-truly magical- maaneet ff THREAD 15 - Page 23

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

🤣
throw water on jyoti and bring her out from her sweet dreams

Originally posted by: simi91

hello my lovely sis sorry late

hey kate.......ur late.....go n read our mini TM 😆.......n.........we want long comments.....as its ur punishment for being late 😡

Originally posted by: simi91

hello my lovely sis sorry late

hi kate
it's ok dear
check previous pages.
do u want summary of mini tm.

Originally posted by: komlika

woh bhi icewala 🤣

ekdam🤣

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

hai hai babaji....dekho kaise dost hai mere...throwing water...😲😆

accha hai ye nahi bola ki utha ke nadi me phek do sote hui pyari bacchi ko....😳

agar scene nahi mila toh woh bhi hosakta hai 🤣

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

hai hai babaji....dekho kaise dost hai mere...throwing water...😲😆

accha hai ye nahi bola ki utha ke nadi me phek do sote hui pyari bacchi ko....😳

agar tu aise gayev ho jayegi toh hum kya sochenge.
kabhi kabhi darshan dia kar .
bol main hoon na🤣

hi kate
it's ok dear
check previous pages.
do u want summary of mini tm.


yes pls want if can my dear &

Originally posted by: komlika

agar scene nahi mila toh woh bhi hosakta hai 🤣

yes , me with priya 🤣

hey kate.......ur late.....go n read our mini TM 😆.......n.........we want long comments.....as its ur punishment for being late 😡
that is promise my dear komo how a yu i'm GF didnt let me yu use my iphone until i eat with them lunch that why but log in early

Originally posted by: simi91

hi kate
it's ok dear
check previous pages.
do u want summary of mini tm.


yes pls want if can my dear &

i'll put my long comment

from mine mini tm:-

Next:-

Maan patted muskan's head sometime then she falls in sleep. Maan tucked her in the blanket and then goes to meet his geet.

But he saw geet's door closed and it's locked,

He want to knock but give her some time , he know she is suffering now more , may be she is not crying in front of him but she is crying in side.

Maan sat in front of the door and waiting for geet to open the door.

Here in side the room, geet try to control her heart beat which beating too fast. Her heart feeling same like when maan is close to her in past. Her heart want to cry . she cannot see maan like this helpless, it's create more pain to her. She don't know which pain is more her pain for these 7yrs or the pain she seen in maan's eyes.

She seen pain, sorrow, loneliness , helpless.She cannot recognize her maan who know to fight who has tremendous pride but this maan has nothing, he has nothing,

Geet punch inside the bed, she want to go and take maan in her arms. She want to wipes his all sorrow but she cannot.

Next:-

Geet falls on her knees and want to cry loud but voice chocked , her all tears dried up. She thinks her all emotion is dead now but after maan come close to her again all her emotion is rising.

But she feels more pain to see maan is suffering from tremendous pain.her maan is looking so pale, weak,She guess there is no one to take care of him, and maan being maan neither tell any one to take care of him nor he will do it by himself.

She takes maan's pic and looking at the pic and thinks their happy life in past.

Slowly slowly she falls in sleep and out side maan also waiting for her and falls in sleep.

At 5.30 maan wake up out side and heard some door is opening.

He gets up and found geet is coming out side and she stop to see maan there.

Geet seen and avoid and said aap iha kya kar rehe ho?iss time,.

Maan noticed some rude, and cold voice coming from geet.

He is looking confused but soon said I want to talk to u.

Geet:-I'm in a hurry and runs from there.

Maan stand puzzle there to see geet like this.

Maan still stand there and then follow geet .

HE notice geet doing some kick boxing and punching hard . he saw the raw anger coming from geet.

Maan thinks I don't know this geet, who is she?omg what I have done to her. It's my fault.

He turns back to left the place.

Next:-

He turns back to left the place.but then he stop and said no har baar ki tarah mein muh nehi phirunga, I'll face it, aaj geet aise baan gayi hain meri wajay se .I'll bring my old geet back.

He enter the place and stand behind geet.

Geet thinks some one came to attack her and with out any time waste she tackle maan and bring him to the ground.

Maan shocked and surprised to see this , his geet is really changed now.

Geet also shocked to see maan there and almost shouts aap iha kyuon aaye ,

But maan who feels pain avoid it and use his marshal arts skill and bring geet down and within a sec geet is beneath him.

Maan looks at geet and said I'm impressed mrs khurana.

Geet's eyes wide and she is completely shocked to hear mrs khurana.

Then she feels their close proximity and it's effect her. Still maan effect her to core.

She close her eyes and said leave me.

Maan:-ek baar chor dia baas aur nehi.

Geet:- leave me maan.

Maan:- ek baar chor dia toh iye halat bana dia aapne geet, aab aur nehi.

Geet looks at maan and now after one sec she freed her and maan lay besides her.

For the first time maan want to laugh to see his wife like this.

He is really impressed to see her skill.

Maan:- jaan,I want to talk to u, pls., for me, for u and for our daughter, just once.

Geet stops and said ok but not now,I"ll come back soon then.hope u don't have any problem.

Maan:-agar tum kuch kaha usse mujhe kyuon koi problem hoga.

Geet ignored and left the place

Next part:-

Maan get up and feel pain but ignored and still in impress mode and think how geet is changed too far. She is not like this.

It's new geet,who is very cold, hard , not have emotions and all cause of him

No, he is again wrong she has emotions, she has. But it's her outside, she want to hide her emotions, she want to hide her pain. But everyday she is suffering.

His chain of thought broke when nanny said shahab , mk uth gayi hain aur aapko dhoond rehi hain.

Maan :-ok and runs to his daughter's room.

He enters and recve a pillow.

Maan bend and said what happen darling?

Muskan:- whe….re, r u went? Me…in iha aap….ka inte…. jar kar rehi thi.I ….want to ..see u . an..d u ..r not here. U bro…ke ur prom…ise.

Maan feel pain in his heart and close his eyes.

Muskan saw it and jump from her bed and hugged maan's waist and said sorry.da…da…

Maan looks at his daughter and take her in his arms and kissed her forehead and said let's go first brush ur teeth. Then we will play,

Muskan happily nodded then said aapne…..mu….jhe… ma…af ka…rr ..di..na….

Maan looks at her face and said sweet heart ur dadda never be angry on u, u r my heart dear. U and ur mama r my everything . with both of I'm incomplete.

Maan told nanny to help her to bush her teeth and help her to take shower.

Then maan goes to search geet but she is no where.

He asked servant and found, she is going for morning walk.

Maan surprised to hear it.

Geet is late riser , it's cause of him she used to wake up at 5.30.

Servant told him madam is used to do it from past many years. Then slowly said pls sir don't tell madam, she is changed during 5.30 a.m. like she is some other person.

Maan feels another pain and completely understand her restless, it's due to him this time he used to do worked out and geet chatted with him.in fact in England also, she prepared his juice.

Oh God what he have done to his geet.

Now tears also refused to come from his eyes.