Air Waves

the road is ablaze as the beast is hot on her trail...he's much closer now than he was before...but in the vastness he becomes small again...for every minute that he remains apart from her he shatters...if she could only hear his roar and how he growls in pain...then she will surely run to him; the beast can only pray...like a message sent through a bow and arrow that lands right on the bullseye...the airwaves* speak to geet from maan...yet the aimless wonderer is rendered imoble for her sadness runs too deep...yet she clings to him for dear life...and there is no doubt that she would fly to him if only she had wings...though her strength is gone the airwaves would carry her...just like they brought her maan..

*alludes to the radio frequencies

Stunned&Speechless AGAIN!

Originally posted by: Mk.Gh

Stunned&Speechless AGAIN!

You've done it .. written the scene and all the emotions in such beautiful words .. I especially loved this part:

"yet the aimless wonderer is rendered imoble for her sadness runs too deep...yet she clings to him for dear life...and there is no doubt that she would fly to him if only she had wings."

She just needs a little more strength and surely she'll be able to fly off to him!

Beautiful as usual,

Z

this scene was awesome...it was almost like i can't say any better than they did...i've been sensing for some time now that geet is hurt more because she blames herself rather than blames maan...and that is sort of is making her stay away...

Yes, I certainly would like to believe she feels she is partly at fault as well .. her guilt is also eating her up ..

i liked the way u potrayed the pain, guilt, helpness that Maaneet r going through yet their thoughts and the envy for each other r always communicated in a way or another (be it the moon and today the air waves)

Originally posted by: Mk.Gh

Yes, I certainly would like to believe she feels she is partly at fault as well .. her guilt is also eating her up ..

But after she recovers from the shock of it all .. she'll be able to step out .. perhaps converse with people .. because she's barely said a word..

The scene that really tugged at my heartstrings was when she hears his message and lays on the beg holding his picture tight to her frame.

Poor Maaneet! And it might just get worse for Maan considering Tej is a little bit cheezed about why Geet left the house! Let's see where this takes us..

Z

yes, that scene tugged at me too...that's why included that line about her clinging to him...

Originally posted by: Maya_P

i liked the way u potrayed the pain, guilt, helpness that Maaneet r going through yet their thoughts and the envy for each other r always communicated in a way or another (be it the moon and today the air waves)

Wonderful Sergeant, hats off to you again👏

I second Z in what she said too👍🏼

Originally posted by: Maaneet-is-best

Wonderful Sergeant, hats off to you again👏

I second Z in what she said too👍🏼