FF:Beginnings and Endings.(Part 5 Pg 11) - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
#11
luved every bit of it
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Posted: 14 years ago
#12

Its a good attempt 👍🏼but already sad with track in serial. 😭

I think Turn it into SS🤓 just so we enjoy a version of Maneet's reunion in a different light.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#13
awesome..........do convert it to FF.........do PM me 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14
awesome and fantastic
plzz do convert it in ff
love ur writing
plzz PM me the next part and add me to PM list


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Posted: 14 years ago
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people Pls add me into ur BUDDY LIST it will become easier for me to PM u...next part up in few hrs pakka..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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its prety nice
add me 4 PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
#17
Nice ff... Actually hone yahi waala hai....lol.. Continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Note: People I will keep changing from Maan to GEET so u
have to consider that when reading it. The current part is from Maan. It
important or u will not be able to understand the story from both peoples point
of view and I wouldn't want that.



Since I am late..U have a treat Part 3 will be up in next
few hours...



I stood there dumbfounded. Had I really not lived up to what
I said. At that moment I saw dadi walking up to me. I knew she would have
thousands of questions to ask me. I had not only vilified my wife but also her
daughter in law and the one who had not only taught her Grandson to live again
but also she had taken over the responsibilities that dadi had been handling
for years now.



I walked away. I had no answer to offer. I had no clue what
I had done myself. I had spoken of a relationship that I knew never existed. My
insecurities had taken away from me what I feared the most, GEET. I knew I had
hurt her beyond repair and to get her back to me was something I was scared of.
No I wasn't scared of her anger, but scared if our relationship will be ever
the same again or had I broken too many pieces that it could not be mended.



"Ek baar rishte mein agar toot jaaye toh chahe uski dor jod
li jaaye par usmein ghant pad he jaati hai jise jitna chahae koshish karlo
nikalna asambhav hai."



I was in my room when I saw a letter on the bed.



Who could have left me
a letter? No body came into my room
except HER and she hadn't come into the room for all I knew.



I picked it up and saw it was her handwriting. Her handwriting that means she was around
that means she hadn't left tht means she would forgive me. If she could come
back just to leave a letter for me that means she could come back to me.



I read the letter it stated, "Maan, pichle kuch dino se main
apki baat samajh he nahi paa rahi thi. Shayad main yeh bhool gayi thi ki jis dard se main guzar rahi hoon usi dard
ko aap bhi mehsoos kar rahein honge. Aur us din "baby room" mein main kuch
zayaada he bol gayi na. Ho sake toh maaf kar dijiyega. Main is baat ka Ehsaas
kar he nahi paaayi ke aap jo kar rahein hai meri khushi mere bhale ke liye kar
rahein hain.Maine toh sirf khaali karma dekha tha, aapne toh har cheez ko apni
annkhon ke saamne jaate dekha tha..Aapko toh mere se kayi zayadda guna dard hua
hoga na.



Aur kal daadi ne hum dono ko farmhouse par bulaya par aapki
meeting ki wajah se aap pahunch nahi paye. Par jaante hain shayad accha he hai.
Agar aap pahunch jaate toh na he main who pal akele bitati us note ke saath jo
aapne likha tha aur na he main yeh kabhi samajh paati ke main kitni galat hoon.



Aapne usme kaha than a ki hum ek nayi zindgai ki shuruwat
karte hain. Toh aaj ke din se accha aur kaun sa din ho sakta hai. Aaj in rango
mein ghulkar hum sab purani yaadein peeche chod denge aur ek nayi zindagi ke
shuruvat karenge jiska har panna hum dono likhenge aur jisme ateet ki koi
parchahyi nahi hogi aur usi ateet ko apne se door karne ke liye maine dev ko
maaf kar diya hai taaki aaj ke baad who dubara kabhi humari zindagi mein dakhal
na de.



Main jaanti hoon ki mujhe aapko itni badi baat khud bataani
chahiye thi par aap so rahe the. Main aapka neeche hall mein intezaar kar rahi hoon. Chaliye ab
hum ek naye safar ke shuruvaat karte hain..



Sirf aapki aur sirf



Maan ki geet.."



I rushed down the stairs hoping against hope to find her
clad in a white suite to play holi and start a new life. But what I saw there
took my breath away. The whole compound was decorated and it seemed to be full
of plates of colors, and there were various delicacies that were lined in one
corner.



It took me a minute to realize that she had done all this
for me. She had forgotten her grief and to bring a smile upon my lips she had
not only gone out of way to decorate the house but it meant she had stayed
awake the entire night to get the decorations together.



I realised i had not
only let her down by my words but i had spoilt her plans of making me smile, and
now i knew i could never smile till i had her back with me.



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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow.............loved it..............pls ccontinue.😳........
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20
Nice words from Geet & good description 4rom U.

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