OS-*V@rt@l@p*btw L0\/3rs...!!!!!!!!

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Hey buddies this is my very first OS writing for a very special FRIEND as she is sad ummm very sad just to lighten up her mood I made an attempt,hope if it actually works.Its been a long time reading so many to be honest Wonderful ff'z,ss'z,os'z. So, this is also dedicated to all those wonderful writers they are really close to my heart(won't mention names as the whole page won't be enough for it😆).This is nothing going to be upto their work but just a attempt to make someone happy which people say I know very well😆 as they say my face is only required to make anyone Laugh😆.Well this could also be said that this is the By-product of excessive study done by me.

The Os is not sad, depressing, emotions no ways to be found in it,it's a light hearted comic scene,depicting the lovers(if U could call it so)
😆 in college rather can be called more of Boyfriend-Girlfriend, a casual affair we all might have had in our college days.

The characters is nothing to be described we can just say,Maan is the heart of the college to be precise girls😆(I wonder what to explain about it😍
) he could have found best for himself yet got stock on Geet,the Beauty no can deny so how come he could?But as it is said The girls with beauty does not have brains(still finding that person😡)here geet proves that,it wasn't that she was dumb but the real innocent soul.She was with maan not because of his looks but his heart she found it so cute and innocent(still unaware of the real reasons),to her he just Love everything about him and to him he still think about that day when he actually proposed her😆.

As they used to spend a lot of time at college but still there was a routine of them to talk in night on call
,At start it was amazing it felt like heaven but as the time passes it remained heaven for only one and I think I don't need to mention who that one could be.He couldn't do anything much about it as he couldn't let her go,can't say if he loved her but it was just that he can't loose her.No matter how much he get frustrated over it.
His day already went frustrated,he was in no mood to talk to her today but out of his luck it wasn't gonna happen he already knew,as soon as the clock striked 10 his cell beeped.(Since the very first day as per some rule who made it God knows and also tald her😆 she knew girls only give miscalls and then boys call back
,she always followed it.)

In the title of the OS helped received from a very dear friend of min Hinal🤗 (Love U babes although this is not what she said but still she helped me Thank U Sweetheart)

Note: The Conversation in the brackets {}contain the words which the guy means maan is speaking to himself(to make it clear i have coloured it with brown)!!!


She gives a missed call to him' and He calls her back'


Geet: Hello!

Maan: {are yaar...Raat ke 10 bajte nahin ki iski 2-2 second waali missed calls shuru'pata nahi aaj kitna bore karegi} Hi Jaan kesi ho?

Geet:Arre din mein hi to mile the theek hoon na mein,mujhe kya hona hai?

Maan:{ghlati hogayi meri Maa ke maine pooch liya han han tumhe mujhse pehle kahan kuch hoga} kya baat hai..?

Geet: kuch nahi...bas aise hi phone kar liya

Maan: {Aise hee ??? Yeh kya Radio Station hai ki aise hee ...!! Aur Call kahan kiya ?... khali missed call to diya hai, roz ki tarah...}
oh...ok ..kya kar rahi thi ??


Geet: abhi abhi dinner khatam kiya...tum kya kar rahe the?

Maan: {mai to lunch karke utha hoon na}
Mera bhi abhi abhi dinner khatam hua.. ab..."Saibo" sun raha hu FM par...

Geet:nice song' (And then she hums a line from the song "Saibo")

Maan: {Yaaarrr 'kyun bola gaane ka naam .. Ab ye Madonna saare raag gaa degi yaheen}
Hey!!!! Tum itna achcha gaati ho? mujhe pata hi nahi tha ..

Geet: *giggles*

Maan:{Ohhho kya hansti hai ... aisa lag raha hai koi gaadi start kar raha hai koi}
Hey ek aur baar gaao na pls!


Geet: Yehan sab so rahe hai... Agar main gaaongi to sab uth jaaenge'

Note:She lives in a hostel and 😆this phone is gifted by maan at the early so that he could easily talk to her as the mistress use to make hell for both one day she shouted so much on gett she cried whole night next day she came with her red eyes he couldn't bear so brought her this new phone😆 wish if he wouldn't be emotional at that time😆

Maan:{Ekdum Correct...woh yehi samjhenge ki koi paagal, kisi baat par naraaz ho gayi hai ...😆}
Come on! Please!


Geet: Dhatt ...I don't sing that well!!

Maan: {Yeh to saari duniya ko pata hai... paka kyun rahi hai}
It was really sweet. Please gaao na dear


Geet: Mujhe kuch ajeeb sa lagta hai jaan '

Maan: {mujhe tujhse zyada ajeeb lagta hai, dekh phir bhi shaheed hone ko tayaar baitha hoon}
Aisa kuch bhi nahi hai jaanu...gaao na...mere liye!!!!!

Pin drop silence as she was nervous bit conscious

Maan: {mere paas koi doosra raasta nahi hai...is liye bola}
Abhi tum gaaogi ya nahi ?


Geet: kyun pareshaan kar rahe ho?

Maan: Acchha ! Ok Nahi karta!!!!(Jaan bachi tou lakho paao)

Geet: I don't have that great voice ... ye to bas aise hee gaa diya tha ... warna mai nahin gaati

Maan: {Phir aise hee ??? bada ehsaan karti agar nahin gaati ' kaan mai se khoon nikalne waala hai... saala gadha bhi sharma jaaye tumhari awaaz sunke'}
hmmm

Geet: Theek hai...ab jab tum itni zid kar rahe ho...tou sirf ek stanza gaaungi theek hai??

Maan: {Abbe teri !!! Phas gayaaa yaarrr... shittt ' aur kya kya jhelna padega malum nahi'}
That's just great Awesome!!!!!!!


Geet: kaunsa gaana gaau ?

Maan: {Tum kuch bhi gaao... meri to aaj by default neend haraam hi hai'}
Hmmm' kuch bhi jaan tumhari pasand ka

Geet: Nahi na tumhe suna rahi hoon tou tumhari pasand ka hona chahiye na

Maan: {sahi hai yaar pasand pooch rahi hai abbe torture torture hota hai attyachaar tareek koi bhi tou takleef tou utni hi hogi na 😭😭} How sweet!!! acha Hmmm..."Humko pyar hua" from "Ready'

Geet: Nice song. But mujhe lyrics yaad nahi hai

Maan: {Thank God ... Text book chhodke tujhe aur kya pata hai bol ...} Acha phir Aa Zara from Murder 2

Geet: Nahi Nahi main wohi gaana gaaungi


Maan: {Aye tere nakhre ... mai to jaise mara jaa raha hoon tumhari awaaz sun ne ke liye Shakira ' koi bhi gaana gaa...mere kaan to pakne waale hain}
Cool


(She clears her throat, hums a line and then)

Geet: Nahi jaan' I am feeling very shy!

Maan: {Tou shuru kyun hoti ho ' ek bar shuru hokar khatam kyun nahin karti jaldi jaldi... ab kya Eden Gardens book karaun, tab gaogi}
Gaao na...pls gaao na...tumhari awaaz k samundar me main doob jaana chahta hoon!!!!!!!


Geet: dekho...ab tum mujhe naaraaz kar rahe ho '

Maan: {Achchha ab princess ko manaane mai poore sheher k phool leke bhejun kya}
No no... Tum shy feel kar rahi ho na... is liye... Trying to make u comfortable

Geet: Hmmm'

Maan: {Ye makkhi ki tarah kya shuru ho gayi}
Please gaao na darling...


Geet: Main kal gaaun?

Maan: {Hussshhh..jaaan bachi... nikal leta hoon...abhi mauka acha hai}
Theek hai jaisi tumhaari merzi


Geet: Hmmm

Maan: Good night

Geet: Good night

Geet: Sweet Dreams' Take care...

Maan: Sweets dreams to u too...{kaahe ke sweet dreams .. sone dogi tab ayenge na dreams 'abhi 2 minute mein fir call karegi achi tarah jaanta hoon}

After a while She calls Him (sorry...that never happens, she gives only a missed call)He called back!!!!!!

Geet: Hey' so gaye the kya?

Maan:{Nahiii...current ka aavishkaar kar raha tha...}
Nahi jaan


Geet: kya kar rahe ho?

Maan: {Raat ko kya gili danda khelna hai...}
Match dekh raha tha jaan...

Geet: Theek hai tum match dekho

Maan: {phone rakhegi to kuch dekhunga na... ya tum running commentary sunaogi}
Hey it's ok... purana match hai

Geet: Did U feel Bad as I didn't sing???

(Since it is a tricky question, He thinks for a while)

Maan:{Bad eh? Crazy girl... this was the luckiest day in my life, since you didn't sing}
Bad toh main nahi keh raha jaanu. But I want you to be comfortable first... tumhi ne bola ki main kal gaaungi...
So, me waiting'{ maine to socha tha ki aaj bach gaya ... dhattt tereki }


She sings 1 stanza from the song

'Humko pyar hua puri hua dua...'

Maan:Wow. Too good!

Geet: jhoot...mujhe maloom hai ki meri awaaz itni achchi nahi hai

Maan: {Saamne aa jaa, phir bataata hoon... pagal kar diya... chalo shukr hai self realization tou hai ...kam se kam }
Nahi darling you really sing well...

Geet: nahi..mujhe maloom hai tum bas aise hi keh rahe ho

Maan: {Very good.. aakhir tumne pata laga hi liya...kyun bhagwaan kyun !! mere saath ye zulm kyun}
Cheee! Cheee! tumhari voice agar itni buri hoti to main kya ab tak na sun raha hota


Geet: Hmmm...theek hai.. good night.. ab tum bhi so jaao'

Maan: {Achcha mil gayi permission ... waisa bhi yeh gaana sunne ke baad neend kahan aayegi ab ...}
Good night!

Geet: Take care

Maan: You too

Geet: Hey...

Maan: {Arrre yaar.. aaj ye nahi chhodegi} kya huwa sweety?

Geet: Hmmm sachi bataao honey..meri voice achchi hai ya nahi...

Maan: {Tum apni voice record karke sun kyon nahi leti ek baar !! dimaag ka dahi kar rakha hai .. lassi banaake pee jao mere dimaag ki}
sachchi...its beautiful Of course.


Geet: jhoot jhoot sirf jhoot

Maan: {Iski toh... !! jab pata hai to mujhse kya singing sensation ka award lena chah rahi hai !! phata dhol'}
Not at all. You sing so very well'

Geet: Hmmm...chalo tum keh rahe ho to theek hi hoga.

Maan: {eeehhh... ab kya jaan deke yaqeen dilwaun isko kya karron mein ...waise kahin isse pata tou nahi chal gaya ke mein jhoot hi bol raha hoon}haan jaan tum bahat acha gaati ho I thnk U should practise and work on it!!!!!!!

Geet: Hmmm... acha chalo mujhe neend arahi hai Good night jaan!!!!!!!


Maan: {phew!!!!!Finally jaan chootee} Good Night jaan

When he turned around to see match finished cheee!!!!!!pura hi khatam karwa dia and the time 1 am oohhh shit kal tou subah jaana bhi jaldi hai assignment submit karna pir subah hi subah ajayegi iski call sorry missed call hi deti hai humesha,he immediately turned around fixed his pillows and spread and then open his eyes and a smile crept on his face thinking about her what all was he thinking in frustation and she couldn't even gussed once Kuch bhi kaho hai badi sweet or innocent bhi, Oh Gosh!! jesi bhi hai pagal crazy phata dhol but I just Love her he giggles Ummm and turns slips into his deep sleep...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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So peeps how was it did U liked it?????I don't know just came to my mind and I wrote it.To make U all clear K yes, he thought all so bad about her it was just because he was frustated over something in College but that doesn't mean he don't Love her(not possible maan doesnt love geet mujhe jamta nahi hai yeh😆) .We need to accept that at times we are not in mood and we need to relax or chill so this is the outcome although she is unaware completely😆.Especially with men no matter how much troubled they are but they have to act sweet infront of their partners Poor men pity poor souls😆 and then at heart they are such devils.

Do hit the like button & leave your comments as all the types are invited.If U don't like it,do tell me any thing any loopholes U are free to comment over it.Just comment and forgive as this is the first time I wrote something,So hope U all like it.

If possible Do rate what would U like to give it out of 5:bad,better,good,very good or amazing.Shall end my bak bak now,shall wait for all your response.





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Amoureux thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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🤣
It was hilarious... thank you for the good laugh i had... so much needed that today.. 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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😭
😭
😭


It was amazing... thank you so much for such
lovely post.. now i fell like, he may be thinking like that
when i called...
🤢
still no call... still no words...
still i fell like i am a lonely soul...


update another soon...😳
Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it ... awesome ... the convo was soo cute ... GEet is soo innocent aur ye Maan ... uff . but he loves her ...

u shud write often

love
Sana
Edited by sindu555 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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🤣

hai la, i couldnt help but laugh all the way, glad lab is empty today, varna i would have been a certified nutcase

🤣

thanks, it was wonderful
Edited by kirti_fiji - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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that was funny..abhi sochoo..
wat if my huby did that when I used to call..sorry sorry gave him missed calls to call me back
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ye wardah
awesomeee
bt u know wt khushi dii has written smthing similar on raj naina
n it just reminded me of tht
totalllyyy awesomeee
n which frnd of urs is sad
n wt u never asked me to give u suggestion
lolzzz
n its vry gud
hope this is nt my to be jiju's halat whn he calls u
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I think I know who you are talking about. :) xx
Lovely
Posted: 14 years ago
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🤣🤣Thanks for the laugh! Hope you write more.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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freaking funny
love it & enjoy
i hope yu come up
another one soonnn
thnaks 4 pm
muah
bless yu

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