THE DARK SIDE: VAMPIRE MAAN

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Posted: 14 years ago
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This track is written to explain the current actions taken by Maan.

Maan, yes he pushed away his Geet, yes he took that action which was the last thing he could do on this earth, his only love, his only life, he pushed away his own life, he sucked his own blood because he had fear that he would suck her blood out of anger, he didn't want to ruin her life, he knew that his rage was uncontrollable, the best thing to save her from this animosity was to keep her away, like for the vampire, the only way to save his human love was to be away from that love, he had to do it, for his Geet's sake, so that he wouldn't suck her blood, he wouldn't mark scars on her skin, he wouldn't let out his sucking blood instincts on her, he couldn't hurt his Geet, if she wouldn't have left, he had to leave house, because he couldn't see her under the same roof anymore, he couldn't tolerate the fact that somebody had hurt her so badly, and she could forgive him, somebody who had ruined her life, and she could forgive him, somebody who had affected her life so badly that she could have lost her life, but she still had forgiven him, it was unacceptable for him.

After all whatever happened with his Geet, how could he forgive Dev? She could but he couldn't forgive Dev, because for Maan, Geet was the angel sent by God to him, and he was supposed to protect her but he couldn't protect her from Dev as at that time he didn't know her, he was already in the guilt that he couldn't stop Dev from whatever he did to Geet, he wished that he could have known her before Dev came into her life, and Dev had disrespected that angel, but forgiving for his deeds was the last thing Maan could do, because forgiving Dev was like disrespecting the God, and how could you disrespect the God.

Touching her cheeks was like stabbing on Maan's chest, like kidnapping somebody's kid, how could Dev touched her cheeks?. Maan couldn't see anything wrong happening with Geet anymore, he couldn't take it, he couldn't live with this fact, if it was in his hand then he would have murdered Dev but of course he wasn't the murderer.

His anger was like the third eye of Shiva, once it was open, nobody could save earth, once Maan's anger flourished, he could suck anybody's blood and he didn't want that Geet would become victim of his vampire instinct hence he let her go to save her from his vampire instinct.

SEJAL

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mitzi11 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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beautiful well written my dear thanks pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome luvd how you showed Maan moves as a vampires point ov view
Thx 4 the PM Xx...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks for the Pm.

Very well written Sejal👏

Waiting for your update on Broken flower.😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very very well written👏
This is what geet needs to realize
So cvs please dun ruin characters more
And give us our lovely GHSP back
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Well said!👏 You explained his situation perfectly!! ppl really need to read this post!! && I hope cvs dun only show maan apologizing but Geet should also apologize!!
Edited by mrs.MSK_GurTi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice ...

btw tum nay Maan ko vampire bana diya ... haye rabba kia hoga is larki ka ... 😆

love
Sana
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very beautifully written dear..loved it..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very well written

wonderfully described the instincts of maan

thnx for the PM

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sindu555

nice ...


btw tum nay Maan ko vampire bana diya ... haye rabba kia hoga is larki ka ... 😆

love
Sana



Abhi too dekho, aage aage, main Maan ka kya haal karti hu 😉

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