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Pratima Singh

@Rocks.Dhara

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Posted: 14 years ago

#901

hey guyzzz m going to sleep....!!
bye gud nit....love u all....byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

will catch mini TM tomorrow...!!!

sis@ missing ur poem....!!!

awesom work to all three superb writer....pls keep up the same spirit....!!!

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Tyro

@Tyro

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Posted: 14 years ago

#902

when both of them reach the door of the room...they r shocked...they see that mk has destroyed evrything in the room...the whole room looked like a mess...every vase, sowpiece, curtains, bedshhet...all were in a mess....

just then a small smile touched both of their lips./....as they remembered their first day of marriage in london...where geet had destoyed everything in their flat...

but the smile disappeared as soon as they saw each other...

both of their eyes seemed to be filled with pain...n they could see it clearly....

their chain of thought s broke as they heard mk...

mk -- with hands on her waist-- like her parents-- mk....angry... n ma..mammm.....da...da....smiling...

she saw them smiling n stopped right away to confront them....

geet -- mk ..what is this?? what have u done to the room..??

maan -- geet ...y r u yelling...bacchi hi to hai...

mk runs to maan n holds him...he takes her up in his arm....

geet -- bigado...aur spoil karo ise...

maan -- wo to maine tumhe bhi kiya tha...

he immediately shut his mouth realizing what he just said...

geet just looked at him unable to say anything...she tries to take mk away from his arm...

but mk holds maan tight ny his neck...so that geet doesnt take her away...

mk -- mk ..wa..nt....to...sta..y.yy....wi...th....da...da....

geet -- mk come here...we have to go home....

again trying to take her away...

maan is not sure what to do...even he doesnt want mk to go as she is crying badly...but he questions himself whether he has the right to stop geet frm taking mk away....

as soon as geet takes mk is her arms...(guys imagine mk hands in geet n still her legs are intact with maan...like both r holding her....geet trying to take her n maan holding her legs...)

mk starts to cry even louder...

maan -- geet stop it...shouting at her...

geet immediately leaves mk...

mk once again hugs maan tight...

maan -- i'm sorry...its just that...wo....

geet thinking since when he is at loss of words..

geet -- plz let mk sleep here for the night...plz...she is already upset...2moro i'll drop her myself..

geet cant say anything...she cant refuse him...cant refuse mk wanting to be with her dad....

she just turned away n started to leave....with pain visible in her eyes...

mk comes down from maans lap n runs towards geet...

mk -- ma..ma...aap bhi yahin ruko na...me...u... n da...da....

geet with a slight smile on her face says -- no beta...sorry...mama has to so.....but be a good girl n unhe jyada tang mat karna...

mk is so happy n hugs geet...

mk -- mama loves mk...mk loves mama....

geet -- haan beta..mama....loves mk/....

she then starts to drag maan away to the other room...

geet -- 1 min...can i talk to u??

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KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaRukmini

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+ 10

Posted: 14 years ago

#903

Originally posted by: simi91

wow the flashback scene its so sad & emotional both are hurt but specially Maan wasnt there for Muski fabulous scene pls contttttttttt❤️👍🏼

thanks dear.
yes it's sad and this part is to make maan realize his mistake

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Tyro

@Tyro

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Posted: 14 years ago

#904

Originally posted by: Rocks.Dhara
hey guyzzz m going to sleep....!!
bye gud nit....love u all....byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

will catch mini TM tomorrow...!!!

sis@ missing ur poem....!!!

awesom work to all three superb writer....pls keep up the same spirit....!!!

gud night ...sweet dreams...🥱

love u too...🤗

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KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaRukmini

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+ 10

Posted: 14 years ago

#905

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

geet just looked at him unable to say anything...she tries to take mk away from his arm...
but mk holds maan tight ny his neck...so that geet doesnt take her away...
mk -- mk ..wa..nt....to...sta..y.yy....wi...th....da...da....
geet -- mk come here...we have to go home....
again trying to take her away...
maan is not sure what to do...even he doesnt want mk to go as she is crying badly...but he questions himself whether he has the right to stop geet frm taking mk away....
as soon as geet takes mk is her arms...(guys imagine mk hands in geet n still her legs are intact with maan...like both r holding her....geet trying to take her n maan holding her legs...)
mk starts to cry even louder...
maan -- geet stop it...shouting at her...
geet immediately leaves mk...
mk once again hugs maan tight...
maan -- i'm sorry...its just that...wo....
geet thinking since when he is at loss of words..
geet -- plz let mk sleep here for the night...plz...she is already upset...2moro i'll drop her myself..
geet cant say anything...she cant refuse him...cant refuse mk wanting to be with her dad....
she just turned away n started to leave....with pain visible in her eyes...
mk comes down from maans lap n runs towards geet...
mk -- ma..ma...aap bhi yahin ruko na...me...u... n da...da....
geet with a slight smile on her face says -- no beta...sorry...mama has to so.....but be a good girl n unhe jyada tang mat karna...
mk is so happy n hugs geet...
mk -- mama loves mk...mk loves mama....
geet -- haan beta..mama....loves mk/....
she then starts to drag maan away to the other room...
geet -- 1 min...can i talk to u??

beautiful
geet ko rok uha.

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KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaRukmini

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Posted: 14 years ago

#906

Originally posted by: Rocks.Dhara
hey guyzzz m going to sleep....!!
bye gud nit....love u all....byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

will catch mini TM tomorrow...!!!

sis@ missing ur poem....!!!

awesom work to all three superb writer....pls keep up the same spirit....!!!

Good night
sweet dreams dhara.
🤗

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komlika

@komlika

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#907

Originally posted by: rsroopali

priya tu bhi adi ki tarah 400 crores pe atki hui hai
msk ke liye 400 crore kuan si badi baath hai

so toh hai 😆

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komlika

@komlika

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#908

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

gud night ...sweet dreams...🥱
love u too...🤗

good night mama 🤗

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@simi91

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#909

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@simi91

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#910

geet just looked at him unable to say anything...she tries to take mk away from his arm...

but mk holds maan tight ny his neck...so that geet doesnt take her away...

mk -- mk ..wa..nt....to...sta..y.yy....wi...th....da...da....

geet -- mk come here...we have to go home....

again trying to take her away...

maan is not sure what to do...even he doesnt want mk to go as she is crying badly...but he questions himself whether he has the right to stop geet frm taking mk away....

as soon as geet takes mk is her arms...(guys imagine mk hands in geet n still her legs are intact with maan...like both r holding her....geet trying to take her n maan holding her legs...)

mk starts to cry even louder...

maan -- geet stop it...shouting at her...

geet immediately leaves mk...

mk once again hugs maan tight...

maan -- i'm sorry...its just that...wo....

geet thinking since when he is at loss of words..

geet -- plz let mk sleep here for the night...plz...she is already upset...2moro i'll drop her myself..

geet cant say anything...she cant refuse him...cant refuse mk wanting to be with her dad....

she just turned away n started to leave....with pain visible in her eyes...

mk comes down from maans lap n runs towards geet...

mk -- ma..ma...aap bhi yahin ruko na...me...u... n da...da....

geet with a slight smile on her face says -- no beta...sorry...mama has to so.....but be a good girl n unhe jyada tang mat karna...