OS-MAANEET'S ETERNAL UNION-updated p6 - Page 4

Originally posted by: bobby13rocks

Fantabulous Spee...the way u've penned down Maaneet's instincts is really amazing..loved it to the core ...for u dear..

thank u so much sweetheart

Originally posted by: millii

owsemmmmmmm

thanks a lot dear

Originally posted by: swatichowdhury

This is sim-ply superb.... Amazingly awsesome...

thank u so much dear

yeh spandana beautiful dear...comments reserved darling...have a nice day...😊

Originally posted by: sindu1231

yeh spandana beautiful dear...comments reserved darling...have a nice day...😊

thank u so much darling

Hi lovely MAANEETIANS and CRAZIES,

I'm going to continue frm where I had stopped in the last part of OS...

For those who have not yet read the previous part but wish to read it, then please see p1 of this thread otherwise u can just read this part...

So here is MAANEET's ETERNAL UNION (Part 2)-

In the last part, MAANEET r back home back to Khurana Mansion...MAANEET's paradise...

MAANEET r disappointed hearing this and now they r walking towards their room...on the way they r passing outhouse, kitchen, hall, corridor all those special blessed and lucky places which have witnessed different stages of MAANEET's relationship, different feelings and thoughts of MAANEET in their evergreen and eternal journey...and last but not the least MAANEET r in front of their baby's room...MAANEET- baby's mama and papa both r experiencing the same feelings...they both have tears in their eyes and both enter their baby's room holding each others' hands...these were not tears of sorrow, pain or loss but these tears reflected MAANEET's deep inside feelings...MAANEET cud read each others' eyes and understand each others' unsaid words and feelings...MAANEET both spoke at the same time 'aaj se hum jabi apne baby ke baare mein sochenge humare chehre pe sirf muskurahat hoga...hum apne baby ki sirf khoobsurat, khushi aur rang birangi yaadon ko hamesha treasure karenge...hamari baby apne mama aur papa ko dukhi aur takleef mein dekhega toh usse bhi bahut dard hoga aur yeh hum kabhi nahi chahenge...isliye ab se hum apne baby ki khushi ke liye hamesha khush rahenge, phir se jeeyenge, phir se ek nayi zindagi ki shuruwad karenge'...

As soon as they enter their room, Geet sees how everything is here and there in the room...

Geet: (Geet gets so angry and mad seeing the state of room...everything is untidy) Maan yeh aapne room ka kya haal banake rakh diya hai?

Maan: Geet meine kya kiya hai Geet?

Geet:Maan aap toh kabhi kabhi bacho se bhi bachpana aur shararati karthe ho...kya haal banaya hai aapne kamre ka...babaji mere dusht dhanav ka kya hoga?!...sirf kuch dino ke liye mein yeha nahi thi aur inhone kya haal banake rakh diya hai kamre ka?!

(Maan: Maan pulls Geet towards him)...

Maan: kya kuch din???!!!...Geet poore ek mahina Geet aur tum keh rahi ho sirf kuch din...aur ek baat sabse zaroori baat Geet ab mein kabhi bhi tumhe kudh se door jaane nahi doonga toh aise mein tumhara dusht dhanav ka jo bhi hoga woh bahut acha hi hoga kyunki tum jo rahogi hamesha tumhare dusht dhanav ke saath!...agar mein tumse shararat nahi karunga toh kya raaste pe jaa rahi ladkiyon ke saath karunga???!!!

Maan: Geet agar mein sudhar jaunga toh tumhara kya hoga Mishti?! (Maan teasing Geet with his eyes)

Both r so lost in each other and that is when Nakul knocks the door...MAANEET come back to their senses...Nakul informs them that he has prepared dinner and he has some work so he is also going out...so now MAANEET r all alone in Khurana Mansion...

Once nakul leaves, Geet then sees how Maan has spread Geet's photos everywhere and even her dupattas and sarees and even sees how Maan had hit his hand against the wall and hurt himself for hurting his Geet his Misthi (unintentionally and unknowingly)...his blood had dropped on Geet's dupattas and sarees which he had spread everywhere...seeing her Maan's blood Geet's heart and soul were bleeding...Geet's tears were flowing...(someone had dropped a needle by mistake so when Geet is looking and feeling each duppata and saree, this needle pierces her tender fingers and her blood flows and this blood of hers drops on her Maan's blood (Maan's blood which was on her dupatta and saree)...seeing his Mishti's blood, Maan feels the pain and gets really worried...

(Once again MAANEET r connected even thru their blood...)

Geet: (she is still in tears)...agar mein yehi baat aapse kahu toh?...Maan aap hamehsa kehte ho na ki aap hamesha muje muskuratha hua dekhna chahte hai...toh phir aap apne aap ko aise kyun saza dete ho?...aise kyun kudh ko dard pahunchate ho?...aapko itni takleef mein dekhe apki Mishti kaise khush reha sakthi hai?...aur Maan jab aap mere saath hai muje kisi baat ki fikar karne ki koi zaroorat hi nahi hai...muje pata hai ki aap hamesha mere aur har musibat aur dard ke beech mein himmat banke kada rahenge...muje pata hai ki mera Maan kudh ko chot pahuncha saktha hai lekin woh kabhi bhi apni Mishti ko ek choti si karoch bhi aane nahi dega...

Also Geet tells Maan "waise Maan agar dekha jaaye toh meri laparwai ke liye aap hi zimmendar ho!!!...mein itni laparwai isliye hu kyunki muje pata hai ki aap hamehsa muje sambalne ke liye rahenge...mein Maan ki Geet hu isliye muje kisi bhi baat ki fikar karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai...(Geet has put her hands around her Maan's neck and teasing Maan) toh ab bataiye Maan urf Driver Balwant Singh (lol) isme kiski ghalti hai aapki ya meri?!!!...boliye boliye"...

MAANEET wipe each others' tears...

Maan k*sses Geet's twinkling magical and divine eyes, rosy cheeks, forehead and MAANEET hug each other compassionately and passionately (both have closed their eyes and r lost in each others' baahon ki darmiyan)...

MAANEET open their eyes and there is darkness everywhere in the room...they r standing close to the window so moonlight is the only source of light entering room and MAANEET r able to see only each others' beautiful and divine faces with the help of moonlight...but otherwise there is pitch darkness in the room...

MAANEET had hurt each other's feet in Amritsar...Maan had burnt his feet walking on that sacred fire at dargah and also Geet had got hurt when glass piece had pierced her foot)

MAANEET r trying to get candles out but in the meantime Maan hurts his leg by dashing against some table bcuz it's very dark in the room...

Geet: yeha mein pareshan ho rahi hu aur abhi bhi aapko mazak sooj raha hai?...

Maan aap aise kyun chal rahe hai?

Geet:...aaha aaha maana ki aap Maan Singh Khurana hai lekin aap bhi insaan hai na?!...koi lohe ka machine tode hai ki aapko koi dard nahi hoga?!...ab bachpana chodiye aur muje jadi se dikhayi ki aapko kya hua hai?...aap jhoot mat boliye...

Geet: (Geet's angry and naaraz wala look)...Maan aap phir se meri taang kheech rahe hai...aur aapko mera fikar karna yeh sab mazaak lagtha hai...toh theek hai mein aapse kuch nahi poochungi...ab kush?...aur meine yeha se jaa rahi hu...

(When Geet is about to leave, Maan holds Geet's dupatta and pulls her towards him and pins her against the door...)

Maan: yeh lo ab meri Mishti ko meri mazak se bhi problem ho rahi hai?!

Geet: Maan muje jaane dijiye...mein aapse koi baat nahi karna chahthi hu...aur iss baar aap muje apni meethi meethi baaton se nahi mana sakthe ho...samje aap...aapko apni fikar bilkul nahi hai aur jab mein aapki fikar karthi hu toh aapko mazak sujtha hai...

Maan (thinking in his mind)...arre iss baar shayad kuch jyaadha hi mazaak ho gaya hai...muje Geet ko sab kuch bata dena chahiye warna baad mein meri chot ke baare mein pata chalega toh woh bahut naaraz hogi...

Geet theek hai mein tumhe dikhaunga ki mere piar mein kya hua hai...lekin tumhe mujse wada karna hoga ki tum nahi gabraogi...

Hearing Maan's words, Geet is very scared worried and anxious her heartbeat has stopped now to wat has happened to her Maan...

Geet: Maan ab aap jaldi se dikhayi...

Maan shows his burnt feet...

Geet: Maan aapka pair toh table se takraya hai toh phir aapka pair kaise jal gaya?...yeh sab kab hua?...kaise hua?...aur aapne dawai lagai bhi ya nahi?...aur iske baare mein aapne muje ab tak kyun nahi bataya hai?

Geet's tears start flowing once again seeing how her Maan had burnt in the fire of pain, guilt, tadap, helplessness...Geet can understand and feel Maan's emotional state when all this unpleasant and unfortunate incident had happened between them...Geet's tears were flowing on Maan's wounds...Geet's tears were also of pain and guilt...seeing Maan's pain, Geet was more hurt than Maan himself who was hiding his pain even frm her...

Geet: Maan aapne phir se aisa kiya hai...aap hamesha andar hi andar har pal marthe ho har pal itne tadapte ho har pal itna dard sehte ho...aap mujse bhi yeh saari baate share nahi karthe ho...aapko zindagi mein jo bhi dard, takleef aur pareshani hui hai woh sirf meri wajah se hui hai...meine aapko kabhi bhi khushi nahi de sakhi Maan...isse acha hota ki mein aapke zindagi mein kabhi aayi hi nahi hoti...kam se kam tab aap itne mushkilo aur dard mein nahi jee rahe hote...

Maan: Geet tum aisi kaise bol sakhti ho Geet...agar tum meri zindagi mein nahi aati toh mein dusht dhanav se phir se insaan kaise bantha...agar tum nahi aati toh mein phir se kaise jeetha Geet...sirf tumne tumhari fikar tumhari sachayi tumhari achayi tumhari bolapan tumhara bachpana tumhari pyaar ki wajah se Maan ab phir se jeene laga hai, muskurane laga hai, sapne dekhne laga hai aur har woh ehsaas ko mehsoos kar raha hai aur usse express bhi kar raha hai jin sabse woh pehle bahut door rehtha tha...tum meri zindagi mein woh jyothi, pari, chandni aur rainbow banke aayi jisne meri zindagi ki har khali raat, nafrat, kadwahat, ghussa, akelepan ko door bagaya aur meri zindagi mein sirf khushiyon pyaar aur meethe aur khoobsurat sapno ki khushboo aur rang bikaraya (spread kiya) hai...

Geet is smiling thru tears hearing her Maan's words sweetest melody to her mind, heart and soul...

Maan cannot see his Mishti in tears so he wipes her tears his pearls...

Geet quickly goes and gets medicine...Geet is trying to hide her tears frm her Maan but Maan can feel her tears her pain which r flowing for him...

Geet is applying medicine on Maan's wounds...more than the medicine, it is Geet's tender touch, her care, her love which is soothing and healing Maan's physical wounds as well as his emotional pain...

Geet: acha ji toh aapko laghtha hai ki sirf jab aap dard ya chot pahunchake aate ho toh tabhi mein aapki fikar karthi hu?...kya mein aapki fikar har waqt nahi karthi?...babaji dekha aapne Maan mere baare mein kya sochthe hai? (Geet's smiling full shararat smile but trying to hide her smile and she is very happy that she is leg-pulling Maan once again)

Geet: aapka bas chaltha toh aap muje bhi aapk ki tarah kanjoos banake rakh dete...mera matlab hai baat karne ke maamle mein!...aap har lafz aise soch sochke gin ginke bolte hai jaise aapka har lafz koi kohinoor ka heera hai aur agar aap jyaadha baat karenge toh aapki treasure khaali ho jaayegi!...babaji mere Maan ko kuch samjaayi!!!...

Geet: aap itni jaldi chid gaya kya?!...yeh lo mere Maan ki jwalamukhi ghussa hamesha pudakne ke liye tayyar rehata hai!...

Maan: Geet ab toh tum bilkul mujse baat mat karo...

Maan is still not facing Geet...

Geet: Geet hugs Maan from behind and k*sses his back...

Maan mein aapse ek sachi baat bolu...aapka lafz hi nahi balki aapki har baat har ehsaas har soch aap kudh bhi heera hai aur aap woh heera hai jo bahut khaas aur precious hai aur mein iss duniye ki sabse daulatmand insaan hu kyunki mere paas aap hai mere paas sabse kheemti aur anmol heera hai mere paas apka saath hai aapka pyar hai aapka care, trust, understanding, respect, pride hai...

Geet ki inn meethi aur pyaar bhari baaton se Maan ka ghussa melt ho gaya...once again Geet acted as water who cud calm down Maan's burning fire volcano like anger...

Maan turns around and hugs his Geet...

Geet: nahi babaji...Maan aap yeh kya bol rahe hai?!...kya iss ghar mein ek dusht dhanav kam hai ki mein bhi aapke jaise ban jao?!!!...tab bechari Dadima Anni Adi Pinky Nakul ka kya haal hoga?...unke zindagi mein ek Zaalim singh khurana hi kaafi hai!!!

Maan humdono sach mein paagal hai!!!...hamare liye yeh naam bahut suit karega 'Ajab Maan ki Gazab Geet!!!...

MAANEET both r smiling...

In the meanwhile power has come back...

Maan: Geet tum kuch der ke liye aaram kar lo hum raat ko bahaar jaayenge...

Maan: nahi Geet muje neend nahi aarahi hai aur waise bhi muje bahut kaam hai...itne dino tak mein yeha nahi tha toh bahut kaam baaki hai...

Geet:Maan mein bhi aapki madad karungi aise mein kaam jaldi hi khatam hojaayega Maan

Finally Geet agrees to take rest...

Geet is sleeping and Maan is doing his office work...

While doing his office work, Maan notices some wound on Geet's foot...Maan goes close to Geet to see wat is it...Maan sees a deep cut...Maan gets really worried so he tries to wake up Geet...

Maan: Geet jaldi utt jao Geet...

Geet: mein toh abhi abhi soyi hu aur aap muje phir se jaga rahe ho...muje aur todi der sone dijiye please Maan...

Maan feels it is better for her to take rest so he himself goes and gets medicine...Maan is gently applying medicine ensuring that it does not disturb Geet's sleep...Maan has finished applying medicine and it is already late so he decides to wake up Geet...even now Geet is not waking up so Maan goes and gets ice...Maan has a very shararati idea to wake up his Misthi!!!...Maan is placing ice cubes on Geet's feet and this is giving her a ticklish cold feeling...Geet is trying to get rid of ice and everytime she is trying to get rid of ice, Maan is placing more ice cubes and having a good laugh and masti seeing how his Geet's expressions r changing bcuz of his shararat...finally Geet cannot tolerate more than this and she wakes up...

Maan: mere liye meri Geet meri Khwab ko khwab mein sothe hue dekhne se jyaada khoobsurat pyaara aur zaroori kaam koi aur ho hi nahi saktha...samji meri 'sleeping beauty'...

MAANEET both r smiling...

Also Geet sees how Maan has applied medicine to his love while she was in her sweet MAANEET dreams...Geet smiles at Maan and hugs him...Maan smiles back and reciprocates with a hug...

Maan: Geet bahut der ho gayi hai Geet...tum jaldi se tayyar ho jao...

Geet: Maan hame kaha jaana hai?

Maan: tum pehle tayyar toh ho jao baad mein tumhe sab kuch batanyunga...

Geet mujje kuch kaam hai mein kuch der mein wapas aayunga aur tab tak tum tayyar rehana

Geet: theek hai Maan par aap jaldi aayiga...

Maan: Geet fikar mat karo mein jaldi hi aayunga...

Geet is wearing a very beautiful white saree and Maan a black shirt...

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Maan has come back and is mesmerized by Geet's angelic and divine beauty...he cannot take his eyes off her...Maan is walking towards her completely lost in her eyes and her beauty...Now Maan is so close to her that now there is no space between them for even any breeze between them...both can now feel each others' heartbeat and breath...Geet is blushing and Maan can see it and feel it...Geet closes her eyes...

Maan goes close to Geet and whispers Geet 'jab tak mein na kahu tum apni aanken mat kholna'

Geet: par kyun Maan?

Maan: Geet mere liye...(As soon as Maan says this Geet does not ask anymore questions bcuz Geet can do anything and everything for her Maan without asking any questions...Geet cares and loves her Maan more than herself...Geet trusts her Maan more than herself, nature and destiny...Geet ke liye Maan se badkar kuch nahi hai just like Maan ke liye Geet se badkar kuch nahi hai...)

Maan carries his Geet in his arms and takes her to terrace...Geet has no clue to where Maan is taking her...

Maan asks Geet to open her eyes and Geet is stunned and very happy to see and experience paradise in her Maan's arms and in the surroundings...

Seeing the setting, Geet thinks Maan has made such a beautiful romantic arrangement for MAANEET but then Maan is like Geet 'meine yeh sab tumhari raaya jaane ke liye kiya hai...

Maan:haan Geet (Maan smiling inside his naughty and smile full of shararat thinking how he is fooling his Mishti)...Geet mein soch raha tha agar Khurana Constructions ek nayi 7 star hotel khole toh aur usme rooms ki aur unki balcony ki arrangements sab aisa ho toh kaise rahega Geet?!

In the meanwhile it starts raining...MAANEET were getting drenched in rain...MAANEET getting drenched in rain rain of mutual trust, understanding, pride, respect, admiration, worship, rain of love, passion, longingness, desire, feeling of submission...

(Listen to these songs if u wish to before reading the next part...

Chand chupa baadal mein from Hum dil de chuke sanam

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VOJWbYg8Rxg

or

Bheeghi bheeghi raaton mein pyaari pyaari baton mein aisi barsaaton mein aisa laghta hai from Ajnabee

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j6ss_Uuf8JM&feature=related

or

Jo haal dil ka idhar ho raha hai woh haal dil ka udhar ho raha hai frm Sarfarosh

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zMaN9lWpi98&feature=related

or

Tumhe jo meine dekha tumhe jo meine jaana jo hosh tha woh toh gaya from Main hoon na

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r5L0u1OJRuo&feature=related

or

Meri pehli mohabbat hai from de dana dhan)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zs5-UDCkiDs

Or all songs)...

MAANEET r lost in each others' eyes...MAANEET have showed us that eyes r the most divine sacred pure true dreamy and magical mode of communication...

Now both r experiencing the same feelings...love, passion, feeling of submission...

Maan carries his Geet his angelic beauty his princess his sunshine in his arms and places her on bed decorated with flowers...MAANEET become one...today was MAANEET ki milan ki raat...

Saanso ko saanso mein from Hum Tum

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Vlebyc5RvBI&feature=related

or

In lamho ki daaman mein from Jodha Akbar

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EN5_OM0uONA

Mere haath mein tera haath ho from Fanaa

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tS8pjB1K24g

or

Aayire aayire sajni from Vivaah

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SH5R-sVRGsY

or

Hum saath saath hain janmo ke saathi Hum saath saath hai title track

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RpCFCkw1mO0

Or all songs)

Today once again water has connected MAANEET...today once again water has brought them closer...19^th April 2010 was the special chosen divine and sacred day when our MAANEET met each other for the first time and v got our eternal lake scene and our MAANEET's eternal saga began and will continue forever... 19^th april was the special blessed and lucky day when two strangers Geet and Maan met to be together forever...Taveez was destiny's decision, wish and dream that Geet and Maan two strangers (both who had a dreadful horrifying and painful past and who were both lonely and sabse paraye, deprived of love, care, sweetness, colours and flowers's fragrance in their respective lives) shud meet, and become sabse apne, and give each other the care, love, happiness and fulfill all their wishes and dreams which they truly deserved and which belonged to only them, and also it was destiny's decision that MAANEET shud act as the medicines with miraculous healing power on each other and who wud wipe away every bit of pain, anger, bitterness, loneliness, nightmares from each others' lives, heart, soul and mind forever...it was destiny's decision that Geet and Maan who were incomplete without each other were meant to become MAANEET and complete each other and hence create an eternal saga MAANEET's eternal and evergreen journey the most heart-touching and soul-touching divine sacred and magical journey that has taken all MAANEETIANS to MAANEET paradise since the first time MAANEET have come into our lives...

19th april 2010 was the auspicious day when Geet and Maan met to become MAANEET one heart one soul one breath one life and they r indeed a couple truly made in heaven...water symbolic of divinity, purity and truth and victory of MAANEET's atooth rishta of love and care, mutual respect, admiration, trust, understanding faith, pride and prayer for each other...

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Also today once again along with water, special chosen and lucky cupids and connecting dors in MAANEET's eternal journey, namely, blood, rain, starlit and moonlit sky, flowers, candles, sweet melody mahi maahi were blessed to witness and experience MAANEET's ETERNAL UNION...

MAANEET have shown us that people don't fall in love but people rise in love and that to rise in love to such an extent that v all feel like admiring, respecting and worshipping MAANEET and their eternal pure and true feelings and thoughts for each other...

MAANEET ki ab har saans har dhadkan har soch har ehsaas har yaad har sapna har haqeeqat sirf ek dusare ke liye hai...this is MAANEET's paradise where v all MAANEETIANS live, smile thru tears, and cherish each and every moment...

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p.s.

Sorry if I have hurt anyone's sentiments in any way...

Please bear with my mistakes...comments and criticisms r always welcome...

Thanks a lot for reading it...

Love,

Spandana

(Proud to be a MAANEETIAN and a CRAZIE)

Spandana update dear ...kya likha hai tumne I loved it . At last tumhe yaad hai ki Maan was walking on read coal...CVS tau bhool gaya ...thanks dear for the awesome update...

spee great update dear loved it..