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Zahra

@-Zahra15-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#51

oh this was so sad...maan's wish had come true...he lost his life before geet lost hers...hnx for the pm...

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SaJan-SaJan

@SaJan-SaJan

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: maanddy

Thank you so much babes, you are my one loyal reader, how can i forget you dear ? 😊 From the very beginning, you were with me, in all my OS and SS, you always supported me, thank you so much dear ! 🤗

Love

Maddy 😊

U r most welcome...

Thnx a lot 4 appreciating... 😊

I truly love ur os n ss... nw looking forwad 2 read d next one...

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alu5123

@alu5123

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#53

You are so good at expressing your sorrow, I'm sure all the readers felt the pain you are going through & you have this great gift of writting whcih is helping you through a tough time. No chappals this time but this hope that you feel in a happier mood soon.

Please add me to your pM list would love to read more

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hopehot

@hopehot

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#54

it was deplorable, distressful, grievous, lamentable, unfortunate, woeful; discomforting, discomposing, disquieting, distressing, disturbing, perturbing; affecting, moving, poignant, touching; discouraging, disheartening, dispiriting

heartening, heartwarming, inspiring, stimulating, stirring, uplifting; agreeable, delightful, enjoyable, pleasant, pleasing, pleasurable, satisfying, welcome; exhilarating, thrilling

all at the same time.

oh yes and

plz add me to ur pm list

i love all ur writings

plz,

Edited by hopehot - 14 years ago

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rockin_gal

@rockin_gal

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#55

Awww 😭 😭 tht was sooo saaddd... i understand the pain tht a person goes through in cancer as my aunt has it too... sorry 2 hear abt ur dad and bro having cancer but atleast thank god tht ur dad is better ... anyways great job writing it 😊 but im still in tht depressing mood 😒 ... yet i luv the story & abt ur ff.. it luks good & i wud luv 2 read it so do pm me... 😛..

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ambbiha

@ambbiha

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#56

omg my eyes are teary

awesome update

continue soon

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maaneetfanatic

@maaneetfanatic

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#57

Very well written..wow im speechless..what an ending...plz PM in the future when u write other OS, SS or FF..thanks😃

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Chelsha

@Chelsha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#58

I know from the intro itself that its going to be a sad one. But knowing this truth didnt help me in any way to stop my bitter cry for a long time.
I had this fear of losing my near and dear ones from my childhood days after losing my father on a fateful day due to heart attack.
When someone in my family fall ill seriously [my mom often does] i pray to god as Maan did,'oh god take away my life first. I cant live without my dear ones.'
When reality hits cruelly on our face, we can never escape that pain.
Maan is granted his wish by God, but without him even a single breathe on this earth is going to be hell for Geet tho' she is going to die very soon.
Is it a boon or a curse?
I am very sorry dear that you had gone thro' all these fear and pain for your dear ones. Love you Maddy for writing this OS and if you can pls add me in your pm baby.

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minnie_tweetie

@minnie_tweetie

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#59

simply superbbb...!
loved it to the core...well i had tears in my eyes reading ur OS...!

and ya dont forget to pm me about ur FF...will wait for it

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fourleafclover

@fourleafclover

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#60

Oh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😭😭😭

I dont know whether to feel good about the fact dat two lovers who held the other one more dear wudnt hav to live widout each other or cry out that fate played such a cruel joke on them

U managed to bring out their thoughts n emotions poignantly👏

All the best for ur upcoming ff!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!