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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

gk ka plan to mujhe bhi nahi pata...🤔 😆\

till then priya , rakhi ....u continue....
n main jagi hui hoon...not sleeping...no water...nahi to mera laptop so jaayega...😆


mein aapna wala post kar dia
paro jake 😆
ha ha dikh raha hain mujhe😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow all parts super duper
mindblowing love it
love it love it i'm impress
with ur writing guys
this poem for yu guys

Thank You

Janelle J. James
To me you're like an angel, sent by God above,
To cleanse my soul of sadness, and fill it with love.
You are my inspiration and I want to thank you,
For without you, I don't know what I would do.
You've changed my life around,
And turned my frown upside down.
You have showed me the way,
So that I will never stray.
For this I want to thank you again,
For staying close by and being a friend.
And to end this off I just wanted to say,
That if you need a friend,
I'll be there till the very end.


Edited by simi91 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: komlika



Mk-- da...da....
maan--- im here beta....... accha give phone to nanny
Mk give phone to nanny
nanny- hello
maan--suno text me the address.......i will be there in few mins........
nanny-- jee shaab
maan-- dekho Mk ko akela nahi chodna.....thik hai....n.....dont leave place.....alrite
nanny---jee n gives phone to MK
MK-- yes da ....da
maan---- baccha i will be there in no time......aap nanny ko pareshan mat karna.....thik hai
Mk-- ok......but......hurry up
maan-- smiles n cute phone
nanny text maan address......maan receive text.....n.....think its near by will reach in 10 mins
maan comes out of his cabin........n....was about to leave when adi stops him
adi--- sssss........sirrrr
maan-- annoyed tht adi stop him n bc he was getting late.......he knew if he is late then this time no one will save him from his princess's anger...... (my princess said to himself again ......n he smiles..... kash woh meri princess hoti...... par woh toh)



adi-- sssir?
maan-- kya hai....all annoyed
adi--- wooooh.......woh
maan-- aage bhi bologe.....getting all angry for stopping him
adi-- woh client will be here in 15mins......
maan-- khonse client......while looking at his watch
adi--- all confuse as y is maan sir asking him about client...... sir never forget about any meeting......n.....yeh deal toh 400 crores ki hai......what is wrong with sir today)--- sir r u alrite?
maan-- yeah im fine with stern voice......tell me which client?
adi-- woh shimla wala project ke client
maan-- maan close his eyes......he knew this project is very important......n cant afford to miss meeting.......but then what about MK

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

Next:-

Maan turns and see geet is there and anger come out from her eyes. That servant said sorry so..rry madam.

Geet is almost verge to loose her cool then checked and said get lost from here.

Both the servant and maan stay there in confuse state.

Geet shouts at servant do u hear me? I said get lost from here now.

That servant :-so'rry madam'.

Maan:- u can go bahadur and make some break fast.

Geet try to say something when maan stops her and said come with me.

Maan hold her wrist and take her in geet's room and close the door.

Geet freed her and said aap '..

Maan placed his finger on her lips and said gusse mein aur bhi cute lagti ho pata hain.

Geet removed his finger and turns and said thnks for control me that timeI don't' want to loose my temper .

Maan:- geet, go and take shower, we will going for outing today.

Geet:-I don't' have time.

Maan:- not for me but for our daughter.

Geet turns and said y r u doing this when u'll break every dream of muskan.I can control my heart, but what about muskan.y r u coming here?

Maan:- cause I want to take both of u back in my life.

Geet sadly smiles. u kept ur this promise very well,. Like that day u said when u want u'll search me and u done it.

Maan look at geet and want to say something but voice is lost some where both look at each other and thinks about that sorrow full day.

Maan closed his eyes and said I'm sorry. But geet placed her hand and said no, pls, mere sath job hi hua, thik hain but pls don't break my daughter's heart.

Maan kissed her palm and said she is our daughter geet.I know u cannot trust me like before and I deserve it but muskan is our daughter. Our symbol of love, u cannot deny it.

Geet:- I never deny it and neither I'll.

Maan:- I know geet.I just want to say.

Geet:- u don't know what to say, u always'. But their conversation broke by muskan who is banging the door loudly and said da'.da' ma.. ma'

Maan turns and opne the door.

Muskan said y r u he're ?I'm'wai'ting' fo'r u there'..

Maan don't know what to say when geet said ur dada. Want to take us in our new home.

Maan tunrs in surprise and look at geet.

Msukan jump in excitement and said sa..chi'

Maan bend and said yes darling . u , me and ur mama will go abck to delhi in our home.

Geet:- but '.

Maan :- geet, take shower, we will talk later and thnks jaan.

Maan take muskan with him and left the room.Geet sat in the bed and thinks oh iss din ke liye kab se wait kar rehi thi, par lagta tha kabhi aayega hi nehi iye din, paar aaj aagaya, oh din, lekin kuch mehesush kyuon nehi ho rehi pehele jaise, kya hua hain mujhe,


what r u doing??? where is our geet...😭
she still feels something...we know....
plz use jaldi wapas le aao.....
ek kashmir ka tour karva do...teeno ka saath me...maza aayega...😃
KrishnaRukmini thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: simi91

wow all parts super duper

mindblowing love it
love it love it i'm impress
with ur writing guys
this poem for yu guys

Thank You

Janelle J. James
To me you're like an angel, sent by God above,
To cleanse my soul of sadness, and fill it with love.
You are my inspiration and I want to thank you,
For without you, I don't know what I would do.
You've changed my life around,
And turned my frown upside down.
You have showed me the way,
So that I will never stray.
For this I want to thank you again,
For staying close by and being a friend.
And to end this off I just wanted to say,
That if you need a friend,
I'll be there till the very end.



thanks kate
beautiful poem👏
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: komlika


adi-- sssir?
maan-- kya hai....all annoyed
adi--- wooooh.......woh
maan-- aage bhi bologe.....getting all angry for stopping him
adi-- woh client will be here in 15mins......
maan-- khonse client......while looking at his watch
adi--- all confuse as y is maan sir asking him about client...... sir never forget about any meeting......n.....yeh deal toh 400 crores ki hai......what is wrong with sir today)--- sir r u alrite?
maan-- yeah im fine with stern voice......tell me which client?
adi-- woh shimla wala project ke client
maan-- maan close his eyes......he knew this project is very important......n cant afford to miss meeting.......but then what about MK


lovely part
oye adi
maan bhag, iye geet nehi hain , iye tumhari beti hain, gussa hoagay na.
400 crore bahut agaye


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jyoti_l


what r u doing??? where is our geet...😭
she still feels something...we know....
plz use jaldi wapas le aao.....
ek kashmir ka tour karva do...teeno ka saath me...maza aayega...😃



i agree...... tour toh banta hai Boss....... 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: simi91

wow all parts super duper

mindblowing love it
love it love it i'm impress
with ur writing guys
this poem for yu guys

Thank You

Janelle J. James
To me you're like an angel, sent by God above,
To cleanse my soul of sadness, and fill it with love.
You are my inspiration and I want to thank you,
For without you, I don't know what I would do.
You've changed my life around,
And turned my frown upside down.
You have showed me the way,
So that I will never stray.
For this I want to thank you again,
For staying close by and being a friend.
And to end this off I just wanted to say,
That if you need a friend,
I'll be there till the very end.





awww.....thank u....thank u....for the poem....u r too sweet....😳
lovely poem....👏
komlika thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: simi91

wow all parts super duper

mindblowing love it
love it love it i'm impress
with ur writing guys
this poem for yu guys

Thank You

Janelle J. James
To me you're like an angel, sent by God above,
To cleanse my soul of sadness, and fill it with love.
You are my inspiration and I want to thank you,
For without you, I don't know what I would do.
You've changed my life around,
And turned my frown upside down.
You have showed me the way,
So that I will never stray.
For this I want to thank you again,
For staying close by and being a friend.
And to end this off I just wanted to say,
That if you need a friend,
I'll be there till the very end.




thanks for poem........😳
KrishnaRukmini thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jyoti_l


what r u doing??? where is our geet...😭
she still feels something...we know....
plz use jaldi wapas le aao.....
ek kashmir ka tour karva do...teeno ka saath me...maza aayega...😃



kyuon kya kya meine😭.
are geet has all feelings for maan but want to hide it cause she feared to trust again. she feared to loose all hope again, again heart broke. again loneliness.
kashmir ka tour hoga , don't worry.

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