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Friends i was wondering abt writing a ff...somedays back an idea popped in my mind...Is any one interested?????

The pesonalities of the characters are different from the serial...any one interested?????den i may continue...😛

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Posted: 14 years ago
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luv it...plz carry on...n make MAAN 2 b evil frist....dat will be interesting...tq
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ok i will post the first part soon.......
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Do it lady... Bring someone beautifull
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Geet's monologue

It was three months after their marriage he was coming to India'..He had never called herin these months''.He left for London on the day of his marriage''Everyone stopped him but Geet thought "his work is imp'I will not come in between his work'.and agreed and also made everyone agree"'''..But 2day is the day'..he will come'..I have heard a lot abt him'..but all are gossips'..i don't believe dem''I believe him truly from the bottom of my heart'..i know ppl are jealous of his success and make stories''.i know him better than others''.i know Sameera is just his friend'..nothing more'..and I m his wife''.Mrs Geet Maan Singh Khurana'..

Suddenly the bell rang and I ran down the stairs'..and opened the door'.there he was standing!!!!!!i can lose myself by just looking at him''..I hugged him tight'..it felt lyk I got my life back''.i was so happy'..but he pushed me and said

Maan:"Geet!wat is all these????at least let my enter!!!!"

Geet:"Opps sorry'.i missed u so much dat I forgot that u had a long journey'..sorry"

After some hours

Maan was sleeping and Geet was looking at him''Geet loves Maan from the bottom of her heart''She can do anything for him'''

Maan opens his eyes and sees Geet looking intently at him'..He smiles and moves towards her'..Geet smiles '.Maan pulls her in his embrace and kisses her lips passionately'..Maan comes on top of Geet and keeps kissing her'.his lips move towards her collarbone and kisses her sending tickling sensation all over her''He slowly pulls off her sari's pallu'.Geet smiles and closes her eyes''Maan rips off her blouse and pulls off her sari'..Geet shields and turns around on her stomach''.

Maan:are u embarrassed???u are my wife'and I have the right on you'..and pulls off her skirt''.Geet was in her bare essentials'..

Maan has already stripped'..Maan-Geet turn around'..but Geet was too shy''..

Maan on the other hand thought she was refusing him'refusing The Maan Singh Khurana''.he got irritated'..he forcefully turns her and pull off her bra'..and starts to love her roughly''.there was no love''.it was only physical pleasure for Maan''.Geet was getting hurt'.She pushes him and tries to get him off her'but dat makes him more aggressive''''



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Posted: 14 years ago
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i think no.........😭
ok fine i won't continue........bye ......
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ok i m updating next part
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Part 2

Geet:Maan wat are u doing…….u r hurting me…..leave me……and tries to remove her hands which were pinned to the bed by Maan

Maan:No one tells MSK what to do………Maan pushes Geet roughly and she falls down the bed

Maan: actually it was my mistake dat I married you…….with dat said he wore his trousers and shirt took his cell phone and left from there………

Geet:was sitting on the floor……she could not understand what happened?????She was just shy……..she was still a virgin……it was her first time………she was just embarrassed………Geet hears the main door open and closed and realized Maan had left……….

Geet quickly gets up and rushes 2 d washroom……..

Geet's Monologue: (self talk)Duffer…….Geet tujhe kuch samaj kyun nehi ata……he is ur husband…..he has the total right on u……..he can do anything with u…….afterall u r his wife………….Maybe I was too shy……O no Geet!u have ruined his special day…….did u see how bad his mood was…..Ok fine I will make it special…………

In the meanwhile

Maan:Sam where are you dear???

Sam:@home….sleeping………jet lag…….wat abt u????u should also be sleeping na???

Maan:Sleep????.....i m coming 2 ur house…….

Sam:Ok come fast…..bye

Maan:bye and cuts the phone…..

After sometime

Bell rings

Sam:opens the door yawning………Maan come in……..yawns

Sam:Maan,what happened????u look upset????come on……..u look tired….u sleep n d guestroom……..we will talk later…….

Maan:I know where 2 sleep and takes Sam in his arms and goes 2 her bedroom and kicks the door closed………both fell on the bed and in no time they slept………..

Khurana Mansion

Dadi:Geet ????Maan k ha hai?????

Geet:who Dadi who kahi gaye hai………

Dadi:kha????

Geet:pata nehi!!!!

Dadi:yeh kya Geet????tum yeh nehi janti tumhara pati kha hai????use to sona chahiye……kal uska New York mein presentation tha……..

Geet:was in tears……I m sorry Dadi……I will take care from now onwards……..

Geet goes 2 her room and thinks….i have 2 do something to make it up for 2days afternoon……..but what???????

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Posted: 14 years ago
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though I dont like d Idea dt Maan is cheating on Geet ..bt concept is interesting ..though I hope Maan ko jaldi se akal aa jaaye ...
bt for dis one month I cannot comment on all ur updates becoz m busy wid exams 😕
bt do cont ..😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thank you!!!!!!😊

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