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interesting continue soon... add me in ur pm list...
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awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
loved it...
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Nice update. Please PM me!
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hey..interesting OS...cold angry betrayed Maan...😉
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loved it a lot...keep writing...👏
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Will finish update 1 tonight ..also this os might have up to 5 parts will do one part a day x
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Intersting pro:D
Cant wait plzzz update soon x :)
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love the suspense
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Part 1 Continued..
PAST
Geet was checking the back door of her florist. She was about to lock up and make sure everything was closed. Purple Flowers she called it. The most busiest florists in her small humble town.
'Back door checked. Office locked. Lights closed. Kitchen closed.' Geet walked around checking her checklist and ticking off her to do list.
'Mail orders to be sent out. checked' Geet said as she stacked the last of the mail orders making sure all the flowers in the packages were up to the highest standard.
'Adi' Geet yelled to her driver who was waiting out front. Adi was an 18 year old just finished A levels and needed a part time job to aid his university fees to start next year. He was a driver cum sales assistant for Geet. Geet had known Adi for 2 years. Geet was 18 herself when her business started making it successful in just 2 years. She was now 20.
'Yes Geet' He hurried putting some of the orders into the van as he saw Geet point the orders. 'you have the address list right. Make sure they are sent as soon as possible'
'Sure thing Geet, Night' Randy hopped into his van and left. Geet smiled at him as she left.
'Right then all done now time to lock up and go home' She smiled. She locked her shop after grabbing her coat and purse It was a warm night so she carried her coat in her hand. wearing only a blouse and jeans. She walked home as she didnt live far when she heard footsteps behind her. She turned around and saw no one and thought it was a figment of her imagination. It was getting dark quick. Geet walked faster. She heard the footsteps again she was about to reach out for her pepper spray in her bag when a hand clamped her mouth and pulled her into the nearby ally. The street was deserted and so was the ally.
Geet struggled to get free. She had dropped the spray when the person had suddenly attacked her. She was pushed harshly aganist the wall. There was absolute darkness. The light in this ally had died out. Geet was petrified of the dark.
'Geet' The person whispered.
'Ranvir' Geet whispered. Ranvir was her stalker who had been stalking her from her college days. Geet had complained about him and got him arrested. He also had an injuction to keep away from her.
'You actually thought that any injuction or police would keep me away from you' He mockingly asked as he cupped her face harshly.
'Let me go please Ranvir' Geet pleaded.
'Nope not until i've finished with you' He said with anger in his eyes. He reached down to her blouse and ripped her shirt off with the knife he was holding.
'Shh don't say a word Geet you know what a knife can do to you' He touched the edge of the knife on her neck and brought it down passed her throat breats and stomach. Geet could feel the cold knife aganist her body.
'Please' Geet cried. Tears formed in her eyes as Ranvir held the knife aganist her stomach. He then tied Geet hands behind her back. Geet was frightened. He then leaned forward to kiss her when a arm pulled him back which pushed Ranvir on the floor. Ranvir got up and saw the stranger and started to fight with him. The stranger beat him up further until Ranvir was on the ground unconciouss. Geet was still standing there shocked. Tears in her eyes. The stranger walked up to her and wiped her tears.
'Geet open your eyes' Geet opened her eyes and saw Maan. Maan was her best friend since college finished. She met him when she first started her business at 18. He was her financial advisor. He helped her get a loan and they became best friends.Geet had fallen irrevocably in love with Maan. She hid her feelings from him scared if he didnt love her. 'Maan' She whispered. Maan knew everything about Geet and about Ranvir to. When he heard that Ranvir was out of jail he ran to the shop to see it was closed. He knew Geet would walk home so he followed the route and found Geet's coat purse and pepper spray on the floor. He hugged Geet tight and put her coat around her ripped shirt. Geet was too numb to speak. He picked her up and took her to his car and drove her home. He lived with her togehter but seprate rooms.. He lay her on the bed when Geet held his hand begging him not to go. He smiled at her and kissed her forehead. Maan cared for Geet a lot. He never wanted anyone to hurt her. She was his prized possession. She was his. She belonged to him. He was possesive of her. He never wanted another person to touch her. He made sure she was alright and rang her several times a day. He knew he loved her but didnt know about Geet.
'Geet your okay now i won't let anyone ever hurt you'
'Stay with me Maan. Sleep here with me i need you' Geet whispered. Maan smiled as he slipped into bed next to Geet and hugged her tight aganist himself.
'Don't cry Geet you know i hate your tears'
The following Morning Geet awoke early. Her room was covered with purple orchids which were her favourite flowers. There were petals all the bed as well.
'Happy Birthday Geet' Maan walked in with a birthday Breakfast. Geet smiled. She had forgotten it was her birthday. Maan and Geet fed eachother and stayed together.
'Its now or never Geet' She thought to herself.
'Maan' Geet looked at him working on his laptop in the lounge. Maan turned around suddenly. He saw Geet in her tshirt and shorts and was mesmerised with her angellic beauty. He quickly closed his laptop hiding everything from her view.
'Yes Geet'
'Woh i wanted to say something but i'm scared' Maan walked to Geet and sat her on his lap.
'Whats wrong Geet?' He asked worried.
'Maan close your eyes' She said. Maan smiled at her cuteness and laughed.
He closed his eyes.
'I LOVE YOU MR MAAN SINGH KHURANA MORE THAN ANYTHING IN THIS WORLD' Maan opened his eyes and stared at her. He was elated that she felt the same thing for him that he did for her. Geet suddenly had tears in her eyes and got off his lap and walked towards the lounge door which was closed.
'If you don't love me then I have ended this friendship and just caused a indifference i'm sorry Maan. I had these feelings for a long time i've just ruined my birthday'
Maan got up spun Geet around and pushed her aganist the wall.
'Your birthday is not ruined. I've waited ages to tell you this Geet Handa that ' Not finishing his sentence He kissed her hard and aggresively biting her lips sucking it. Geet responded with equal fervour. It soon turned into a tongue battle. Maan lifted her up aganist the wall and her legs were around his waist. She put her hand around his neck kissing him back. His hand was under her T shirt. He didnt let go of her lips. He pushed her aganist the door harder kissing her more.
'Your Mine Handa all of you' He whispered aggresively biting her neck. He moved with her kissing her over her neck and collar bone aganist the dining table which was in the lounge. He lay her down and ripped her clothes off and took his off too. He moved on top of her pushing the fruit basket off the table on the floor. He fondled and carreseed her breats and curves widly biting licking them. Geet pulled him closer placing many nail marks. She bit his shoulder kissed his chest. Maan then pulled her legs around his waist and entered her. Geet screamed with pain with the sudden movement. Maan closed the scream kissing her. He pushed her thrust after thrust until both reached there climax.
'I Love you' Geet whispered.
'Me too' They both got off the dining table. Geet saw a blood stain on the table and was embarrased. She picked up her torn tshirt and threw it over and walked to the door. Maan lay on the table and saw her walking around nude.
'Where do you think your going? Did i say you can go?' He walked up to her. Geet blushed and smiled at him. He grabbed her before she reached the door and pushed her aganist the wall.
'I don't think we have quite finished' He smirked.
He picked her up and put his legs around his waist and re entered her taking her aganist the wall pushing her up and down taking her to new levels. They spent the entire day making love in different rooms of the house. Sometimes on the sofa. The dining table, aganist the wall. On the stairs aganist the door aganist the kitchen counter and finally at night on Geet's bed.
That night on the bed after the exhaustive love making both lay together
'I Love you Geet. I'm so glad your mine' Maan whispered.
'Me too Maan. Never leave me'
'I never will. Even if you want to'
'Now why would i do that. A stupid girl would do that not your Geet'
'hmm.. I guess you had the best 21st ever eh' Maan kissed her hair.
'yes i did.' Geet kissed his neck.
'You know what would make it better just wait one minute i'll be back' Maan grabbed his robe and went out of the room. He returned after 5 minutes. Geet sat up with the bed sheet covering herself.
'Geet Handa will you marry me?' Geet smiled with tears in her eyes.
'Off Course I will Mr Khurana' Maan slipped the ring on her finger. Both fell asleep.
PRESENT
'Well Geet if you remember on your birthday 21st may i add only lets see 3 years ago we got intimate how many times. You loved it all the time i remember you calling my name out all the time'
'Maan please let me go'
'No all those who wronged me will be punished. Adi your best friend is dead'
'What'
'Yes I killed him. He betrayed me too'
'but Maan he just got married his wife. How could you be so heartless'
'The same way you were. And don't worry about his wife. She was my pawn to kill Adi'
'Maan how could you?'
'The same way i could kill you' Maan took a knife out. 'But Geet I love you so much i could never kill you. This love is posinous'
'Maan please i'm sorry'
'Not as sorry as you will be. Geet your punishement is that I will never let you go ever'
With that he jumped on the bed and pulled off her dress and his clothes and made aggressive love to her.
'Reminded you of something' Maan asked after he had dressed her.
'Yes what a horrible man and bas***d you are' Geet said. Maan slapped her again.
'Right Geet now i want to know why you betrayed me?'
PRECAP:
PAST: Mi5 meets Geet. Geet betraying Maan..
NEXT PART all PAST
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lovely update
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