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Posted: 14 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: lily_k25



😆 ..well u did study me well 😛
i will never leave maan yaar..he is still mine..if at all i leave anyday..mein maan ko tumhe sompkar jaaonga...aakhir hum dono ka maan jo hai....till then..me not leaving maan.me re living maan by watching old episodes than the crap they r showing now..

ya..i heard that maan gave awesome slap to dev yesterday..👏 ..my angry young man of a lion..luv him
😳



u know i'm a good student & great learner..& i know u since ages😉 sure i did study you well

awwww.. okay this makes me finally forgive for that old comment of yours that had me mad at you...aaj bacha maaf kiya.😆

exactly so i said he roared & pounced on that jackal ...aka Dev 😆


arre kabhi kabhi skype par bhi darshan dey dena ..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32

Crap ! Why i have to be always late in replying your wonderful posts ! I hate myself, for being always LATE ! 😡

Okay, Better late than never ! ( Pampering my little, soft😲 heart !) Coming to the point, dear !


Oh My God ! 👏



My Orient Fan,

you seemed little sad and depressed, anyways, i was expecting this from you, coz only you can come up with such a sensible and sentimental thoughts !


So, here it is,


" His rude words against women & their weakness made her want to defend herself & her kind.

Seeds of self respect that her family, her Darji & brother who had curbed from its roots, her parents who did not let it grow ...seeds to that self respect in a woman got sown & watered by this arrogant man on their very first meeting.


Not love for his brother, concern for his family , family name & goodwill ...not even his old Dadi's pleadings make him melt & he sends his brother to jail to bring justice to Geet.


Quest that died in the eyes of law by lack of evidence but never in his heart. He did not forgive Dev his sins , he punished his brother by turning him out from being a Khurana heir to now a nobody.


Even owing his life to Dev does not make him forgive nor forget Dev's sins nor is his trust restored in him.


He knew this should not be, he did not trust Dev.

His inner battle that made him lock himself from Geet in attempt to shield her from it & himself trying to compose his thoughts.

He loses his battle & himself when he sees Dev move around scot free & enjoy the auspicious occasion with 'his' family.

With shock & disgust he watches Annie play holi with Dev, then Dadi.

He is shocked to see these two women he loves & respect having so readily accepted Dev.


Tilak that is mark of respect shown towards the person.

Geet doing tilak of Dev.


A sight that makes blood freeze in his veins, his heart stop.
Did he see it right!
Did he see the woman who refused to forgive her sinner now actually forget his sins not alone forgive him!


He roars in anger, pride & pain - Anger at what he saw & his own helplessness at it; Pride in his love, his woman whose fight for justice had him respect her & Pain to have lived to face this moment.


He knows he has again been misunderstood that his anger was not towards her but for her. He does not go to stop her from walking away, nor explain himself.


How can she be so blind to his pain & only see his anger ... how can she ever had loved him, loves him but fail to understand him ? How can she take his words on face value & not take into account the emotions they hold in them?


He watched his life fade away infront of his own eyes that are now blank of any emotion as his heart, his soul have been ripped apart from him.
"




Okay, nandu ! That was wow ! Speechless, sad, emotional and heart wrenching !


You are an Artist, Nandu ! 👏 ❤️ ⭐️


Trust me, you have it in you !

It is an art to represent your thought through words, and you are damn good in that, like an ace ! You can play with your words, and convince anyone with you, even a negative mind turns into positive one !

It is a journey, an emotion and sentimental journey, to read your thoughts and analysis !

If, writing and presenting is an art then, i will must say, that to read and to understand the words and depth of the thoughts, is also an art ! Only people can make out the hidden sadness and depth of the words, and you rock in it !


I have always loved your creations, but this one made me feel more senti, as maan's mental state was SO CLEARLY explained, like i was going through his mind and heart and the battle within himself, i really very loved it !


And, yes i can understand, you are very busy in exams, so you do not have much time, still you managed to deliver such an extraordinary emotional WRITE UP !


I loved it ! You rock ! Keep them coming, never ever stop writing this beautiful and wonderful write ups ! I love that and i demand that !


And a huge 🤗 for this !



👏



Love,

Your Bajaj Fan 😉





Edited by maanddy - 14 years ago
Silentsoul thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
rres......I have toread it first
nanditasingh thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: maanddy


Crap ! Why i have to be always late in replying your wonderful posts ! I hate myself, for being always LATE ! 😡

Okay, Better late than never ! ( Pampering my little, soft😲 heart !) Coming to the point, dear !


Oh My God ! 👏



My Orient Fan,

you seemed little sad and depressed, anyways, i was expecting this from you, coz only you can come up with such a sensible and sentimental thoughts !


So, here it is,


" His rude words against women & their weakness made her want to defend herself & her kind.

Seeds of self respect that her family, her Darji & brother who had curbed from its roots, her parents who did not let it grow ...seeds to that self respect in a woman got sown & watered by this arrogant man on their very first meeting.


Not love for his brother, concern for his family , family name & goodwill ...not even his old Dadi's pleadings make him melt & he sends his brother to jail to bring justice to Geet.


Quest that died in the eyes of law by lack of evidence but never in his heart. He did not forgive Dev his sins , he punished his brother by turning him out from being a Khurana heir to now a nobody.


Even owing his life to Dev does not make him forgive nor forget Dev's sins nor is his trust restored in him.


He knew this should not be, he did not trust Dev.

His inner battle that made him lock himself from Geet in attempt to shield her from it & himself trying to compose his thoughts.

He loses his battle & himself when he sees Dev move around scot free & enjoy the auspicious occasion with 'his' family.

With shock & disgust he watches Annie play holi with Dev, then Dadi.

He is shocked to see these two women he loves & respect having so readily accepted Dev.


Tilak that is mark of respect shown towards the person.

Geet doing tilak of Dev.


A sight that makes blood freeze in his veins, his heart stop.
Did he see it right!
Did he see the woman who refused to forgive her sinner now actually forget his sins not alone forgive him!


He roars in anger, pride & pain - Anger at what he saw & his own helplessness at it; Pride in his love, his woman whose fight for justice had him respect her & Pain to have lived to face this moment.


He knows he has again been misunderstood that his anger was not towards her but for her. He does not go to stop her from walking away, nor explain himself.


How can she be so blind to his pain & only see his anger ... how can she ever had loved him, loves him but fail to understand him ? How can she take his words on face value & not take into account the emotions they hold in them?


He watched his life fade away infront of his own eyes that are now blank of any emotion as his heart, his soul have been ripped apart from him.
"




Okay, nandu ! That was wow ! Speechless, sad, emotional and heart wrenching !


You are an Artist, Nandu ! 👏 ❤️ ⭐️


Trust me, you have it in you !

It is an art to represent your thought through words, and you are damn good in that, like an ace ! You can play with your words, and convince anyone with you, even a negative mind turns into positive one !

It is a journey, an emotion and sentimental journey, to read your thoughts and analysis !

If, writing and presenting is an art then, i will must say, that to read and to understand the words and depth of the thoughts, is also an art ! Only people can make out the hidden sadness and depth of the words, and you rock in it !


I have always loved your creations, but this one made me feel more senti, as maan's mental state was SO CLEARLY explained, like i was going through his mind and heart and the battle within himself, i really very loved it !


And, yes i can understand, you are very busy in exams, so you do not have much time, still you managed to deliver such an extraordinary emotional WRITE UP !


I loved it ! You rock ! Keep them coming, never ever stop writing this beautiful and wonderful write ups ! I love that and i demand that !


And a huge 🤗 for this !



👏



Love,

Your Bajaj Fan 😉








Firstly your presence alone is enough to make me happy...its heartwarming to know such a sweet simple person & an incredible writer. Above everything else such a humble person & adorable friend...

you see i love u too much to let go of you. (pm ko goli maro)

I'm humbled & honored but i have to say ....

'Beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder' - to me Keats is always right.

My use of words could be futile if you did not have an mind to feel my thoughts, give room to me & a chance to speak what i feel.....
So its not me but you & my all other friends who are responsible for the posts, if you guys dint inspire & encourage me i could have never attempted ...

Its your eyes & mind that does not read my thoughts alone but feels it & so the bond we share.

Thank you for being such a great support always.
Big Bear Hug for you my Bajaj Fan 🤗

yours only
Orient Fan😃





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Posted: 14 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: nanditasingh




Firstly your presence alone is enough to make me happy...its heartwarming to know such a sweet simple person & an incredible writer. Above everything else such a humble person & adorable friend...

you see i love u too much to let go of you. (pm ko goli maro)

I'm humbled & honored but i have to say ....

'Beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder' - to me Keats is always right.

My use of words could be futile if you did not have an mind to feel my thoughts, give room to me & a chance to speak what i feel.....

So its not me but you & my all other friends who are responsible for the posts, if you guys dint inspire & encourage me i could have never attempted ...

Its your eyes & mind that does not read my thoughts alone but feels it & so the bond we share.

Thank you for being such a great support always.
Big Bear Hug for you my Bajaj Fan 🤗

yours only
Orient Fan😃







SO RIGHT ! 👏


Okay, PM ko mar di goli ! 😆 Happy ?

Love you so much !

❤️

🤗






Edited by maanddy - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: maanddy



SO RIGHT ! 👏


Okay, PM ko mar di goli ! 😆 Happy ?

Love you so much !

❤️

🤗








I'm always right 😉

Love U 🤗

avnee thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#37
Hats off to your analysis of the present situation. I second your thoughts word to word. What a clean and apt analysis of Maan's vulnerable state of mind.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
Nandita, beautifully written. As much as you saw life fade away, it vanished in seconds for Geet too.
Lets look forward now.....😊Nandita. WIthout hurting your feelings. A futuristic look at Geet.
The most positive energy for Geet from this seperation would be her seeking ways to survive in this very harsh, tough world of Delhi. And since she has defied the vulnerability of life and sought work earlier to keep her baby alive, she will now defy all negative forces by wanting to live this new and changed life herself. Holi has indeed transformed her. She wanted that for Maan also, but unfortunately Maan had his own rules to this game of life.
Maan has everything, but Geet has nothing. There we will find her will to seek and survive. A fabulous journey it will be for her.
She will flash back her times and memories with Maan, but will not allow that to withdraw her to darkness or allow hurdles to defeat her purposes.
Maan will grapple with darkness and be lost in it. He it is who will seek Geet for his life, his breath, his heartbeat is only Geet.
Cheers😊.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#39

Nandita…brilliant post you are truly gifted. You have captured his emotions, fears and his POV perfectly. The angry that he emotes is to cover and hide the deep and pure love has for Geet and the fear of losing her. He has said many, many times that he cannot live without her and it's because of her that he is alive again. I can also see Geet's POV that she can forgive Dev because of Maan's love, strength and support. She has said many times that Maan has given her the right to live again to be strong to stand up firm and fight those who are against her. She can face the world with him by her side and I am sure it's vice versa as well. Sure this will be Maan's dialogue soon "why she is always proving me wrong and her right" 😆 Two pure hearts sharing the same beautiful soul is sure to reunite.😍 Can't wait! Love you.🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
@lovetheserial- thank you for the appreciation....i loved reading your thoughts too..

sorry but i would rather love to see her explore herself ...within herself ..same i would wish for Maan though i don't see him grapple in darkness how can i when he has been the source of light to have brought her out from her dark past.....

indeed it will be a beautiful journey if it is 'their journey' coz alone they will head no where
though i wrote for Maan i feel the plight of Geet too ...
so i nowhere can see her happy & want a life without Maan ... especially at this point in their life.

they are still married ... so its their journey not his or hers alone

thank you for commenting..😊

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Hey all of you welcome all in Maaneet sweet world one more painful story i hear " Kitni girhein kholi hai maine" a nd feel this going perfect

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