WHY IT DIDN'T HAPPEN WITH ME ?

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HEY...BUDDIES THIS IS A SPL DEDICATION TO ALL MY LOVELY READERS AS A APOLOGY GIFT FOR LATE UPDATE...IT WAS RANDOM THOUGHT IN MY MIND AND SORRY IF IT DIDN'T ENTERTAIN YOU...

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WHY IT DIDN'T HAPPEN WITH ME ?

I was very happy i didn't know the reason why i was waiting for her outside airport. She is my childhood friend we were family friends . we were neighbours until her family shifted to banglore when she was 13. i have a sweet bonding with her she has always been my best friend . My only trustworthy friend GEET . though she has shifted to banglore we were in contact and now she is back to delhi to do a project. i was brought out of my thoughts by a sweet voice that called my name. i turned to see that was her , she was looking gorgeous my heart was jumping with joy . I never portraited geet as such a lovely women . I fell for her in the first sight itself. She didn't make me feel as if we met after long time. She was friendly . everyone liked her in my family. My parents always saw geet as member of our family . within a week she knew everything about everyone from Daadi to mom , from cook to gardener . she cared for everyone . She never failed to attract me since she came .

It was one month since she came . My feelings was growing day by day . i wanted to confess my feelings to her. i can't stay away from her for even a minute now. It was when i heard Daadi and mom talking about geet and daadi was telling tat geet would be a perfect wife for her grandson and she will certainly talk to geet's father bout it. I was in cloud nine . I can't believe it was happening with me. But before anything happens officially i wanted to propose to her in my style. i was waiting for a right opportunity and i got it when all members of the family were out to attend a party and i knew she was alone in the house.

I went searching for her throughout the house . It was then i heard the sound of her giggling in balcony i immediately rushed there. But wat i saw there killed me . My geet was in someone else's arms and the most shocking fact was that someone was none other than my own brother. I almost forgot him . He never existed around us since geet came. i ve not even seen geet talking to him since she returned . Then what was it now . what is MY GEET doing in his arms. That was not a friendly hug for sure. Love? no way my brother could love no one and geet noways she doesn't deserve him she deserves someone more friendly someone like me. I thought may be i was wrong it was just they were being friendly with eachother . i didn't want to make any conclusions without talking to her. i know she likes me .

I never got time to talk with her since that day and i never see her talk with my brother as well . so i was convinced that wat i saw that day was nothing personal. i had to go to mumbai fo a week for some business meeting and i decided to confess to her when i m back. The week that wasn't with her was killing me.i was yearning to see her.

i came back after a week and saw my house decorated for some function but i didn't bother to enquire i went to see my love. She was breathtaking beautiful in golden lehanga. Once when she saw me she instantly came near me hugged me . i still remember her words . she said she was the happiest person in this world and she could never ask for something more than that. I was out of the world . But my happiness was short lived sooni realised that the words were not meant for me but for my brother. Yes that was my brother and geet's marriage. They were happy . Geet was flying in the sky.

i never knew that they both love eachother until my brother told me tat they were dating eachother since she came to meet us for last vacation and she was here this time only to meet him. My heart was shattered into thousand pieces.Everyone was happy but i wasn't . my first love was going to be someone's in few mins. The thought itself killed me . Unable to stand the happenings i went to an isolated place.

i made sure everything was over before i came back. I had to cross my brother's room to reach my room . That few mins were hell to me the feeling that they together was raising the dragon inside me.i was turning cruel inorder to save them from me i decided to stay away from them. so i shifted to Australia.

It is five years since i saw them they use to call me often and send pics of them . The latest was their daughter's third birthday's pics , they looked happy geet was expecting another baby .their family was complete . They asked me to join them back in india but i never agreed. i m not strong enough to see geet with my brother. How much i stay away from them that much our lives will be peaceful.

But still when i rewind my life i wonder why she didn't love me , i ve always been her best friend , why did she chose my brother over me , WHY IT DIDN'T HAPPEN WITH ME?
I m DEV SINGH KHURANNA and this is MY STORY.

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jayshu17 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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LOLZZZ😆😆😆!Cant stop laughing!!liked ur post!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey...awesome...loved it.

N loved the last part most...'' I am Dev Singh Khurana''...superb.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow!! that was beautifully done👏. great job maneet_ forever👍🏼(sorry don't know ur name). To tell u the truth, I was quite entertained and loved ur imaginations😉😃. U cud be a great writer in the future😃. btw, honestly the way u were describing the story in the beginning i kept thinking it wud be maan, in fact i was damn sure it'd be maan😆, the irony surprised me😆 but loved the suspense part of it. Honestly, I didn't know u were talking about Dev until i saw the name Dev Sing at the end😆. loved it. hey can u make more. like one on how maan-geet fall in love like a different story but same couples😛. sorry after reading this one, i'm way too excited to read more from u😃. u shudn't hav written so good😈. nw i will probably bother u and demand more n more like this😈😆. jokes apart, really it was fabulous, spectacular, mindblowing, terrific that's all i cud remember at this point😆. No words wud be enough to describe ur beautiful imagination👍🏼. Great work👏. Work from a real talented person👏. thanks for the wonderful post😃. u made my day😉😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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When I was reading I had this feeling that it's dev n yipeee I'm right!! He was dev [:D/]
well y it happened to u dev?? Becoz u r not Maan Singh Khurana!!! Aur geet ka naam sirf maan ke saath achha lagta hai. Lol...
I wish the real dev was like this... Should hv left them alone n went smwhere far away
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Amazing story...please pm me when u write the next one
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved this OS...
actually i am so happy...
half way thro i recognized it must b dev writing...
nice one
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it ...
the last line was fab ...
write soon
love
Sana
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome dear...

i kind of expected tht its dev the narrator when he mentioned abt his bro...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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heheh niceee cant stop my laughing :P

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