i totally agree...but dear...now concentrate on our own marriage...'he winks...made her shy...

everything was going so smoothly...the rituals was going on...but...just before their pheres...geet felt a shooting pain on her head...she knew it...but doesnt expected it so soon...she just hold her head and almost ran away stealthyly from the place...

as the pheres was about to start...pujdit ji told them to tie the 'gut bandhan...' sam's mother comes to do it but dam stops her...

'nahi ma...me chahti hu...ye kam geet kare...aaj uske wajay se hum dono ek hone ja rhe hai...to ye hak..sirf usse hai...'then she turns to maan...'tume kya lagta hai?...'

'ya...i think u rt right...par geet hai kahan?abhi to yehin thi...?'he sounded worried...

they all found that geet is not there...maan becomes realy worried...she was there all the while...then suddenly where she can go...suddenly his mobile rang..he chekcked the number..it was from city hospital...it seems a it weired to get cal from hospital sudenly...

'hello maan singh khurana here...'

dr.-mr maan..can u please come here as soon as possible...

'why?...what happened...'he sounded worried...

dr.-actuly geet...she is...i mean please try to come here quickly...uske paas abhi bohot hi kam time bacha hai...or please dont tell her ki maine aap ko ye bataya hai...he told me strictly not to inform you in any condition...but...as an human being...i...i had to do it...

maan was about to drop the phone from his hand...what is he hearing...geet has very few time left?...what does it means...what kind of joke it is...

'r u out of ur mind?..ye aap kya keh rhi hai?...geet ko kya hua hai?...'

dr.-mr maan she was suffering from brain cancer...and its her last stage...'be be here as soon as possible...the phone got cut...

maan fels on his knees...he was shaken by the news...the worrible one...sam comes to him and asks him what happened...he was speechless...somehow managed to utter...'geet...hospital...brain cancer...few time left to her...'he broke down completely...

after sometime...they rashed to the hospital...maan was speechless...he didnt utter a single word...he askes docorls where is geet...he was searching her frantically...then he and sam reaches in front of geet's icu...nurse told him only one can meet her now...sam stops midway and looks at maan in consent...

maan enters...he found geet is lying on the bed closing her eyes...he tried to make no soung and reaches near her bed...sits there...and in a shaky voice he called her...'geet.'

that was enough for her to open her eyes...yes it was her dream to be with him on her death bed...but...she was helpless...she never wanted to spoil his spacial moment...never...she was shocked to see that he was actuly here...'maan...aap...aap yahan...kaise?...'she managed to say weakly...

'shut up...u..tum hum me se kisi ko nahi bata sakti thi ki tum...tum...and u even told the doctor not not say anything to us??how could u geet?...'he was not able to say anymore...

'maan...par ur marriage...wo abhi incomplete hai...please aap waha jaiye maan...saam needs u...'she pleaded...

'u meeds me now most u stupid...its u...who is fighting with life...its you who is...'he was not able to utter the word..'death'

'me...ma nahin bata payi maan...i was scared...me aap logo ko dukh me nahi dekh sakti...'she cried...

'shh...bilkul chup...geet..tum is halat me thi...or me...me yeh sab...chhi...'

'maan...please...aapko khush dekhna mera last wish tha...maan apne pyaar ko khush dekh kar me chayan se mat sakti hu...'then she found that she told him that 'pyaar..'she bits her lip..

maan's eyes widened in schocked...'pyaar...!!!!'uska pyaar?she loved me?...no!!!!!!god...what i have done...it cant be possible...!!!!he hold her...'geet...pyaar?...geet u loves me?...geet please for god sake tell me geet...'geet shook her head...but her eyes said it all...maan's hold toghtened...

she was not able to hold it anymore...

'ha maan...ab is last time me aapke or nahi chupa sakti maan...i love you...i love you more than anything...u r everything for me...muje us pehle din se aapse pyaar hai jabse aapse muili hu...tabse...tabse aapse pyaar kia...'she sobbed loudly...'par maan...me janti hu u dont love me...but aapne mujse shadi ki...muje respect dia...thants enough maan...or mein aapko kabhi khush nahi kar pati maan...kabhi nahi...never...'

maan was hell shocked...he was guilty...the pain within his heart was just about to kill him...no...how can he?...how he cant see love on her eyes...how?...she was doing everything for him abd he..he was busy in his own life...he he is a demon...he closes his eyes tightly hiding his tears...

'geet why?...kiyu kia mujse itna pyaar?...me iske kabil nahi geet...kabhi tumare pyaar ko nahi dekh paya me...'

'nahi maan..not ur fault...we were not destined to be one...or me...me to aapki sabse badi khusi bhi aapke chhin li...me...me nahi bacha payi use...'suddenly she realises what she is saying...she stops abruptly...

'geet...what r u talking?...kon geet?..tell me...kon?..tume meri kasam geet tell me everything...'

'maan...hamara bacha...me use is duniya me la na saki...am sorry...am sorry'...she broke down completely...

maan was not able to take anymore...what is she saiyng?pregnant?..their child?..but when?...geet understood him...'woh us party wale rat...aap drunk the...or upset bhi...u came to uor room totaly lost...and...am sorry its my fault i souldnt...she couldnt complete as maan closes her mouth...

'no...please...dont say anymore...i should have been dies before listening these...i..i am aunhuman...mene...mene tume itna dukh dia...kabhi tume kuch bhi khushi nahi de paya geet...mene tumari life barbad kardi...i just sopit ur life...punish me geet...kill me...just kill me...'he was nimb...numb in pain...guilt that...he was not able to face it...'or aaj tum...tum muje chhod kar...geet please dont...dont go geet...i promise...i will love you...more than myself...geet please...please mujhe chhod kar mat jao...please geet...'he hugs her tightly...

it was what she wanted for her lifetime...that maan will hig her...love her...and now...now she is satisfied...she doesnt want anything else...she higs him back...

after a while they broke the hug...'maan...i have to go...ab kuch nahi ho sakta...par aap...aap wada kijiye ke aap khsh rahenge apni zindagi me...sameera se shadi karke?..wadah maan?...''she looks at him...

'kiyu geet...why my happines is everything to you geet?...kiyu?...kiyu me tume kabhi pyaar nahi kar sakan geet?...why...why u/...kiyu tumhe ye sab sehna pada?...'he sobbed...

'maan...destiny ko koi badal nahi sakta...but please maan...aap mujse wadah kijiye...ki aap apni shadi sam se krenge...please...then i can die peacefully...'she smiles to him...

maan looks at her angrily pain was visible in his eyes...why?...why she is like this/..so good?...why it always happenes with good people?...why she doesnt deserves to be happy?...he holda her hand...'i promise...now u r happy?..'he said...

she smiles..and coles her eys...what she fails to notice that on maan's other hand...his fingers are crossed...no...he cant...he cant be happy in his life anymore...his happines will go with her...he doesnt desereves to be happy anymore...

after 1 year...

maan is in his room working on his laptop...daadima comes to him...'beta...niche ayiye...bad aap hi ka intezaar hai...hawan in going to start...'he nodes...doesnt say anything...

daadi wents back...it has beem one whole year that geet passed...leaving a totally changed maan...he is imotionless...like a machine...spend almost whole day in office...never smiles...barely speaks to anyone...he is not a human being anymore rather a robot...she sighes and left...

maan closes the laptop and went to the picture hanging on the wall...it' she...his wife geet...today...is her 'barshi..' he goes near it...and kissed the pic...'geet...1 saal ho gye tum muje chhod kar gayi ho...par aaj bhi tum meri yaado me ho...i love you geet...i love you more than anything...and for u am living...because its my punishment...and i promise...on our next life...u will me mine...only mine..we will be together...geet...'he wipes his tears...'sorry...i could keep my promise...u know na?...i just cant imagine of marrying sam...how can i?...how?...am sorry...ho sake to...forgive me...'

and he went downstairs...

how was it guys?...

hope u wil lik it...

sorry but sad ending...😭

am also crying while typing it...😭

please leave ur cments...

love u all...

~~~soumi~~~

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appyshenoy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#59

ME THIRD... I MISSED TO BE FIRST...YOU MADE ME CRY. I MISSED BACHA TOO. HAPPY THAT GEET GOT HER LOVE AT HER DEATH BED...I AM SOBBING GEET DIED...MAAN DIDN'T MARRY SAM AFTER KNOWING THE TRUTH THAT GEET LOVED HIM MORE THAN ANYTHING...BUT ALTOGETHER AN AWESOME UPDATE...PLEASE TRY TO WRITE A HAPPY OS AFTER THIS TO MAKE US HAPPY...I AM REALLY WORRIED ABOUT MAAN.. HE TURNED INTO A MACHINE...OK THANKS FOR WRITING SUCH SUPERB OS.

Edited by appyshenoy - 13 years ago