OS: TORN AGAIN(Part 2 pg 10)

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mchopra

@mchopra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Thnku u sharmake11, sweet scorpio and serelove...Sry for the sad ending..yaar i have become an expert at sad endings now..next time pakka happy one..

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Mrunmayi Naik

@-Mayu-

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

This is an exceptional piece of writing that I have ever read on Geet forum!

The emotions; the feelings; the use of the brilliant words!👍🏼

A big Hug to you!🤗

I give you a standing ovation; lovely gal! You rock⭐️

Can you please continue this wonderful OS? I will be obliged!

Thanks!

Love

Mayuuuuuuuu<3<3

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chsweety22

@chsweety22

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+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#23

u made me speechless and even made me cry

well written

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

MY HEART IS STIL THUMPING .hOW COULD YOU KILL BOTH MAAN AND ANGEL .SO,TOUCHY AND EMOTIONAL .

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mchopra

@mchopra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

@acjanfeb: mmm i planned to kill only maan first..but then in some otehr OS the same thing had happened like maan dies and she knows that she is pregnant..i just didnt want the Tag of plaigarism.Tht like her OS i also killed Maan...so i killed both...

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Loquacious_Aash

@Loquacious_Aash

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

me linking it now...kal aaram se padhoongi..abhi mujhe neenda arahi hai..bye gn

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592851

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: mchopra
@acjanfeb: mmm i planned to kill only maan first..but then in some otehr OS the same thing had happened like maan dies and she knows that she is pregnant..i just didnt want the Tag of plaigarism.Tht like her OS i also killed Maan...so i killed both...

🤗 i request you to pweej pweej pweej pweej write something happy😳 pweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeejjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj

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mchopra

@mchopra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

Muskaan 25th ke baad..pakka..but that toh i will have to think..hehe..

aash: Take ur time..

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-jia-

@-jia-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Yes, you made me cry ...💔.Poor Geet it must be so hard to lose her husband and you killed the baby too... you are so evil....😡😭

The OS was too emotional and it touched my heart....

Loved your work.. and ur style of writing....me off to read the others now..😳

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Loquacious_Aash

@Loquacious_Aash

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#30

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shreya eveen though i knew the end u made me hope n hope n hope till the last part..ke shayad aisa na ho.....

how can u kill them both😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

but awesome os yaar......cant say i loved it😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

mere maan ko maarke tujhe loved it nahi milega...mujhe happy shappy OS ka link de abhi😆😆😆