My version of short story-Geet in Hosiyarpur styl

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😊My version of a short story ---- Geet back with her Miss Hosiyarpur Style.

Geet enters Maan cabin with a coffee and bunch of white flowers in her hand…. She notices that Maan is not in his cabin….. Geet keeps the mug on his table and starts putting flowers in the empty flower vase…… She is busy doing this and at the same time Maan enters and looking at Geet, Maan gets annoyed and gets angrier looking at the decorated flower vase with flowers in it…. He comes in his full style inside the room banging the door……. Geet gets socked at the noise of the banged door…… and turns back to see and notices Maan angry face……

Maan comes near to Geet and says kit um yaha kya kar rahi ho… mai tumhe pehle bhi keh chukka hu hi mere kamre mai ane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai…… Geet says Mai to yaha appki coffee leke ayi thi. Maan further says tum yaha coffee leke ayi thi to aur yeh phool yaha kya kar rahe hai kya tumhe kisine bataya nahi ki mujhe phool nahi pasand and angrily tries to remove the flowers from the vase and throw away but at the same time the vase also falls along with the file which was near it…… Maan had so much anger that he tries to pick up the file and gets hurt in his hand and starts bleeding…… Looking at this Geet gets worried😲 and says Maan sir appko to gheri chot ayi hai mai abhi dawai leke ati hu… Maan who is still angry says mujhe koi dawai nahi chaiye and before he says further Geet has already left to bring first aid box……..

Geet enters with her first aid box and sees Maan still in pain and his hands is still bleeding…… Geet comes near Maan and tells app apna hath digiye…. Maan replies saying maine kaha na mujhe nahi chaiye yeh sab aur tum andhar ane se phele knock nahi kar sakti thi…… Geet who was till then listening every thing quietly suddenly goes in her style and says app apna hath digiye appko bohot chot lagi hai khoon nikal raha hai… Maan doesn't listen to her…….. Geet takes Maan hand and Maan tries to move his hand but Geet holds it tightly and says bohot ho gaya ab yeh zid band kijiye chup ek dum chup aur chup chap baitjaiye agar app ab yaha se hile to dekh ligiye. Har baat ke liye Zid karma jaroori nahi…….. And starts applying medicine on Maan's hand. Geet starts talking pata nahi itna gussa late kaha se hai ar baat pe gussa…😉.

While Geet is applying medicine Maan keeps staring at Geet…… Geet finishes applying medicine and looks up at Maan who is still staring at her… His hand is still on her… (back ground😉 Mahiii)……

Maan suddenly becomes conscious and take his hand from her hand and gets up and leaves and talks to himself pata nahi yeh kya ho raha hai mere sath…… Geet overhears and says Maan yeh mere pyar ka asar hai jo ab bhi appke dil me kahi na kahi chupa hai jo mujhe bahar nikalna hai app ko who sari yaade wapis lake hi rahugi…. Mai appne is Dusht Danav ko phir se pyara sa Maan bana ke hi rahugii….. 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
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We want that Miss Hoshiyarpur woh used to never listen to MSK . 😉
Edited by manesha76 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved ur os ..i m amzes at ur creation ana ..u rock dear ..move on wid ur work ..love u ..😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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mast scene ana... loved it...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Maan doesn't listen to her…….. Geet takes Maan hand and Maan tries to move his hand but Geet holds it tightly and says bohot ho gaya ab yeh zid band kijiye chup ek dum chup aur chup chap baitjaiye agar app ab yaha se hile to dekh ligiye. Har baat ke liye Zid karma jaroori nahi……..



@Ana... rapchik... ab chali Miss HP ki train... bechara ekdum chup hogaya...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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That was sooo good.. Very sweet os
Hope 2 see something like that in the episode
Geet bac in her hp style n Maan mesmerised by her
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ohhh so sweeettt wow kab hoga ye wow just wow good going Ana
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Miss Hoshiarpur is too smart...

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