Languished in the Moonlight ! (poem)

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saanjh rathore

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

very lovelt and near to truth poem dear loved it thanx a lot

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shivangi783

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Beautiful!⭐️

Evoking emotions!

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bhargavi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

awesome poem..write more
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

vry well written Fatima 👏👏👏..luv it.. thx for z pm

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Water

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

My comment:

Story of a girl, a woman, a sister, a mother, a wife

Life knocks on your doorstep one day with

Desperation, Helplessness, Obligation, Complusion, Vulnerability

A question arises in your mind, your heart and your soul

What can you do?

To survive the warth of this cruel world

Whom can you save from the misery called life

What do you do when your child cries for milk

How long can you survive without a drop of water

A story emerges

Some people call it S** trade, some call it prostitution

Some give heart-wreching names to them

But what can you do?

The bottom line is that you need to survive

And Desperation, Helplessness, Obligation, Compulsion and Vulnerability

Leaves you with no option

Other than the Poem written below.

The day has ended and the moon is in up-rise,

And the stars shine in the seamless black night,

The light goes down as a smoky aura engulfs,

The starry night is not silent anymore,

As the creatures of dark are on the roar.

The voracious souls now slowly ooze,

Where liquor is dew and vile is not anew,

Girls are slaughtered and fear is in sight,

As innocence is tarnished and lust is in the air,

And green notes no longer curb despair.

The fiesta is now livid and live,

Pleas and cries are spread wide,

As the poor souls are openly advertised,

The wails and howls are now suppressed,

And the night goes cold and wild.

Is life fair?

Only life can answer that question. The wisdom of answering this question comes the way you look at your own life. No one wants to sell themselves, No one. People are either forced into this industry or have no other choice, than this choice.

Rachana

Edited by Water. - 14 years ago

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Shaheda

@Newdime

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

A very close check on one's heart Shabnoor, Rachana you as well. The reality, always bites. World is not always glitter with gems, it could be the burning hell. And people who live in to survive knows better how it feels to get burned everyday. Choice are tough, not always you get to choose it's all you get. I thank my heaven to what I'm and what I have, I do not forget to live on earth I appreciate each and every air I breath, every meal I eat, every step I take, the morning I wake and the bed I sleep.

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Escapist

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Armu4eva
Wow....pretty heavy .... nice one dear..!! 👏 Ur concept is indeed commendable..!

Thanks a lot Tanu...glad you liked it !

Originally posted by: shafyyy
yah ..

very very nice

Thanks a lot dear that you liked it !!

Originally posted by: tasfia123
its very very nice
just too good👍🏼

Thanks a lot tasfia...glad you liked it

Originally posted by: liv2laugh
Lovely poem ⭐️

Thanks a lot ...

Take Care,
Fatima

Edited by -shabnoor- - 14 years ago

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Escapist

@Escapist

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: ...Maham...
Hey Fatima!

Lovely poem... very different topic.. Loved that bit... Agree with you about no one going in flesh trade willingly... As usual beautifully penned down. It's a sensitive topic... Not something with any happily ever afters but that's also reality.. You captured its essence well in just a few verses..

Great job.

Take care,
Maham

Hey Maham,

Yeah it sure is a different topic...I rarely write on something like that but then this thought just doesn't seem to leave me it has a strong hold over me....

And its true only why would a person go into flesh trade on their own will....had a talk with a friend on this some days back and according to her prostitution is mere stupidity, when I told her that circumstances force people you know what she replied, there are other means to earn money and not just this....dunno why I felt that is she really that naive or that she really doesn't give a damn to such a thing and mind you there are several people out here who feel so.....for some lust is boring...whoo hoo who are you trying to fool or dodge common man...you don't wish to speak alright but all this....and there you laugh at me !

Hope these people could understand that there is not always a happily ever after....Glad you felt the way you did !

Thanks a lot for your comment !!

Take Care,
Fatima